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Something so right – chapter 18
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Something so right
Chapter 18
Bette Porter was lying in bed just enjoying how it felt to be in a relationship and be as happy as she was. This was so new to her and she was determined to revel in how good it felt to be in love with someone as perfect and hot as Tina. If she closed her eyes she could still relive the experience of Tina going down on her – she could picture the blonde hair bobbing up and down as she tasted Bette again and again. They had spent all afternoon in bed – Tina just refused to allow Bette to move. She had made her come four times – each with her tongue. She had wanted to go down again and again but Bette had been forced to beg her to stop – she was in danger of blacking out.
Bette opened her eyes at a sound that distracted her from sleep. Tina had walked in from the bathroom dressed in just a white towel wrapped around her waist. Her long blonde hair was wet and needed brushing.
“Are you going to get a move on ?” Tina asked smiling
“No – someone half killed me with orgasms “
“Poor babe “ Tina mocked
“I know -you didn’t mention the insatiable side of your personality “
“Must have slipped my mind “ Tina replied opening her case and removing a hair brush and hair drier.
Bette rolled onto her side so she could watch her lover.
“Did I mention that you half killed me ?”
“Play your cards right pussycat and I’ll finish the job off later “
“There is such a thing as a 69 – that way you could come as well “
“Bette – I did come twice – I never thought it was possible to come by making someone else come -that’s amazing. So much of it is amazing . No one told me how fantastic it is to touch another woman’s g-spot “
“Tina ?”
“Mm ? “
“It’s only fantastic if she lets you – you cannot go touching random women’s g-spots “
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First Ally, you never have to thank me for standing beside you and supporting you, it’s an honor. I know you’ve been MIA for a while, considering how often you post to give your readers a story they can sink their teeth into and follow on a regular basis. It is nice to have you back, although I understand the flip side too, as we’ve said privately. Your writing is amazing Ally, that never changes no matter what! *HUGS*
i love it when people act like babies. thx.
Jealousie doent become Bette,love can do crazy thing to the heart and mind. She {Bette} need to feel what Tina feels when women come on to her. Tina has a goal in her life.Let her go there . Bette is doing what she loves so should Tina. Jealous will ruin their life Bette needs to mature a lot thanks
hey great post ally! Of course they would have to come out of their orgasmic bubble at some point. In a way I guess it is better to get their mutual insecurities out of the way in the beginning. they will deal with other people looking at their partner, or as Bette put it ‘leering’ probably every time they go out. Good to see Tina had the good sense to calm Bette down before she left. great post.
Trouble in paradise, but I know u going set it right, right? Love this story and all ur other stories though it has been a while since we had a chapter of L&P:)PPS
Hey Ally… glad to see you back was almost about to send you a PM as I was seriously beginning to worry having not seen any post from you for a while. Missed you like heck…Hope everything is fine with you … excellent update as usally you are the best no matter what the FAN Fiction awards might indicate.Your adoring fan always CG
I’m glad you’re back to writing. Excellent chapter. I was worried about you but didn’t want to intrude.
Bette did’t seem to practice what she preached.But its all new to her, and its scary when you have something to lose. It’s getting more exciting Ally :)
WB!!!!
Welcome back, Ally!! Missed ya! I hope the man at the pool wasn’t the man Tina has to meet with! Bette needs to rein in her jealousy. But, realizing that she’s new at being in a relationship, hopefully she will listen to what Tina’s saying. She needs to work on a serious apology to Tina! Glad you’re back!!!
Of course Mr. Leer is going to be Mr. Huff (?). You are such a great writer that the love and the fear Bette displayed are all so real. And of course dramatic.
Of course Mr. Leer is going to be Mr. Huff (?). You are such a great writer that the love and the fear Bette displayed are all so real. And of course dramatic.
Trouble coming and hope they will talk more!
Excellent update!! love the driection you are going in, this will really make them think and work things out,learn to be trthful and trusty worthy!! :)
Whoa, whoa, whoa! Did Bette just completely go bonkers. I hope that Bette can right herself and see how insecure she is being. Bette needs to learn to trust herself and Tina.
Thank you for a great chapter. It is good to have you back. Take care.
So stupid, yet so typical…really how many of us have acted like that…and on both sides…Pride is not always a beautiful thing!!!
Welcome back Ally! I’m one of your avid readers even though I don’t leave comments a lot! I love all your stories and I hope you would continue to share your wonderful talent to us, your humble readers. I just got a little worried after not seeing you post over a week – it is so not you..LOL. I hope everything is well with your life. Well, I need to stop rambling here and just read this chap, right?LOL..Thanks again for posting!
I’m glad to see you posted.I was wondering where you were.Hope everything is ok.I hope that man was the man Tina had a meeting with.Bette needs to trust Tina.
Oh Bette can’t help it…anyone can make her jealous over Tina. Tina is Bette’s weakness and as we see it starts from day one. I love this story and your update!
i truly adore this story.
Hi Ally, glad to see that you’ve posted. Was wondering why you’ve been silent. I hope all is well. As usual, amazing post.
Do as I say, not as I do.
Bette needs to get on her knees and start apologizing for being a hippocritic ass!!! She can be so irrating sometimes. She better have some big gesture ready when Tina gets home!!