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    Something so right – chapter 14

    Story written on January 16, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette just loved what a confident and certain kisser Tina was. She kissed like a lesbian should – they could and did kiss for hours. That was the mark of a truly great lesbian in Bette’s mind – she could kiss forever – only sex was better than kissing.

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter 14

     

     

    Bette looked around the room in amazement – she put down her case and glanced sideways at Tina who was also standing looking pretty shell shocked.

    “Wow “ Tina said finally

     

    “I will see you a Wow and raise you a gee “ Bette replied

     

    They were both looking at the room they would be staying in – it was enormous. Twice the size of Tina’s spacious apartment. The bedroom contained two vast double beds, there was a TV and video as well as a fridge in a corner and massive patio windows. Tina walked across to the windows

     

    “Oh Bette – you have to see this “

     

    Bette strolled across to join Tina and she whistled. The doors lead out to a couple of steps. At the foot of the steps was a personal hot tub and beyond that a enormous swimming pool. Behind the pool were palm trees and beyond them was the beautiful aqua blue of the ocean. Tina took hold of Bette’s hand

     

    “God Bette -this is unreal “

     

    “I know – you certainly know how to romance a girl Ms Kennard -I will say that for you”

     

    “Whatever I am paying my assistant – its not enough “ Tina said. Bette slipped her arm around Tina’s waist and gently kissed her on the cheek

     

    “This is going to be really special Tina “

     

    Tina looked at Bette -in white trousers and a soft pink shirt Tina had never seen Bette looking so relaxed – she had visibly softened the further they had got away from LA. Sitting on the plane they had both sat holding hands while being lost in their own worlds. Bette had been nervous – when they had meet for the drive to the airport in a cab Bette had never felt as anxious – this was a vast step into the unknown for her. Would she even know how to make love to a woman ?- She could have sex with a woman, she could fuck a woman’s brains out but could she be gentle and loving with a woman ? She knew on a logical level that she was being crazy but Tina deserved a first time that would be like nothing she had ever experienced before. She deserved a tenderness from a partner who would take her to heaven. Well the setting was certainly right because this was paradise.

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    2. See Tina? It’s like FDR said all those years ago: there’s nothing to fear but fear intself. Now I can understand Tina not being able to find the words for this occasion, but I really hope Bette can find them. Tina has crossed her bridge, Bette should as well.

    4. Woah. This is going to be a really hot, sweet, adorable vacation. I can’t wait for the next chapter. This is the most captivating story on the site for me recently.

    8. Now after that chapter and the last one of “the L wing” I’m SPEECH-LESS…Must be ones of your finest and I know what I’m talking about because I’ve just done a marathon of the L wing and Love and Pride !!Thank you so much.

    9. WOW!!!! ALly, you have left me just in completly in love with the the way you can bring to souls together and passionately. This is by far your best chapter you have writen and I have read them all. Thank you so much for the time and care you put into your stories.

    12. Wow that was filled with so much passion and love. I think it is time for Bette to utter those three little words to Tina. I know she feels it but it’s always nice to hear it especially after some sweet sweet loving. Ally I love everything you write and I hope you continue to favor us with your talent for a long time to come. PPS

    19. Whoa Ally, that was magnificent! Beautifully written. Hawaii should be memorable for both of them. Hope we get the next chapter soon…the wait is hard.

    25. Hello Ally E, Wow Wee Alli EEE! That was awsoem. There was so much tenderness and passion during this first intimate encounter. You cpatured the difference bewteen fucking and making love perfectly. It was the emotional connection between Bette and Tina that heightened their love making. Now I can’t to see how Tina replies to this great gift from Bette. I don’t think it should should be perfect but full of love and learning. Ally, you always astound me with your wonderful writing. This chapter was so moving. Thank you for all that you create on this most excellent site. Your Loyal Fan.

    26. Beautifully written lovestory. Bette’s patience is so fundamental to the story — I couldn’t help but go “Ahhhh” and melt between the paragraphs.

    31. Oh my, oh my, oh my!!! That was simply heaven, although I can think of 3 little words that Bette couple have come up with…but I am a patient woman and I know they will soon be forthcoming…I can’t wait until the next post!!! Thanks for your time and effort with this story. It is truely enjoyed by all!!!

    32. Hello ally, this story is just so passionate, the way you had Bette waiting for the moment that Tina was ready. That in itself is an incredible act of love and trust on her part. She was always considered this woman who is completely insatiable but the moment she encountered Tina her soul was turned on… she encountered her future in that one brief moment and in this she was able to create such a pure and perfect moment in the consummation of their passions and desires… not sure that made any sense… but just thought you should know… you are absolutely Brilliant… absolutely Brilliant. Sincerely, JC

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