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    Something so right – chapter 166-170

     

    “That is probably not a bad thing

     

    – where’s Bette ?”

    “Bathroom”

     

    “She okay ?”

     

    “Yes

     

    – she’s positively Zen at the moment”

    “Good – she has been all week – maybe its because of her being ill “

    “You must have thought that the wedding wouldn’t happen “

     

    Tina nodded “I did

     

    – I told myself it didn’t matter as long as Bette pulled through and she was up and about by today “

    “She’s made a great recovery “

     

    “She has

     

    – when Bette sets her mind on something its rare that it doesn’t happen”

     

    “That’s who she is

     

    – you look beautiful “

    “Thanks Shane – thanks for everything –for supporting us and being there “

    “Its been a pleasure and it always will be “

     

    “Give me a few minutes will you ?”

    “Of course “

     

    Tina stood alone

     

    “You okay ?”

     

    Bette was standing in the bedroom doorway. She looked delicious in a pair of white trousers, a white shirt and a long black silk jacket that went down to her knees

     

    – it suited her so well and they had both fallen in love with the jacket as soon as they had seen it.

     

    “Come in “

     

    Bette came into the room and smiled

     

    “You look stunning “

     

    “So do you “

    “Not a patch on you babe “

    “Matter of opinion “

     

    “Nervous ?”

    “No

     

    – you ?”

    “I am okay – a few butterflies but nothing too bad “

     

    “I keep expecting to be more nervous than I am

     

    – I am just excited “

     

    “Good “

     

    For a few minutes neither spoke

     

    – both lost in how deeply they loved their partner.

     

    “Bette ?“

     

    “Yeah ?”

     

    “Lets go get married “

     

    Bette’s face that had been serious broke into

     

    a smile

     

    “That sounds like a real good idea “

     

    **

     

    Elizabeth and Hannah had transformed their house for the wedding. There were flowers in giant tubs lying the driveway as Tina drove them up to the front of the house. Bette looked across at Tina and they both grinned

    Comments

    1. Wow Ally!! Thanks for the amazing ride!! :-) kinda sad as I’ll miss the story from you, but I also feel so happy for the wonderful ending! Again, thanks for your generosity of sharing your great talent in writing amazing stories with us! I do appreciate that so much! I hope you and Rocky will have a wonderful time during the break and who knows maybe that will bring you some inspiration for a new story :-D lol my wishful thinking ;-) cheers and enjoy the day!! ^^,

    2. Ally this story was amazing thank u so much for sharing it with us and for all of ur brillant writing.. I love this ending and hope to see more of ur stories when u get back..

    3. Bette is pregnant by Finn?…this is a wonderful ending!…And I loved the vows..”Bette – I want to thank you for everything you have become to me and everything that I know is in our future. You are my destiny and you have made me happier with every fresh day we wake up together. I know that marriage is going to be tough at times but I know that with compromise the two of us can survive anything. What I have realised from living with you is that a great relationship is built on the little things as well as the big stuff. You know – and I hope everyone else knows that I will always be faithful to you and cherish what we share. But I want to tell you in front of so many witnesses that I will not ignore the little things that can be really basic in a great relationship. I promise not to leave wet towels on the bathroom floor – I know that I still do it and I know that you usually pick them up and don’t yell at me that often. I promise not to steal your clothes and then return them with missing buttons and not dry cleaned. I promise not to get sarcastic when you come in with a new pair of boots. It is true that you cannot have too many pairs of boots. If I borrow your ipod I will recharge it and I will give you the fair share of the remote control. I love you so much and I am looking forward to our journey through life together.””I want to thank you for saving me from myself. You are such an amazing person and I know that I have become a better person because of you. I cannot wait to find out what the future holds because I know it will be so much fun with you by my side. I promise to take care of you in sickness and in health – unless you have been out drinking champagne with Helena and don’t get home until 2am – in which case you can sleep on the sofa. I will not complain about you watching the late night movie even if it’s a movie we have seen three weeks earlier – I know how much films mean to you and some of my happiest memories have been with you sitting eating popcorn and watching movie. I promise not to put empty orange juice cartons in the fridge and I will try and not use so much spice when I am cooking. You are my whole world Tina – thank you for all the good times and standing by me in the bad. I know what we have between us is special – thank you “THANK YOU SOO MUCH ..UNTIL YOUR NEXT STORY.

    4. Ally, thank you, thank you as always amazing.—Ally maybe now you could go with “Love and pride” or a new story with Bette and Tina to know each other, just do not leave us without their wonderful stories – please.

    5. Wonderful story. Enjoyed it and so sorry to see it end but all things must end. At some point in time when you come back to us is it possible to have a SEQUEL. We want tio know what the baby is named and how everyone is getting along. Thanks for sharing with us and rub Lord Rockinghams’ ears.

    6. Thanks Ally for sharing this brilliant story with us. It has been the highlight of my week to read your stories and it will be strange not reading a story from you. Hurry back with a new story for us.

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