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Something so right – chapter 120
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“Hey that’s great son – well done “
“More money and better shifts “
“And more women throwing themselves at him “ Bette put in – she was going to have to be peace maker and the comic relief elements of the meeting
“And how are you two ?” he looked at Bette and Tina
“Fantastic “ Bette said “Tina and I have some good news “
He smiled at Tina “What’s that then ?”
“You can tell him Ti “
Tina smiled “Bette and I are getting married “
“Really ? – oh that’s just brilliant – I am so pleased for you both “
He genuinely looked happy for them –he patted Bette on the arm – Tina was too far away from him but he looked her squarely in the eye and said
“I am delighted for you Tina – I know how much you and Bette love one another. Have you fixed a date ?”
“Not yet – its something that we are talking about “
“Would you get married in Carolina or California ?”
“California “ Tina said “I am not sure that this sleepy old town could take one of its daughters marrying an LA gallery owner who happens to be female “
“I have said that I don’t mind “ Bette said “I’m game if Tina is “
Tina shook her head “We can guarantee the weather in LA”
“I am really pleased for you both – how is college Willow ?”
Willow looked up at her father from her deep contemplation of her lap
“I would be doing better if I wasn’t worried that my mom is coping on her own because my dad has gone out of his mind “
Ouch – well that had broken the good atmosphere that had been developing Bette thought. Niall didn’t winch – he looked at his daughter
“Straight to the point eh Will ?”
“Something like that – all I know is that you have developed some mid life crisis and instead of buying a sports car or dying your hair you get some kid pregnant and you take leave of your senses “
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go to hell nial, i cant stand himmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
This story feels like home.
Well at least he is being honest. Which is rare for a man :) well in most cases. My exhusband left me for another woman and has never been honest about it. But this story is being written but a woman and this is fiction :)
I don’t understand how Nialls can have this “my way or the high way” attitude. What if Sarah had died and they didn’t like who he remarried. Whould he deny them their only remaining parent? What if something happens to Gemma oar both Gemma and Adam. Would he still be okay with no contact from them. I think he owe them each time to come to grips with this. Finn and Tina have been given their time and respect of confrontation with him. Willow has not and deserves the same. He needs to realise or own up to the REAL fact that he actively chose to father all of these children and enter into the realtionship with Gemma. So now he takes the “That’s the way it is, so deal with it” attitude. I am letting the lawyer decide what percentage of the farm I desereve eventhough I walked away leaving it and Sarah high and dry. What if Sarah had been be fallen in a bad accident with little to no farm hands while he was off securing his new family. Forget parent, what kind of an adult are you teaching your children to be. He is still making a punk move here. Hde says that he is sorry, but it seems more that he is sorry that he got caught and everyone can deal with the reprecussions. Why? Because it’s like that and that’s the way it is.
Niall’s attitude is punk ass. Screw him. He’s acting so stupidly right now that he has NO clue of the suffering he will endure if his childre DO leave him because of the gauntlet he just threw down. Poor Bette, though…she will probably try to save his DUMBass again.
Everyone wants heaven but no one wants to die getting there. Niall is a creep and obviously only cares about his new family. I am surprised that a 26 year old wants this much older man. Daddy issues?
I agree with the girls today, Niall is a punk ass bastard and deserves nothing from the farm. He is right he is a coward and just sorry he got caught. Willow should jump across that table and deck him a good one and kick him in the balls so damned hard he is laid up for a month from it and everythime he coughs he sees a piece of them. Then let him see how much he can use them when he goes home to his little barbie doll. Thanks for posting. Congrats again.
I can understand the anger of the “children”. I can see the point that Nial is getting too…But i can’t see his real purposed on the farm?.. Did he want to diveded into four parts?…Did he wants to sale it?.. So he have something for his son and for Gemma?…This thing is got me thinking…WHAT IS IN HIS HEAD AT THE MOMENT?..Thank you, for posting again.
Excellent update. At least his honest. THank you again for this story.
I don’t think Niall has done anything wrong. He is being open and honest and it’s time for his adult children to act like the adults they are. In the end, while the relationship between their mum and dad affected the kids, the parents deserve to be happy too and they stopped making each other happy.
You know, I get that in his own way he is trying to explain the unexplainable to his kids … but if my father had said that to me, I would just tell him to go f**k himself.P.s. I love your stories!!!
WOW!!! Wrong move Nial!!! Thank you Great Chapter!!! PPS
nial says let the lawyers handle the details… HELLO… gemma and HER family are all lawyers… lets hope the kids all atand up and tell him to GO TO HELL… i agree with the others… i don’t like nial either… he is an ASS… a wimp… lets hope a nice young lawyes comes to work at her firm and turns her head… gee life with an OLD MAN with 3 adult children… or a nice young guy … hmmm no choice… have a nice life nial,…
Stupid move Niall! Don’t give an ultimatum to your kids, except my new family or else. I wouldn’t blame Tina, Willow and Finn if they said good riddance. PPS
Hey AllyE, That was a tough and yet rewarding chapter.I love that Bette managed to get the three Kennard kids to meet with their father and listen to his point of view. Yes, there were terse words however Niall will always be their dad so they all need to move past this betrayal and maintain a relationship as losing it would be so tragic for all of them.None of us is perfect and Niall is now trying to tell them about his reasons and feelings.It was so sweet that Tina happily shared her and Bette’s great news with him.I do still get the sense that Gemma is playing Niall however I hope I am wrong and that Tina, Finn and Willow accept their Dad’s new life and love.Ally, you provoke and discuss such difficult emotions with ease and good humor. I love it all.Thanks for sharing it with me.Your Loyal Fan and Friend.