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Something so right – chapter 166-170
“Me too – it will be good to have a holiday “
“Especially Hawaii – that place has such special memories for us “
“You said earlier you had been thinking a lot about Hawaii”
“I have – I got the photo wallet out earlier in the week when you were having a nap and looked at them – some fantastic memories”
“What do you remember the most ?” Bette asked smiling
“So much – running in Mr Huth when you and I were holding hands “
“And we had just sorted out our first disagreement because I had come on all protective of you when some guy was checking you out “
Tina laughed “And that’s a scene that has been replayed a few times in the last 3 years “
“There is no way that I am as bad I was then “
“No – you have got more subtle but sort of being Bruce Willis in Die Hard you could hardly have been less subtle – I remember being pissed off because you didn’t trust me”
“Trust doesn’t come into it “Bette said “The problem was me – not you “
Tina raised an eyebrow at her “That’s an interesting analysis”
“I know that it was new for you but it was for me as well – the difference was that you were used to being in love. I assume you loved Eric and Henry “
“Must you remind me of my time with that idiot ?” Tina said pulling a face
“Sorry – but you did – you loved Henry “
“Yes – we will draw a veil over the Eric thing “
Bette smiled “I didn’t know how to be in love and I was scared. I did things in the early days that I look back at now and realise that I did them because I was so out of my comfort zone – I was terrified Tina “
Tina smiled – one of the ways that Bette had changed for the best in three years was the fact that she could be very self aware. Tina put her bowl down because oddly it was now empty and she took Bette’s face in her hands
“I think I knew that you were anxious – we both were. Some of the reasons were the same but there were separate problems – I was blown away by realising how bloody gay I was”
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Ally, YOU are such an amazing story teller! (even w/the accent! LOL) It is truly an honor to have been able to read your stories! Hurry Home!
Im sorry to see this story end, I hope you have more for us and that you wont stay away to long Thank you.
I loved this story and am sorry to see it end. What a wonderful ending! Just perfect! :-)
A lovely story and a great ending.I have enjoyed it immensely.Looking forward to your next one
Wow Ally!! Thanks for the amazing ride!! :-) kinda sad as I’ll miss the story from you, but I also feel so happy for the wonderful ending! Again, thanks for your generosity of sharing your great talent in writing amazing stories with us! I do appreciate that so much! I hope you and Rocky will have a wonderful time during the break and who knows maybe that will bring you some inspiration for a new story :-D lol my wishful thinking ;-) cheers and enjoy the day!! ^^,
Ally this story was amazing thank u so much for sharing it with us and for all of ur brillant writing.. I love this ending and hope to see more of ur stories when u get back..
Something so beautiful😭had to end. Thank you AllyE and Lord Rockingham!!!!
Dear Ally: Thank you for taking us on this wonderful journey. Looking forward to your return when you are ready.
Thank you for a wonderful story. Have loved every chapter and every word. THank you
Bette is pregnant by Finn?…this is a wonderful ending!…And I loved the vows..”Bette – I want to thank you for everything you have become to me and everything that I know is in our future. You are my destiny and you have made me happier with every fresh day we wake up together. I know that marriage is going to be tough at times but I know that with compromise the two of us can survive anything. What I have realised from living with you is that a great relationship is built on the little things as well as the big stuff. You know – and I hope everyone else knows that I will always be faithful to you and cherish what we share. But I want to tell you in front of so many witnesses that I will not ignore the little things that can be really basic in a great relationship. I promise not to leave wet towels on the bathroom floor – I know that I still do it and I know that you usually pick them up and don’t yell at me that often. I promise not to steal your clothes and then return them with missing buttons and not dry cleaned. I promise not to get sarcastic when you come in with a new pair of boots. It is true that you cannot have too many pairs of boots. If I borrow your ipod I will recharge it and I will give you the fair share of the remote control. I love you so much and I am looking forward to our journey through life together.””I want to thank you for saving me from myself. You are such an amazing person and I know that I have become a better person because of you. I cannot wait to find out what the future holds because I know it will be so much fun with you by my side. I promise to take care of you in sickness and in health – unless you have been out drinking champagne with Helena and don’t get home until 2am – in which case you can sleep on the sofa. I will not complain about you watching the late night movie even if it’s a movie we have seen three weeks earlier – I know how much films mean to you and some of my happiest memories have been with you sitting eating popcorn and watching movie. I promise not to put empty orange juice cartons in the fridge and I will try and not use so much spice when I am cooking. You are my whole world Tina – thank you for all the good times and standing by me in the bad. I know what we have between us is special – thank you “THANK YOU SOO MUCH ..UNTIL YOUR NEXT STORY.
This has been an amazing story, and beautifully written. Thank you!
Ally, thank you, thank you as always amazing.—Ally maybe now you could go with “Love and pride” or a new story with Bette and Tina to know each other, just do not leave us without their wonderful stories – please.
I´m sorry to see another one of your stories come to an end – but what an amazing way to go about it. Thank you.
Ally, thank you for sharing another amazing story with us! I am a huge fan of your stories! Thanks again!
Thank for this great journey with Bette and Tina. I’m a fan of your stories. I’m looking forwards to read you again.
What a wonderful journey this was. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us.
What a wonderful journey! Thank you and please don’t be absent long
Thanks for this wonderful story, one of my favourites. Thanks for sharing.
wow…did see it sll ending that way but what a way great way to end this fun tale. Great story as always and can’t wait for your nexy fan fic!
Thank you for another amazing story.Please come back with another one.
Thank you for a wonderful story
Wonderful story. Enjoyed it and so sorry to see it end but all things must end. At some point in time when you come back to us is it possible to have a SEQUEL. We want tio know what the baby is named and how everyone is getting along. Thanks for sharing with us and rub Lord Rockinghams’ ears.
Thanks Ally for sharing this brilliant story with us. It has been the highlight of my week to read your stories and it will be strange not reading a story from you. Hurry back with a new story for us.
Amazing story Ally. Sorry to see it end. Thanks for sharing your talent for storytelling
Loved it from beginning to end, thanks Ally ;)
Thanks so much for this story. This was always one of my favorites from the beginning.
Great story :) But this needs a sequel :) I want to know more, please?