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Something so right – chapter 16
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“See – you are romantic “
“Maybe “ Bette moved her hand down and stroked Tina’s crotch “You have no idea how hot
you are “
“I could say the same for you “
For ten minutes they sat just enjoying the sun rise. Finally Tina suggested that they should walk back to their room. Bette agreed – she needed another six hours sleep minimum.
“Babe “ Tina said as they walked back
“Yes “
“There is something that I want to ask you “
“Fire away “
“Its something that I heard about you “
“From my number one fan Ms Peabody “
“No “
“So what have you heard about me ? “
Tina took a deep breath
“That you don’t let any woman go down on you “
Bette flushed and looked at Tina
“Who told you that ?”
“Something that Alice told Dana “
Bette sniffed “Its true “
“I just wondered if that was going to apply to us – I haven’t asked you if I can because I didn’t want to spoil what was happening between us. If you just have a thing against it – I would rather know now so I can not make a mistake in the future “ Tina was obviously choosing her words carefully. Bette stopped and looked at Tina
“For me it’s the ultimate act of love and trust between two women. it’s the biggest act of love in my book. Yes in my previous life as Big Bad Bette I didn’t allow it to happen. But this is a new incarnation of Bette Porter. I want nothing more than for you to go down on me. Tasting you has been so good – I would never deny you something that I love doing so much. “
Tina beamed “ Really ?”
Bette pulled Tina into her arms and kissed her softly on the lips
“What part of I love you don’t you get T ?”
Tina smiled “ I was worried “
“In future promise me that if you hear something about me you will talk to me about it. I have a bad past as I keep telling you and sooner rather than later when we get back and we start going out to gay bars and stuff then you are going to have this stuff whispered in your ear and I can’t stop that. All I can do is what I am doing now which is being as honest as I can and telling you how it is for me. Yes I never let anyone go down on me – I wasn’t that wild about going down on women either. I would use my fingers to fuck most of the women that I have spent the night with and usually before they are awake or sober I am out of their apartments and back to my place. Its not something that I am proud of but its how I was. This is a new start for me but there are going to be people who want me to stay the person I was . I love you – I love you so much Tina. Nothing is going to stop me loving you in every way and nothing is going to stop us being together. I want you to taste me so much it hurts when I fantasize about it. You are a wonderful lover and I crave you and I crave the moment your tongue touches my clit and the image of you entering me with your tongue almost makes me black out on the spot. You are the most wonderful partner Tina. Having you go down on me would seal our love. Because that’s what it is for me – there was no love between me and my past lovers – we are different. Never, ever bracket yourself with them Tina – you are on another level for me. I was so full of self loathing before I met you and for the first time I like myself – I like who I am and I love who I am when I am with you. Tina – it would be the greatest thing you could do for me if you take me to bed when we get back to our room and you climbed between my thighs and you tasted me. There are no restrictions between us Tina. I have given you my body and my heart and soul. “
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This chapter contained so much love it was oozing from the page…The way they fell in love, sealed their love and expressed their love was so beautifully written. You are the best AllyE …words fail me on how excellent you are as a writer.Thanks for a great chapter as per usual.One of your many fans !!!
damn!! Bette is so freaking romantic! great chapter. I look forward to the drama that is sure to come when T is tested by women in Bette’s past. bring it on sister!
great chapter.. horrible to see that someone ate page 4 though :(
Wonderful! So sweet. It will be interesting to see what happens when they get back to the “real world.” But don’t rush them back there, if you know what I mean… ;-D Great story, ally!
Hmmmm very serious stuff…no writers’ strike here!!! thx, intense Bette & Tina, I adore.
That was awesome and love this B&T, they are wondferful. Please post more, thanks!
WHOO-HOO, I love how open Bette and Tina are being with one another. I adore this story!
Wow, if they could only be this honest this season…that would be great to see…
Hello Ally, Good thing is every episode is finished and will not be affected by the strike, unfortunately the bad news is even the strike makes it harder for a new season to be approved :(… I absolutely love this story, the back and forth between Tina and Bette is so spot on, I love how open they are with one another about their lives. Just brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Sincerely, JC
I love you you know, you just made the worst day since I don’t know 3 years better!
Even today, I feel that Bette’s love for Tina is just how you expressed in this story, complete and totally fulfilling. They’ve just gone terribly astray. But, hopefully, soon together. PPS.
Love your post. I love how loving and gentle they are with one another. If only they can show more of this side in TLW. Can’t wait for the next one.
Who ate the 4th page? >:O
Hey AllyE, this chapter was wonderful, they were so open with each other and letting their feeling show, so important. And at last Bette let Tina know how she really felt, she was honest and open with her and that is as it should be. So now that htey have had that ultimate conversation and on the way back to their room, does this mean that the next chapter will be a hot NC-17? Gosh, I hope so. PPS
Woah. So, the follow up chapter to this is going to be steamy right?
the conversation on the beach was powerful, amzing that tina got bette to let her walls down, bette let tina in… WOW
That was Ilene. She stoled 4th page to copy it)I admire your story, Ally, it’s wonderful, and I love this deepness of feelings.. that’s great.
Oh my, oh my, oh my! What to say!!! You are just brilliant. So, just to recap…they meet, they fall in love but won’t say it, they wait, wait, frustratingly wait, they do it (boy, did they do it!)…Bette admits her love out loud (WOW)…OK…so don’t you think it time for Bette to find out Tina’s real name???
Lamentamini – either ilene, jenny or bette’s hair ate page four !
Yep, the more I read of this story the more I think that this was how it was like for these two before things started to go downhill. You write their feelings beautifully Ally. Can’t wait for that next update!
I’m glad Bette finally told Tina that she loved her. Now, on to the next hot & sizzling chapter. PPS!!
aw I love it. I love this Bette and Tina. Very well written, good job! :)
Wow….I guess we know what’s coming next!!!
Ally, I already especially loved this tender story of yours, savouring each new chapter like a gift, but this chapter is a pure masterpiece – one of the most beautiful piece of writing you ever did (and I always considered you as one of the finest authors here). One can feel the love – the true one – so much here, so deeply, with all the magical colours a morning sun right after a many-splendored night can bring in eyes of heart and soul. Thank you for such a piece of beauty ! Gratefully yours – A.
sweet ally, so freekin sweet. Md
Thank you for another great chapter. I just love your stories. Keep them coming.
Very good and very right that Bette finally said THE THREE WORDS. Now what was that about Tina going down on Bette when they get back to the room?
funnone-you horn dog!!! the 3 words change everything. thx