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    Something so right – chapter 166-170

    Bette looked at Sarah “Well done mother in law – you just saved a life – and all that after a small ocean of red wine “

    “Who would have thought it “ Sarah said laughing

     

    “Okay – can you two keep anyone from looking for us ?”

    “How soon do you have to head off ?”

    “Tina is getting changed and I am just going to get changed as well. Is it okay to leave our clothes here mom ?”

     

    “Of course darling – I will get them dry cleaned”

    “Thanks  – for everything – both of you “

     

    “You two are so happy – that’s all a mother wants to see from their child “ Sarah said “And I know that you make my little girl happy “

     

    “Thank you “

     

    “You better go “

    “I should “ Bette said “We will see you in three weeks and I promise we will come and see you before Christmas “

    “Make sure you do – now go and try not to draw attention to yourself “

     

    “I will try “

     

     

     

    Bette hurried into the house and ran upstairs to the bedroom where they had left their clothes they were travelling in. Tina was just pulling a red cashmere sweater over her head and freeing her hair.

     

    “Hey there “

     

    Tina turned “Hello – did you speak to them ?”

    “They are getting drunk together “

     

    “Good – it wont do them any harm “

     

    Bette removed her jacket and started stripping off “Do you think I have time for a shower ?”

    “I didn’t bother – we will just collapse into bed when we get to our hotel “

     

    Bette nodded “True – apparently Alice has been decorating my car “

     

    “Did you kill her ?”

    “No- as your mother pointed out that would draw attention to me and probably mean we missed the plane “

    “Good point “ Bette removed her shirt and put on another one and put a hooded jacket on and pulled up the zipper. Tina sat on the window seat and watched as Bette removed her boots and trousers and put on socks, jeans and sneakers.

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    1. Wow Ally!! Thanks for the amazing ride!! :-) kinda sad as I’ll miss the story from you, but I also feel so happy for the wonderful ending! Again, thanks for your generosity of sharing your great talent in writing amazing stories with us! I do appreciate that so much! I hope you and Rocky will have a wonderful time during the break and who knows maybe that will bring you some inspiration for a new story :-D lol my wishful thinking ;-) cheers and enjoy the day!! ^^,

    2. Ally this story was amazing thank u so much for sharing it with us and for all of ur brillant writing.. I love this ending and hope to see more of ur stories when u get back..

    3. Bette is pregnant by Finn?…this is a wonderful ending!…And I loved the vows..”Bette – I want to thank you for everything you have become to me and everything that I know is in our future. You are my destiny and you have made me happier with every fresh day we wake up together. I know that marriage is going to be tough at times but I know that with compromise the two of us can survive anything. What I have realised from living with you is that a great relationship is built on the little things as well as the big stuff. You know – and I hope everyone else knows that I will always be faithful to you and cherish what we share. But I want to tell you in front of so many witnesses that I will not ignore the little things that can be really basic in a great relationship. I promise not to leave wet towels on the bathroom floor – I know that I still do it and I know that you usually pick them up and don’t yell at me that often. I promise not to steal your clothes and then return them with missing buttons and not dry cleaned. I promise not to get sarcastic when you come in with a new pair of boots. It is true that you cannot have too many pairs of boots. If I borrow your ipod I will recharge it and I will give you the fair share of the remote control. I love you so much and I am looking forward to our journey through life together.””I want to thank you for saving me from myself. You are such an amazing person and I know that I have become a better person because of you. I cannot wait to find out what the future holds because I know it will be so much fun with you by my side. I promise to take care of you in sickness and in health – unless you have been out drinking champagne with Helena and don’t get home until 2am – in which case you can sleep on the sofa. I will not complain about you watching the late night movie even if it’s a movie we have seen three weeks earlier – I know how much films mean to you and some of my happiest memories have been with you sitting eating popcorn and watching movie. I promise not to put empty orange juice cartons in the fridge and I will try and not use so much spice when I am cooking. You are my whole world Tina – thank you for all the good times and standing by me in the bad. I know what we have between us is special – thank you “THANK YOU SOO MUCH ..UNTIL YOUR NEXT STORY.

    4. Ally, thank you, thank you as always amazing.—Ally maybe now you could go with “Love and pride” or a new story with Bette and Tina to know each other, just do not leave us without their wonderful stories – please.

    5. Wonderful story. Enjoyed it and so sorry to see it end but all things must end. At some point in time when you come back to us is it possible to have a SEQUEL. We want tio know what the baby is named and how everyone is getting along. Thanks for sharing with us and rub Lord Rockinghams’ ears.

    6. Thanks Ally for sharing this brilliant story with us. It has been the highlight of my week to read your stories and it will be strange not reading a story from you. Hurry back with a new story for us.

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