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Something so right – chapter 133
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SOMETHING SO RIGHT
Chapter 133
　
Tina was shopping on Friday afternoon after finishing work at 3:00pmon Friday. She had been going to tease Bette by telling her that she had to work late and therefore would not be able to make the dinner at the country club but she had decided that the whole week had been so damn surreal that some normality was what she craved the most. So she had finished early and was looking for a dress to wear for the party. She had to tread a thin line – on the one hand she didn’t want to give the game away by wearing something really flashy but on the other – this was a party to celebrate their engagement and her birthday so it was important to look the part. She was so lost in her thoughts that it wasn’t until she almost tripped over the beautiful brunette that she recognised Helena
“Darling ! “ Helena exclaimed greeting her with a hug
“Hello Helena – how are you ?”
“Just shopping “
“Looking for something for tonight ? “ Tina asked innocently
Briefly a flash of panic crossed her friends eyes – Tina smiled
“Just a guess – hot date or dinner with your mom ?”
“Yeah “ Helena agreed
“I have seen you stand and tell bare faced lies Peabody so I know you are a better liar than that “
“I don’t know what you mean “
“Bette – my future wife you know is a truly terrible liar unless it comes to getting a good price for a piece of art. It’s a good thing that she is so bad otherwise I would think that I am just going to dinner with her tonight and not about to walk into a party “
“You know ! you aren’t supposed to know “
“Helena – its no big deal that I know – this way I can get a nice dress and look the part. don’t worry – Bette has no idea that I know and I expect you not to give the game away. “
Helena smiled “ Bette is very lucky “
“I am the luck one – she’s the best “
“She has gone to great lengths for tonight “ Helena said – there was no way that Tina knew about the “ special “ surprise that she and Bette had laid in place – or that Bette had flown her future mother in law across to be part of the party.
“Think Alice will be there ?” Tina asked
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Damn Bette, bring me an Aston Martin DB9, I’ve been a good girl this year as well. What a wonderful birthday for Tina and it’s one she shall never forget. Having her mother with her at this time, is very important especially with the engagement announcement as well. Even with her knowledge of the party, she did not expect the surprises which is a major coup for Bette. Is Alice there? Hope not. Can hardly wait to read the next chapter about Tina’s reaction to the surprises and the rest of the party. Thanks much for posting this chapter AllyE. Fantastic as always.
I love all of your writing! Thank you for posting. I hope Tina enjoys the new car.
Wow what a car, great update.
Wow! Bette really knows how to sweep a girl off her feet. Damn! Someone’s going to get lucky tonight…
Wondeful update. Hot damn about the car! Love this story. thank you.
Uhhh Bette… my birthday is in a month or so. =)
Wow! Bette really goes all out when she does something. Tina must be overwhelmed with love for her at this point.
What a SWEET ride! I bet Tina didn’t see that surprise coming. Now how will Tina show Bette her appreciation for such a great surprise party and gift??? PPS!
What a present!Great update.Thank you.
Can’t wait for the reactions…!