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Something so right – chapter 14
Bette traced crazy patterns through Tina’s hairs until she brushed her nose against Tina’s clit. Immediately she had to taste it -she had to greet a part of Tina that she knew she was going to worship for thousands of hours. Bette’s tongue touched the sensitive nub and heard Tina whisper
“Oh fuck “
As she slowly and carefully began to lick and kiss her clit Bette put her finger through Tina’s inner lips -holy fuck – she was utterly drenched. Bette began a fast motion going back and forward between Tina’s lips. There was no doubt that Tina was ready to be penetrated – finding Tina’s entrance she teased her for a few seconds by moving round and round the edge of the opening.
Knowing that Tina was ready took away the last nagging doubt in Bette’s mind. She slipped inside Tina with one finger and listened to her lover shout out her full and utter approval . Bette began to move in and out of Tina while she was also licking and sucking at her clit.
Tina had never felt this way during sex – it was everything that Helena and Dana had told her that lesbian sex was. Her body was writhing under Bette’s touch and when she felt Bette enter her with a second finger she was almost certain that she was going to come on the spot but she didn’t – he body kept letting her climb higher and higher. Bette rested against Tina’s G-spot with the unerring skill of such a lady-slayer. Tina screamed – Bette began to press with softest of pressure against the hard sensitive flesh. Tina tried to open her eyes but there was too great a force holding them closed. She felt like she was floating higher and higher – reaching heights that no man had ever lead her to. When her orgasm finally hit her Tina let out a long and loud moan -there was no energy for a scream – all of it was directed totally into the explosion of nerve endings that Bette had produced in her. She cried out after a few seconds and slowly – really slowly she began to return to earth.
Bette opened her eyes and looked up at Tina – the blonde was red faced and totally flushed with her orgasm – Bette had no doubts – that hadn’t been fake. She suddenly felt the well of emotions inside her beginning to swell up. She had taken as her lover the woman she knew she couldn’t live without. Bette Porter had finally given her heart to a woman and it hadn’t been rejected. Instead Tina had taken her and loved her in return. Bette put her hand on Tina’s cheek finally making the blonde open her eyes. Tina smiled
“Okay ?” “
“I don’t think I have ever been more okay in my whole life “
Bette moved up so she could take Tina in her arms and hold her close.
“I – I wish I could find the words “ Tina said
“Words don’t need to be uttered “
“That’s just as well because I don’t damn well know any – oh God Bette “
Bette kissed her softly on her lips
“I don’t need words “
“I didn’t expect that “ Tina admitted “ Nothing in my life has been that intense and pure “
“You do know that you are gay ?”
Bette grinned
“ I do in fact now know that “ Tina said
Bette brushed a few stray hairs from Tina’s face before moving in for another kiss.
“The best is yet to be Tina “
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(10 votes, average: 4.30 out of 5)
Oi, no time to read right now. Will have to read later. :O
See Tina? It’s like FDR said all those years ago: there’s nothing to fear but fear intself. Now I can understand Tina not being able to find the words for this occasion, but I really hope Bette can find them. Tina has crossed her bridge, Bette should as well.
Nice update this is going a very nice vacation.
Woah. This is going to be a really hot, sweet, adorable vacation. I can’t wait for the next chapter. This is the most captivating story on the site for me recently.
The only word that springs to mind is – lovely. You just dont know how to disappoint either do you Ally? Let the love fest continue:-)
That was beautiful.How does anyone not feel Bette and Tina?
thats what i sound like when i have a delish meal!!! im just kidding ;). that was fun. thx.
Now after that chapter and the last one of “the L wing” I’m SPEECH-LESS…Must be ones of your finest and I know what I’m talking about because I’ve just done a marathon of the L wing and Love and Pride !!Thank you so much.
WOW!!!! ALly, you have left me just in completly in love with the the way you can bring to souls together and passionately. This is by far your best chapter you have writen and I have read them all. Thank you so much for the time and care you put into your stories.
ah….I think I’m gay now too! Thanks Bette…er…or should I say Ally! LOL!
Beautifully written and so gentle Bette has her soul mate. Tina will do Bette the next favor. Poor Bette will have a small heart attach. thanks
Wow that was filled with so much passion and love. I think it is time for Bette to utter those three little words to Tina. I know she feels it but it’s always nice to hear it especially after some sweet sweet loving. Ally I love everything you write and I hope you continue to favor us with your talent for a long time to come. PPS
Wow, Ally — amazing chapter. Both very hot and very beautifully written. And did I mention hot? Thanks so much for the new chapter!
Oh God!!! That was so worth waiting for. Bette’s turn next, right?
Thank you for responding to your fans requests. OMFG.
OMG!!! I LOVE THIS STORY! I love all your stories!! PPS! You have such a way with these two. :)
WOW!
very nice ally… i love it when they both take there time… and their true love shows…
Whoa Ally, that was magnificent! Beautifully written. Hawaii should be memorable for both of them. Hope we get the next chapter soon…the wait is hard.
Finally read it! lol At work of course. LMFAO But it’s the end of the day so weeeeeeeee! Good job. :D
Okay you are just the best… you never disapoint me, you just keep rockin !! thanks for sharing your talent for writing with us
Now that was beautiful!
Awesome – the respect Bette had given Tina has been beautiful.
That was beautiful and hot, can’t wait to see Bette turn. Please post more, thanks!
Hello Ally E, Wow Wee Alli EEE! That was awsoem. There was so much tenderness and passion during this first intimate encounter. You cpatured the difference bewteen fucking and making love perfectly. It was the emotional connection between Bette and Tina that heightened their love making. Now I can’t to see how Tina replies to this great gift from Bette. I don’t think it should should be perfect but full of love and learning. Ally, you always astound me with your wonderful writing. This chapter was so moving. Thank you for all that you create on this most excellent site. Your Loyal Fan.
Beautifully written lovestory. Bette’s patience is so fundamental to the story — I couldn’t help but go “Ahhhh” and melt between the paragraphs.
at last,,,,very sweet and loving, thx, pps
Fabulous chapter! So sweet and passionate. I love all the feeling you put into your writing.
nope no words for how good that chapter was… *thud*
Think I’m gay now, too!!! Thanks Bette!!! LOL
Oh my, oh my, oh my!!! That was simply heaven, although I can think of 3 little words that Bette couple have come up with…but I am a patient woman and I know they will soon be forthcoming…I can’t wait until the next post!!! Thanks for your time and effort with this story. It is truely enjoyed by all!!!
Hello ally, this story is just so passionate, the way you had Bette waiting for the moment that Tina was ready. That in itself is an incredible act of love and trust on her part. She was always considered this woman who is completely insatiable but the moment she encountered Tina her soul was turned on… she encountered her future in that one brief moment and in this she was able to create such a pure and perfect moment in the consummation of their passions and desires… not sure that made any sense… but just thought you should know… you are absolutely Brilliant… absolutely Brilliant. Sincerely, JC