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    Something so right – chapter 16

    Story written on January 19, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    “You are fantastic – I swear to you Tina that my polecat days are over. I just want to be with you all the time and to make love and to share everything with you. Suddenly love songs on the radio make sense. “

     

    “I know – and I love you as well”

     

    Tina could feel what saying those three words had done to Bette – she had finally let down a barrier that at times Tina had feared was pretty unbreakable. She was very proud of Bette’s strength of character – it took a lot to admit such a huge weakness like that. Tina had never loved Bette more or been more confident of their relationship. Tina held onto Bette as she cried.

     

    “I am here to catch you now Bette -its okay babe “

     

    Bette finally sniffed and looked at Tina

     

    “You are fantastic – I swear to you Tina that my polecat days are over. I just want to be with you all the time and to make love and to share everything with you. Suddenly love songs on the radio make sense. I was driving home the other night and Billy Joel’s Just the way you are was on the radio and I started crying. When he sings “I said I love you and that’s forever And this I promise from the heart I could not love you any better I love you just the way you are “ that’s how I knew what I felt for you “

     

     

    “You are a real romantic underneath all that toughness “

    “Am I ?”

    “You are “

     

     

    Do you think so ?”

     

    “I do think so “

     

    “We will see – come on -lets sit down and watch the sun coming up “

     

    Bette sat on the sand with Tina resting between her legs. Bette wrapped her arms round Tina’s waist and kissed her softly on the neck. The sun was slowly beginning to grew bigger in the sky.

     

     

    Bette thought that this was as perfect as it was possible to get – Hawaii on a deserted beach and watching the sun come up while holding the woman who you were totally and utterly in love with.

     

     

     

    In such a short time her whole life had just been turned upside down by this blonde woman who was as smart as Bette, who was as fit – if not fitter and had such an open and kind heart. For Bette it was a combination that she was already hooked on.

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    1. This chapter contained so much love it was oozing from the page…The way they fell in love, sealed their love and expressed their love was so beautifully written. You are the best AllyE …words fail me on how excellent you are as a writer.Thanks for a great chapter as per usual.One of your many fans !!!

    2. damn!! Bette is so freaking romantic! great chapter. I look forward to the drama that is sure to come when T is tested by women in Bette’s past. bring it on sister!

    4. Wonderful! So sweet. It will be interesting to see what happens when they get back to the “real world.” But don’t rush them back there, if you know what I mean… ;-D Great story, ally!

    9. Hello Ally, Good thing is every episode is finished and will not be affected by the strike, unfortunately the bad news is even the strike makes it harder for a new season to be approved :(… I absolutely love this story, the back and forth between Tina and Bette is so spot on, I love how open they are with one another about their lives. Just brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Sincerely, JC

    11. Even today, I feel that Bette’s love for Tina is just how you expressed in this story, complete and totally fulfilling. They’ve just gone terribly astray. But, hopefully, soon together. PPS.

    14. Hey AllyE, this chapter was wonderful, they were so open with each other and letting their feeling show, so important. And at last Bette let Tina know how she really felt, she was honest and open with her and that is as it should be. So now that htey have had that ultimate conversation and on the way back to their room, does this mean that the next chapter will be a hot NC-17? Gosh, I hope so. PPS

    18. Oh my, oh my, oh my! What to say!!! You are just brilliant. So, just to recap…they meet, they fall in love but won’t say it, they wait, wait, frustratingly wait, they do it (boy, did they do it!)…Bette admits her love out loud (WOW)…OK…so don’t you think it time for Bette to find out Tina’s real name???

    20. Yep, the more I read of this story the more I think that this was how it was like for these two before things started to go downhill. You write their feelings beautifully Ally. Can’t wait for that next update!

    24. Ally, I already especially loved this tender story of yours, savouring each new chapter like a gift, but this chapter is a pure masterpiece – one of the most beautiful piece of writing you ever did (and I always considered you as one of the finest authors here). One can feel the love – the true one – so much here, so deeply, with all the magical colours a morning sun right after a many-splendored night can bring in eyes of heart and soul. Thank you for such a piece of beauty ! Gratefully yours – A.

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