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    Something so right – chapter 166-170

    Story written on February 26, 2012 by allyemmerson.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=78967
    Author Notes:

    The ones before the wedding, at the wedding and beyond.

     

    “Alice accused you of making me a hippy “ Bette said

     

    “She would “

    “You okay ?” Bette asked

     

    “Sure – I hope you didn’t ask for any sort of alarm call “

    “I made sure I asked that we were not disturbed “

     

    “Good – it might be lunchtime before we emerge “

     

    “And we still haven’t consummated our marriage “

     

    “Is that what the trip on the beach is for ?” Tina asked

     

    “No- well not unless you want it to be “

     

    “Nice idea but ask me again in 12 hours “

    “In 12 hours if we try and make out on the beach we will get arrested “

     

    “Oh yeah – come on then hippy “

     

    The beach was only a few feet from their hotel – they walked down the path and through a small grove of palm trees and then they were on the beach. By now the sun was definitely starting to make an appearance. They walked along the sand holding hands until Bette gestured that they should sit down and watch the start of the first full day of their married life.

     

    “You remembered doing this “ Tina said

     

    “It made a huge impact on me “ Bette admitted “I have never felt so close to another human being as I did to you that morning. We had only just become lovers and I was besotted with you “

     

    “I was besotted with you “

     

    “Good “ Bette lent close to Tina and kissed her “I didn’t know that how I felt that morning was nothing compared to how I would feel about you three and a half years later”

     

    “Its been an adventure and its been tough at times but when things have been tricky – that’s when we have both found out just how much we both want this relationship. There have been times when I have kept us together and there have been times when you have – that shows real character and determination – we don’t give up – either of us “

     

    “I have a wedding present for you “ Bette said

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    5. Wow Ally!! Thanks for the amazing ride!! :-) kinda sad as I’ll miss the story from you, but I also feel so happy for the wonderful ending! Again, thanks for your generosity of sharing your great talent in writing amazing stories with us! I do appreciate that so much! I hope you and Rocky will have a wonderful time during the break and who knows maybe that will bring you some inspiration for a new story :-D lol my wishful thinking ;-) cheers and enjoy the day!! ^^,

    6. Ally this story was amazing thank u so much for sharing it with us and for all of ur brillant writing.. I love this ending and hope to see more of ur stories when u get back..

    10. Bette is pregnant by Finn?…this is a wonderful ending!…And I loved the vows..”Bette – I want to thank you for everything you have become to me and everything that I know is in our future. You are my destiny and you have made me happier with every fresh day we wake up together. I know that marriage is going to be tough at times but I know that with compromise the two of us can survive anything. What I have realised from living with you is that a great relationship is built on the little things as well as the big stuff. You know – and I hope everyone else knows that I will always be faithful to you and cherish what we share. But I want to tell you in front of so many witnesses that I will not ignore the little things that can be really basic in a great relationship. I promise not to leave wet towels on the bathroom floor – I know that I still do it and I know that you usually pick them up and don’t yell at me that often. I promise not to steal your clothes and then return them with missing buttons and not dry cleaned. I promise not to get sarcastic when you come in with a new pair of boots. It is true that you cannot have too many pairs of boots. If I borrow your ipod I will recharge it and I will give you the fair share of the remote control. I love you so much and I am looking forward to our journey through life together.””I want to thank you for saving me from myself. You are such an amazing person and I know that I have become a better person because of you. I cannot wait to find out what the future holds because I know it will be so much fun with you by my side. I promise to take care of you in sickness and in health – unless you have been out drinking champagne with Helena and don’t get home until 2am – in which case you can sleep on the sofa. I will not complain about you watching the late night movie even if it’s a movie we have seen three weeks earlier – I know how much films mean to you and some of my happiest memories have been with you sitting eating popcorn and watching movie. I promise not to put empty orange juice cartons in the fridge and I will try and not use so much spice when I am cooking. You are my whole world Tina – thank you for all the good times and standing by me in the bad. I know what we have between us is special – thank you “THANK YOU SOO MUCH ..UNTIL YOUR NEXT STORY.

    12. Ally, thank you, thank you as always amazing.—Ally maybe now you could go with “Love and pride” or a new story with Bette and Tina to know each other, just do not leave us without their wonderful stories – please.

    22. Wonderful story. Enjoyed it and so sorry to see it end but all things must end. At some point in time when you come back to us is it possible to have a SEQUEL. We want tio know what the baby is named and how everyone is getting along. Thanks for sharing with us and rub Lord Rockinghams’ ears.

    23. Thanks Ally for sharing this brilliant story with us. It has been the highlight of my week to read your stories and it will be strange not reading a story from you. Hurry back with a new story for us.

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