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    Something so right – chapter 110

    Story written on June 16, 2010 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette and her mom

     

    Bette laughed “And the songs you pick or end up somehow meaning so much to you are really not cool. Our friends requested “ Waiting for a girl like you “ one night – said exactly what we wanted to say to one another. That we had waited a long time to meet someone so right for one another. Whenever I hear that song on the radio it brings me so many great memories”

     

    “Hannah is better with words than me and I have to say that I am putty in her hands “

     

    “Tina doesn’t need words “ Bette said after a couple of seconds “She just has to look at me and I am utterly at her command “

    “Does that scare you or thrill you ?”

     

    Bette ate a little of her sandwich and blew her cheeks out in consideration.

     

    “At first – when I met Tina – it totally terrified me . I was a lost little girl who was suddenly faced with something that was so out of my comfort zone. “ Bette sighed and looked into the middle distance “It was everything about her. It was seeing her books shelves and being impressed, it was her damn briefcase – she has a top of the range briefcase and I really thought it was neat. It was her car and what she thought of so many just individual things. I was so swept away by her – on reflection it was just the start because I am still swept away by her. She takes my breath away “

     

    “I somehow think that you really want a romantic wedding – I hope your trust fund can go someway to giving you and Tina the wedding that you both want “

     

    “I think that we are both still recovering from the shock of her asking me. It was totally unexpected on both our parts. I never thought she would ask me. I told you that I asked her and she said no. I thought that was it – it took me a while and her having the accident with the fire to convince me that she wasn’t about to leave me. I was so hurt by it but I got over myself because I didn’t want to lose her under any circumstance and I would rather live with her forever without getting married than marry someone else.”

    “Do you worry why she’s asked you – with what you have said about her family and how that row has affected her ?”

    Bette held out her hands “ She is the woman of my dreams and marrying her is so important to me. When all this settles down and she is feeling better and close to her dad again “ Bette sighed a heartfelt sigh “When the dust settles I will give her an escape route – that’s why I don’t want a party yet or really for anyone else to know. She might need a way out and I guess that if I offer it to her – then its my grand gesture

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    1. Hey AllyE, Was Art reflecting Fiction there as Bette described here connection to her father?This was a marvellous mix of Mother and daugther accepting each other and sharing a beautiful moment.I could sense Elizabeth’s love and pride taht Bette had found the woman of her dreams and was taking this final step in completing their relationship legally. It is just the cherry on the top of the cake.I can’t wait to read more of your brilliant story telling.Thank you so much for this amazing adventure.Your Loyal Fan.

    2. You are really on a roll today AllyE. This chapter was really wonderful in that it showed Elizabeth just how much Bette cares for her and how she has grown since them finding each other again. Bette has also taken into account her feelings for Melvin and the person that he is and has found peach within herself without having him in her life. That is a major accomplishment and is a testament to the level of maturity she has gained since being with Tina and experiencing all they have together. It was written beautifully, thank you so much for writing this particular chapter, it means a lot. Your words always have an element of faith and the ability to make a person think things thru before approaching a subject. Thanks for posting.

    5. I’m so glad Bette is enjoying her mother and the idea of being part of a family. I’m also glad she’s aware that Tina might have asked her to marry her because of all of the recent changes in her family. It is very gracious of her to allow her an out but I’m sure Tina won’t need it.

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