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    Something so right – chapter 110

    Story written on June 16, 2010 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette and her mom

     

    Elizabeth was silent for a few minutes

    “You have an eloquence with words that I don’t think many people can come close to equalling Bette “

     

    “Until it comes to telling my father that I won’t be lied to any more “

     

    “You have made up your mind ?”

     

    “I have “ Bette said “Tina and her family and you and Hannah and Alice and Shane and Helena – they are my family and they have my devotion”

    “Especially a certain blonde ?”

    Bette smiled “Yes – she can have whatever wedding she wants – nothing is too good for her “

    “I am so pleased for you Bette “

    “Thank you – I know that you understand what it means to me to declare my love for her in front of our friends and family “

    “Have you thought what you both want to do with your trust fund ?”

    “Depends on how much it is “ Bette replied as their food arrived

     

    “Well “ Elizabeth said “I could tell you what I think it might be but a lot depends on the high yield interest it amassed over the years. Whenever I pulled off a deal and made a profit I would put some of it into your fund “

     

    “I hope I’m worthy of it “

     

    “It might seem like a lot Bette but I need you to take into account that this sum is all your Christmases and birthdays rolled into one . “

    “It means more to me that you are in my life “ Bette said with honesty “I think that I am rich beyond my wildest dreams because of you and Tina”

     

    Elizabeth shook her head “Do you smooth talk Tina like that ?”

     

    “All the time “ Bette admitted “She is pretty good with words as well”

     

    “She would have to be very good to be more articulate than you “

    “She can match me “

     

    “When I met Hannah it was the first time I had been in love when I had been sober and it utterly blew me away and I cried a lot . I couldn’t find the words to tell her my feelings – I am by no means as articulate or intelligent as you and Tina . I would end up buying songs that some how expressed the tiniest fraction of what I felt about her “

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    1. Hey AllyE, Was Art reflecting Fiction there as Bette described here connection to her father?This was a marvellous mix of Mother and daugther accepting each other and sharing a beautiful moment.I could sense Elizabeth’s love and pride taht Bette had found the woman of her dreams and was taking this final step in completing their relationship legally. It is just the cherry on the top of the cake.I can’t wait to read more of your brilliant story telling.Thank you so much for this amazing adventure.Your Loyal Fan.

    2. You are really on a roll today AllyE. This chapter was really wonderful in that it showed Elizabeth just how much Bette cares for her and how she has grown since them finding each other again. Bette has also taken into account her feelings for Melvin and the person that he is and has found peach within herself without having him in her life. That is a major accomplishment and is a testament to the level of maturity she has gained since being with Tina and experiencing all they have together. It was written beautifully, thank you so much for writing this particular chapter, it means a lot. Your words always have an element of faith and the ability to make a person think things thru before approaching a subject. Thanks for posting.

    5. I’m so glad Bette is enjoying her mother and the idea of being part of a family. I’m also glad she’s aware that Tina might have asked her to marry her because of all of the recent changes in her family. It is very gracious of her to allow her an out but I’m sure Tina won’t need it.

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