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Something so right – chapter 133
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“Bette ?”
Tina said as she opened the door to allow Bette to enter
“Yes “
“I love you “
Bette smiled “I love you as well – come on “
Bette presented herself to a very dignified looking man on reception who made a phone call and in a few minutes a waiter appeared
“This way please Ms Porter, Ms Kennard”
“Come on “
The waiter walked them through a half full restaurant and to a door
“What is this ?” Tina asked
“Just something special “ Bette said
The waiter opened the door and allowed Bette and Tina to step inside. The room was pitch black. As soon as they were inside and the door was closed the lights blazed into action and they were faced with a huge room full of about 100 people – across the arch that lead into the main part of the room was a banner – HAPPY BIRTHDAY TINA !!!
Everyone started to clap and cheer and right on cue balloons began to drop from above their heads and music filled the room . everyone started to sing happy birthday. Tina had known there was going to be a party but what she had not been expecting was the number of people that were all there to celebrate her birthday. She turned to Bette who was beaming.
“Happy birthday Tina “
“BETTE ! “
Tina flung her arms around Bette and hugged her. Tina held on tight to her partner
“This is wonderful “
“This is what you deserve babe “
“I don’t think I do but thank you – you are just awesome “
Bette saw that Shane and Finn who had been standing at the front had moved out of the way and Sarah Kennard was standing watching her daughter’s happiness. Bette eased away and gestured to Tina to turn around
“I thought you might like some special people here “
Tina turned and stared at her mother – this was something she had not been expecting
“MOM !! “
“Sweetie “
Tina ran to her mother and they hugged
“Oh mom “
“Happy birthday sweetheart “
“Oh mom – I cannot believe that you are here “
“Bette bought me the ticket “
“Where are you staying ?” Tina asked
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Damn Bette, bring me an Aston Martin DB9, I’ve been a good girl this year as well. What a wonderful birthday for Tina and it’s one she shall never forget. Having her mother with her at this time, is very important especially with the engagement announcement as well. Even with her knowledge of the party, she did not expect the surprises which is a major coup for Bette. Is Alice there? Hope not. Can hardly wait to read the next chapter about Tina’s reaction to the surprises and the rest of the party. Thanks much for posting this chapter AllyE. Fantastic as always.
I love all of your writing! Thank you for posting. I hope Tina enjoys the new car.
Wow what a car, great update.
Wow! Bette really knows how to sweep a girl off her feet. Damn! Someone’s going to get lucky tonight…
Wondeful update. Hot damn about the car! Love this story. thank you.
Uhhh Bette… my birthday is in a month or so. =)
Wow! Bette really goes all out when she does something. Tina must be overwhelmed with love for her at this point.
What a SWEET ride! I bet Tina didn’t see that surprise coming. Now how will Tina show Bette her appreciation for such a great surprise party and gift??? PPS!
What a present!Great update.Thank you.
Can’t wait for the reactions…!