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    Something so right – chapter 110

    Story written on June 16, 2010 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette and her mom

     

    They both sat down – Elizabeth exhaled

     

    “Wow – I didn’t expect that as a greeting “

     

    “Sorry “

     

    “Don’t ever feel guilty about your feelings “

     

    Bette picked up the menu “ I need food “

     

    “So what have you been up to when I have been holidaying with Hannah ?”

     

    “Did you have a nice time ?”

     

    “It was marvellous – simply fantastic. Have you ever had a cruise ?”

     

    “No – but its something that I would like to do with Tina “

     

    “How is Tina ? the last time we saw both of you there was place in the dog house with your name on it “

    Bette laughed and signalled for the waiter. They both ordered their lunch and waited until they were alone again

     

    “So – did you get back into her good books ?”

     

    I am so far back in her good books that she asked me to marry her Bette thought.

     

    “You remember why I had such a black mark against my name ?”

     

    “An unfortunate comment about her parents marriage “

     

    “Well “ Bette sighed “ With an unfortunate piece of irony the next day she got a phone call saying that her father had left her mother and she hadn’t seen him for five days “

     

    “Oh no – oh God – that’s terrible – what happened ?”

     

    “Well it is a long and very complicated story but the abridged version is that he had left her mom for a much younger woman. Tina and I tracked him down and there was a confrontation during which we discovered that Niall and his new girlfriend have a baby together “

     

    Elizabeth held her hand to her mouth in shock “That is truly awful – that poor woman – how must she feel ? – what a mess “

     

    “It was horrible and Ti was and still is devastated “

     

    “There are no winners in a situation like that and now that there is a baby in the equation – oh that is just awful “

     

    “It sucks and no one came out of it well. Sarah – Tina’s mom is actually doing better than anyone else. She seems to have taken it in her stride – of course it might be an act but she is just plodding along. Tina and Finn are upset – Tina’s younger sister is angry – well there is a lot of anger floating around. Its hard “

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    1. Hey AllyE, Was Art reflecting Fiction there as Bette described here connection to her father?This was a marvellous mix of Mother and daugther accepting each other and sharing a beautiful moment.I could sense Elizabeth’s love and pride taht Bette had found the woman of her dreams and was taking this final step in completing their relationship legally. It is just the cherry on the top of the cake.I can’t wait to read more of your brilliant story telling.Thank you so much for this amazing adventure.Your Loyal Fan.

    2. You are really on a roll today AllyE. This chapter was really wonderful in that it showed Elizabeth just how much Bette cares for her and how she has grown since them finding each other again. Bette has also taken into account her feelings for Melvin and the person that he is and has found peach within herself without having him in her life. That is a major accomplishment and is a testament to the level of maturity she has gained since being with Tina and experiencing all they have together. It was written beautifully, thank you so much for writing this particular chapter, it means a lot. Your words always have an element of faith and the ability to make a person think things thru before approaching a subject. Thanks for posting.

    5. I’m so glad Bette is enjoying her mother and the idea of being part of a family. I’m also glad she’s aware that Tina might have asked her to marry her because of all of the recent changes in her family. It is very gracious of her to allow her an out but I’m sure Tina won’t need it.

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