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Something so right – chapter 133
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“She says that a lot “
“No one can really think that I am bad for Bette “
“No – the two of you are obviously made for one another . Don’t worry about what Alice says – she is just in the huff because Bette isn’t a player any more “
“Bette is happy “ Tina said “She’s never been happier “
“I know – we all know that – really Ti – don’t let Alice worry you – she’s got her own problems – like ever being treated seriously again. What are you shopping for anyway ?”
“A dress – I want to look good for Bette but no too obviously like I am dressing for a party”
“My specialist subject darling – lets see what you will look sensational in “
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Tina was sitting in her robe watching TV when Bette came in – she looked breathless and she looked fraught to say the least.
“Hey babe “ Tina said smiling at her
“Hey – you okay – are you not ready yet ?”
Yes – Bette was fraught – better not push her too far.
“I was hoping that I might talk you into cancelling dinner and just snuggling up on the sofa with me “
“Tina – we have been through this – – we are going out “
“But babe – I can take good care of you here – how about it –how about I really look after you “
“Tina “ Bette sounded like she was about to snap. Tina decided to drop the game – it wasn’t really a game if she got her head bitten off and she spoilt her own party.
“Okay – it obviously means a lot to you – that’s all that matters – I have had a bath. I just need to do my make up and put my dress on. How was your day ?”
“Tiring “ Bette said
Tina stood up – Bette was working way too hard and preparing for a party must have been another thing that she could not have the time to do. Especially as James had only just come back from leave a few days ago. Bette would need some very special caring over the weekend – regardless of the TLC she was probably planning for her. Tina walked across to Bette and touched her face
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Damn Bette, bring me an Aston Martin DB9, I’ve been a good girl this year as well. What a wonderful birthday for Tina and it’s one she shall never forget. Having her mother with her at this time, is very important especially with the engagement announcement as well. Even with her knowledge of the party, she did not expect the surprises which is a major coup for Bette. Is Alice there? Hope not. Can hardly wait to read the next chapter about Tina’s reaction to the surprises and the rest of the party. Thanks much for posting this chapter AllyE. Fantastic as always.
I love all of your writing! Thank you for posting. I hope Tina enjoys the new car.
Wow what a car, great update.
Wow! Bette really knows how to sweep a girl off her feet. Damn! Someone’s going to get lucky tonight…
Wondeful update. Hot damn about the car! Love this story. thank you.
Uhhh Bette… my birthday is in a month or so. =)
Wow! Bette really goes all out when she does something. Tina must be overwhelmed with love for her at this point.
What a SWEET ride! I bet Tina didn’t see that surprise coming. Now how will Tina show Bette her appreciation for such a great surprise party and gift??? PPS!
What a present!Great update.Thank you.
Can’t wait for the reactions…!