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    Something so right — chapter 19

    Story written on February 1, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    ” I love you so much Bette. I could no more walk away from you than I could stick my arm in a tank full of piranha fish “

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    Bette was sitting under a tree beside a local bar. She was totally lost in how desolate she felt. Was Tina really going to walk out on her – was it over before it had been given a chance to bloom ? Bette was blaming herself and hating herself in equal measure. She was drinking beer and looking out at the beach scene. People enjoying themselves -couples happily relaxing together, families playing and everyone happy and content. And there was Bette – feeling like an outsider – feeling like that she shouldn’t be here – she should be at her gallery -at least she could control that environment.

    She had given Tina her heart – she had let her in and told her so much about who she really was. Tina – Bette knew that the ache in her heart was fear at losing Tina. Fear of losing the only woman she had ever allowed herself to love – the woman Bette had dreamt about spending her life with.

    She was wondering if she should offer to go back to LA – offer Tina an escape when someone sat down beside her.

    “Hey “

    “Tina ! “

    “You okay ?”

    “Not really – I didn’t know what you wanted me to do – I thought about packing my case and “

    “Bette “

    Tina too hold of Bette’s hand

    “We had a spat -that’s all. You over reacted to that man looking at me and I over reacted to your reaction. Its not serious “

    Bette looked at Tina who was sitting smiling at her. She was holding her sun glasses in her other hand and was looking just so perfect.

    “I was scared “ Bette admitted.

     

    “I know . I got annoyed with you because all he was doing was looking at me. Okay so you didn’t like it – guess what neither do I . Bette – it happens – I get looked at, so do you – it’s the society we live in. We are both very attractive and this is going to happen. I have to deal with women coming onto you and you have to deal with the same thing . Its just how it is Bette. I am sorry if you thought that I was saying that our relationship was over. “

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    1. Ally, I really missed your stories. I know you were only gone a short while, but it felt like forever:). I love this Tina and Bette. It is great to see Bette’s vunerable side and Tina with self confidence. Thanks for the update!

    3. Great chapter Ally! I like the fact that Tina didn’t lie. Thank you for planning on continuing with Love&Pride. It’s one of my favorite B&T beginning stories.

    6. Nice. I’m glad that Tina took the lead about the fight since she has more relatioship experience. Now that Tina has outed herself to a huge donor it seems likely she will have to do so back at the office.. at least to her boss. However, Bette’s recognizing his son was a great move. I can’t wait to see how they try to put the relationship first when they get back in LA. Until then, this is a great vacation to learn about each other. I love, love Love and Pride. Its really sweet. It was my favorite of your stories until this one came along.

    8. I’m glad they’ve survived their first ever spat as a couple! I love the way you write a so-utterly-in-love Bette and Tina. :> May your heart continue to brim with love, joy and inspiration as you continue to regale us with your hard core TiBette stories. Sorry, I’m really not into HeleBette but I’m sure there are a bunch of readers out there who are lapping up that other story of yours. Thanks for this chapter, ally!

    11. Ally, I am over the moon that you are going to finish Lov and Pride. As for this story, I love seeing them on a vacation, away from work, away from their friends, foot loose and fancy free. When there is only the two of them, with nothing to interfere or interrupt they communicate perfectly. I love this story, please update again soon!

    12. I’m glad Tina was able to help Bette to extract her head from her rectum and she came out smelling like a rose, actually both of them came out smelling like a rose. Glad you’re bringing back Love & Pride.

    13. Great chapter AllyE. Tina handled the question really well and Bette did not fail her. Good that Bette remembered the young man and his work. Now, it shall great things for them both. PPS

    14. Ally – great great chapter – I’m liking this story so much – but I love all your stories. I too missed you while you were not posting – but I suppose you writers need time away from posting at times. Glad you are back.

    17. I HAVE WANTED TO REMAIN A SILENT READER.. HOWEVER I HAVE HAD TO POST TWICE NOW TO SAY I MISS YOUR STORIES. I GATHER FROM ONE OF YOUR LASTS INTRO’S THAT YOU ARE GOING THRU SOMETHING PAINFUL. I HOPE THAT THAT PASSES..

    19. I am so happy that Tina and Bette didn’t belabour the point of their first spat. Tina outing herself to Mr. Huth was perfect. Two upwardly mobile women, both passionate about their jobs, and yet even more passionate about one another. You just can’t help but want to cheer for them. Fantastic as always. :)

    20. Ally that was incredible, you really showed how fragile Bette’s heart is and how this all committed relationship is new to her, I like this confident, beholding Tina it’s such an amazing story dear, don’t keep us waiting. Thanks

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