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Something so right – chapter 18
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“Ugh – eh – eh – I mean – sorry “
“Don’t let me catch you looking at my girlfriend like that EVER again “ Bette said with a cold determination in her voice.
Tina stopped smiling – she collected her stuff and started to walk towards the hotel
“Can we go through the front of the hotel – I want to check that everything is ready for Mr
Huth when he arrives “
“Of course sweetie “
Bette quickly put her shorts on and followed Tina away from the pool. Tina waited for Bette to catch up to her
“That was a bit uncalled for “ Tina said softly
“What ?”
“Embarrassing that man “
“He was leering at you “
“He was looking at me “
“It looked like a leer to me “
“I thought you didn’t show any sign of weakness – just play it cool you told me last night “
Bette frowned “ You like a man looking at you like a piece of meat ?”
“No – of course not but that’s all he was doing “
“Maybe you like MEN looking at you in a sexual way “
Tina turned “What did you just say ?”
“You heard me “
“Yes – but I was just checking to find out how childish you just showed yourself to be”
“I don’t like some ass-hole checking out my partner “
“He was looking – that’s all “
“No -that’s not all – he wanted you “
“Like that woman wanted you “ Tina replied back.
Bette frowned “In case it escaped your attention – you are a lesbian “
“So women can check you out because you are a lesbian but men cannot check me out ?”
“That’s not what I meant “ Bette blushed knowing that she was in the wrong but feeling that she was in the right.
“Bette – you have to deal with the fact that you are in a relationship based on trust – and that just showed me that you don’t trust me “
Bette stopped
“In that case there’s not much point in us continuing is there ?”
Tina’s face flushed “You decide that Bette – if you don’t trust me then — no – there isn’t much chance for us is there “
Bette felt tears starting – she turned away so Tina couldn’t see her reaction. No – this couldn’t be it – it could be that it was going to be over before it had started ?
Tina was shocked to see Bette react the way she did – the comment had been stupid and Tina wished that she hadn’t over reacted to it but she was annoyed. But what did shock her was Bette throwing in the towel so quickly.
“I have to go and get changed “Tina said touching Bette but not trying to make her turn round.
Bette stared across the pool – was it over ?
Tina stood for a few seconds just looking at her lover and torn between wondering what to do. She moved closer and kissed Bette’s back and whispered
“I love you but you have to deal with your demons – if we cannot trust one another – there is no future. Its going to be okay I promise – we probably need a few hours apart. I’ll see you later “
“Okay “ Bette managed to say
“I love you “ Tina replied kissing Bette’s back again before she headed back towards the hotel – if she didn’t pull this deal off she was never going to get to be head of the studio. And if Bette didn’t trust her – there was no future. She knew that she could live without being head of the studio but not giving herself the best possible chance of making a life with one Bette Porter.
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First Ally, you never have to thank me for standing beside you and supporting you, it’s an honor. I know you’ve been MIA for a while, considering how often you post to give your readers a story they can sink their teeth into and follow on a regular basis. It is nice to have you back, although I understand the flip side too, as we’ve said privately. Your writing is amazing Ally, that never changes no matter what! *HUGS*
i love it when people act like babies. thx.
Jealousie doent become Bette,love can do crazy thing to the heart and mind. She {Bette} need to feel what Tina feels when women come on to her. Tina has a goal in her life.Let her go there . Bette is doing what she loves so should Tina. Jealous will ruin their life Bette needs to mature a lot thanks
hey great post ally! Of course they would have to come out of their orgasmic bubble at some point. In a way I guess it is better to get their mutual insecurities out of the way in the beginning. they will deal with other people looking at their partner, or as Bette put it ‘leering’ probably every time they go out. Good to see Tina had the good sense to calm Bette down before she left. great post.
Trouble in paradise, but I know u going set it right, right? Love this story and all ur other stories though it has been a while since we had a chapter of L&P:)PPS
Hey Ally… glad to see you back was almost about to send you a PM as I was seriously beginning to worry having not seen any post from you for a while. Missed you like heck…Hope everything is fine with you … excellent update as usally you are the best no matter what the FAN Fiction awards might indicate.Your adoring fan always CG
I’m glad you’re back to writing. Excellent chapter. I was worried about you but didn’t want to intrude.
Bette did’t seem to practice what she preached.But its all new to her, and its scary when you have something to lose. It’s getting more exciting Ally :)
WB!!!!
Welcome back, Ally!! Missed ya! I hope the man at the pool wasn’t the man Tina has to meet with! Bette needs to rein in her jealousy. But, realizing that she’s new at being in a relationship, hopefully she will listen to what Tina’s saying. She needs to work on a serious apology to Tina! Glad you’re back!!!
Of course Mr. Leer is going to be Mr. Huff (?). You are such a great writer that the love and the fear Bette displayed are all so real. And of course dramatic.
Of course Mr. Leer is going to be Mr. Huff (?). You are such a great writer that the love and the fear Bette displayed are all so real. And of course dramatic.
Trouble coming and hope they will talk more!
Excellent update!! love the driection you are going in, this will really make them think and work things out,learn to be trthful and trusty worthy!! :)
Whoa, whoa, whoa! Did Bette just completely go bonkers. I hope that Bette can right herself and see how insecure she is being. Bette needs to learn to trust herself and Tina.
Thank you for a great chapter. It is good to have you back. Take care.
So stupid, yet so typical…really how many of us have acted like that…and on both sides…Pride is not always a beautiful thing!!!
Welcome back Ally! I’m one of your avid readers even though I don’t leave comments a lot! I love all your stories and I hope you would continue to share your wonderful talent to us, your humble readers. I just got a little worried after not seeing you post over a week – it is so not you..LOL. I hope everything is well with your life. Well, I need to stop rambling here and just read this chap, right?LOL..Thanks again for posting!
I’m glad to see you posted.I was wondering where you were.Hope everything is ok.I hope that man was the man Tina had a meeting with.Bette needs to trust Tina.
Oh Bette can’t help it…anyone can make her jealous over Tina. Tina is Bette’s weakness and as we see it starts from day one. I love this story and your update!
i truly adore this story.
Hi Ally, glad to see that you’ve posted. Was wondering why you’ve been silent. I hope all is well. As usual, amazing post.
Do as I say, not as I do.
Bette needs to get on her knees and start apologizing for being a hippocritic ass!!! She can be so irrating sometimes. She better have some big gesture ready when Tina gets home!!