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    Something so right – chapter 16

    Story written on January 19, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    “You are fantastic – I swear to you Tina that my polecat days are over. I just want to be with you all the time and to make love and to share everything with you. Suddenly love songs on the radio make sense. “

     

    “You asked me yesterday if sex had been what I expected – was it what you expected ?”

     

    Bette kissed Tina’s hand

     

    “It blew me away -no I didn’t expect it to be the way that it was. It was better because it was you “

     

    “I was worried because you have had so many women and wanted to be as good “

     

    “Trust me when I say that you were much better than anything else “

    “You are doing a great job boosting my ego “

    “There is nothing ego boosting about what I am saying Tina – I am so into you that its inevitable that for me sex is wonderful. There is a connection – an intimacy that hasn’t been there with anyone else. This is unknown for both of us and I really am happy “

     

    “I am glad that you are happy “

    “I am “

     

    Bette stopped Tina and took her in her arms. They began to kiss -for Bette she had a need for Tina that had never existed in her. It was new and it was totally great – she liked feeling that there was someone that she could turn to – that she knew was there for her and was on her side. After kissing they resumed walking – Bette decided that this was the time and place for her to open up more to the blonde by her side

     

    “I have always felt alone – always felt an outsider. I was the only kid of my colour in the neighbourhood when I grew up. My dad didn’t send me to the local school – he sent me a few miles away to somewhere “more select “ it was the same there”

     

    “It must have been hard”

    “I wanted to have friends and be popular – but there was always something holding me back. Not my background but my personality. I was top of every class I was in – I could do everything – I guess I looked down at the kids who couldn’t do everything with the ease that I could. And they looked down at me because I would eat my lunch alone or with a book “

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    1. This chapter contained so much love it was oozing from the page…The way they fell in love, sealed their love and expressed their love was so beautifully written. You are the best AllyE …words fail me on how excellent you are as a writer.Thanks for a great chapter as per usual.One of your many fans !!!

    2. damn!! Bette is so freaking romantic! great chapter. I look forward to the drama that is sure to come when T is tested by women in Bette’s past. bring it on sister!

    4. Wonderful! So sweet. It will be interesting to see what happens when they get back to the “real world.” But don’t rush them back there, if you know what I mean… ;-D Great story, ally!

    9. Hello Ally, Good thing is every episode is finished and will not be affected by the strike, unfortunately the bad news is even the strike makes it harder for a new season to be approved :(… I absolutely love this story, the back and forth between Tina and Bette is so spot on, I love how open they are with one another about their lives. Just brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Sincerely, JC

    11. Even today, I feel that Bette’s love for Tina is just how you expressed in this story, complete and totally fulfilling. They’ve just gone terribly astray. But, hopefully, soon together. PPS.

    14. Hey AllyE, this chapter was wonderful, they were so open with each other and letting their feeling show, so important. And at last Bette let Tina know how she really felt, she was honest and open with her and that is as it should be. So now that htey have had that ultimate conversation and on the way back to their room, does this mean that the next chapter will be a hot NC-17? Gosh, I hope so. PPS

    18. Oh my, oh my, oh my! What to say!!! You are just brilliant. So, just to recap…they meet, they fall in love but won’t say it, they wait, wait, frustratingly wait, they do it (boy, did they do it!)…Bette admits her love out loud (WOW)…OK…so don’t you think it time for Bette to find out Tina’s real name???

    20. Yep, the more I read of this story the more I think that this was how it was like for these two before things started to go downhill. You write their feelings beautifully Ally. Can’t wait for that next update!

    24. Ally, I already especially loved this tender story of yours, savouring each new chapter like a gift, but this chapter is a pure masterpiece – one of the most beautiful piece of writing you ever did (and I always considered you as one of the finest authors here). One can feel the love – the true one – so much here, so deeply, with all the magical colours a morning sun right after a many-splendored night can bring in eyes of heart and soul. Thank you for such a piece of beauty ! Gratefully yours – A.

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