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Something so right – chapter 120
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“Doesn’t bother me “ Tina said “Never has – why should it ?“
“Exactly “ Finn said “And it shouldn’t “
“There is no way I could “
“Maybe if you tried dating girls and not puny boys with their brains in a beer can “ Tina said raising one eyebrow “ I sleep with a real woman “
“Unlike Finn who sleeps with a blow up one I imagine “
“There is nothing inflatable about the women I date sis “
“True enough – you should see some of the women who hang on his every utterance at the country club “ Bette confirmed
“That I would need to see with my own eyes “ Willow said
Bette saw Niall first – she saw him looking in the window of the café and look around for the first sight of his children.
“Your dad is lurking outside “ Bette said
“I wasn’t sure if he was going to turn up “ Willow said
The door opened and Niall walked in – Tina and Finn both turned to look at him. Willow selected a cookie and looked into the middle distance.
“Play nice – remember that regardless of what he’s done in the last few months he is still your father and he would willingly give his life for each and every one of you. My dad doesn’t care about me – your dad does “
Bette felt sorry for Niall – he looked really scared – and that was a shame – these were his kids – he’d seen them all being born, changed their diapers and watched them grow and now he was worried sick about a meeting with them all. He walked across and looked at them all
“Hi “
“Hey dad “ Finn spoke first
“Morning Niall “ Bette said smiling
“Dad “ Tina managed to make eye contact with him and he smiled at her
Willow didn’t speak.
Niall sat down between Bette and Finn.
“How have you all been ? “ he asked
“I got promoted at work “ Finn said
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go to hell nial, i cant stand himmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
This story feels like home.
Well at least he is being honest. Which is rare for a man :) well in most cases. My exhusband left me for another woman and has never been honest about it. But this story is being written but a woman and this is fiction :)
I don’t understand how Nialls can have this “my way or the high way” attitude. What if Sarah had died and they didn’t like who he remarried. Whould he deny them their only remaining parent? What if something happens to Gemma oar both Gemma and Adam. Would he still be okay with no contact from them. I think he owe them each time to come to grips with this. Finn and Tina have been given their time and respect of confrontation with him. Willow has not and deserves the same. He needs to realise or own up to the REAL fact that he actively chose to father all of these children and enter into the realtionship with Gemma. So now he takes the “That’s the way it is, so deal with it” attitude. I am letting the lawyer decide what percentage of the farm I desereve eventhough I walked away leaving it and Sarah high and dry. What if Sarah had been be fallen in a bad accident with little to no farm hands while he was off securing his new family. Forget parent, what kind of an adult are you teaching your children to be. He is still making a punk move here. Hde says that he is sorry, but it seems more that he is sorry that he got caught and everyone can deal with the reprecussions. Why? Because it’s like that and that’s the way it is.
Niall’s attitude is punk ass. Screw him. He’s acting so stupidly right now that he has NO clue of the suffering he will endure if his childre DO leave him because of the gauntlet he just threw down. Poor Bette, though…she will probably try to save his DUMBass again.
Everyone wants heaven but no one wants to die getting there. Niall is a creep and obviously only cares about his new family. I am surprised that a 26 year old wants this much older man. Daddy issues?
I agree with the girls today, Niall is a punk ass bastard and deserves nothing from the farm. He is right he is a coward and just sorry he got caught. Willow should jump across that table and deck him a good one and kick him in the balls so damned hard he is laid up for a month from it and everythime he coughs he sees a piece of them. Then let him see how much he can use them when he goes home to his little barbie doll. Thanks for posting. Congrats again.
I can understand the anger of the “children”. I can see the point that Nial is getting too…But i can’t see his real purposed on the farm?.. Did he want to diveded into four parts?…Did he wants to sale it?.. So he have something for his son and for Gemma?…This thing is got me thinking…WHAT IS IN HIS HEAD AT THE MOMENT?..Thank you, for posting again.
Excellent update. At least his honest. THank you again for this story.
I don’t think Niall has done anything wrong. He is being open and honest and it’s time for his adult children to act like the adults they are. In the end, while the relationship between their mum and dad affected the kids, the parents deserve to be happy too and they stopped making each other happy.
You know, I get that in his own way he is trying to explain the unexplainable to his kids … but if my father had said that to me, I would just tell him to go f**k himself.P.s. I love your stories!!!
WOW!!! Wrong move Nial!!! Thank you Great Chapter!!! PPS
nial says let the lawyers handle the details… HELLO… gemma and HER family are all lawyers… lets hope the kids all atand up and tell him to GO TO HELL… i agree with the others… i don’t like nial either… he is an ASS… a wimp… lets hope a nice young lawyes comes to work at her firm and turns her head… gee life with an OLD MAN with 3 adult children… or a nice young guy … hmmm no choice… have a nice life nial,…
Stupid move Niall! Don’t give an ultimatum to your kids, except my new family or else. I wouldn’t blame Tina, Willow and Finn if they said good riddance. PPS
Hey AllyE, That was a tough and yet rewarding chapter.I love that Bette managed to get the three Kennard kids to meet with their father and listen to his point of view. Yes, there were terse words however Niall will always be their dad so they all need to move past this betrayal and maintain a relationship as losing it would be so tragic for all of them.None of us is perfect and Niall is now trying to tell them about his reasons and feelings.It was so sweet that Tina happily shared her and Bette’s great news with him.I do still get the sense that Gemma is playing Niall however I hope I am wrong and that Tina, Finn and Willow accept their Dad’s new life and love.Ally, you provoke and discuss such difficult emotions with ease and good humor. I love it all.Thanks for sharing it with me.Your Loyal Fan and Friend.