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Something so right chapter 20
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Bette looked up at Tina – there were tears in her eyes
“Babe “
“It scares me “
Tina pulled her close and kissed her brow
“I know you are – so am I. All I can promise you is that I am not going to willingly hurt you. I
know how fragile you are – even if you don’t admit that weakness to anyone else “
Bette buried her head in Tina’s shoulder and held onto her
“I am sorry – I am not usually so soppy “
“Soppy is allowed – its called being human – Bette -its okay to have weaknesses “
“I never let myself “ “
“I know that – I do see that in you babe – but Bette – this is me – I am your lover and I hope that you trust me and know that I want what is best for you”
Bette stroked Tina’s hair
“I do know that – I want you to know that you have totally taken over my heart. I love you and I know that I am just scared because I don’t let many people into my heart. I don’t think I let you in – you kind of stormed through all the defences that I have built up “
“We Southern dames have some well concealed weapons “
“There is nothing concealed about your weapons “ Bette said laughing
Tina playfully punched Bette’s arm
“Ass – now what do you want to do today – the rain kind of looks like its in for the day. Turn the TV on and we can see what the forecast is – we could just stay in the hotel and drink very large cocktails “
“Even you can’t drink cocktails at this time in the morning “
Tina picked her watch off the bedside table and looked at the time.
“You are right – I probably can’t but I can eat waffles and bacon – I am really hungry Bette – pulling off business deals obviously gives a gal an appetite “
Tina put her watch back and stroked Bette’s face
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HEy Ally, Good to have you back. I just adore the wonder that is a BnT beginning in your safe and comfortable hands. These gals really connect it all your delicious dramas. Here Bette and Tina are equals in everything they are doing. Loved that Tina is ready to leap out of the closet and let everyone know that Bette is her lover and partner. Sweet to read how Tina picks up on Bette’s darkest and deepest thought. Wonderful and wicked plotting and writing. Just perfection in a posting. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Another awesome chapter Ally. I am so glad you are posting…cause if you weren’t I would have to come looking for you!! lol. I would miss your stories way to much if you stopped writing. Thanks for this chapter. On to read The L Wing.
Thank you thank you for coming back. I am looking forward to the return of The L Wing, Love and Pride and AYNIL.
Hey Ally. It’s good to have you and this story back. I was missing it. Sweet chapter.
Ally, you have been sorely missed, thanks for the great update! When’s Bette going too get the courage to talk about moving in with T?
Welcome back… i have missed ur stories, love them. is so nice to see how bette opens up with tina and how assertive and gentle tina is bette.. can’t wait to see eric reaction about tina coming out…. oh boy! :)
fucking in the shower. ill take 2 tickets please. thx
well I got my fix for the nite:) my two favourite stories,welcome back and I think u know my opinion about your writing. PPS
I’ve missed you!! You’re one of my favorites. Great chapter. Albeez comment made me chuckle!
What a pleasure – B&T at their very best:-)PPS
wow Ally no body can do it better than you do, I really like the way you write and think, you are a great writer and person dear keep up the good work waiting for the next chapter. Thank you for this and for so much more.
You have been doing it best for a long time. So glad to see you posting I love the L-Wing,okay I love all your stories. Please send me one ticket to the shower, thanks
A big bow to you Ally!
So so glad you are back writing. Amazing chapter with Bette so vulnerable. Thanks for returning – I hope you know that you are just a super super writer.
Missed your stories. So glad you are back. Looking forward to many more.
It’s wonderful to see you back! I adore all your stories. I hope you continue to find enjoyment in writing!
Glad your back! I totally loved this chapter! Tina being so thrilled after an amazing coup at getting a backer. Bette and Tina communicating and sharing their fears, hopes and dreams. It is all amazing!
Welcome back Ally, I missed you! (oh…where have I heard that line before)? Great update, I love this story.
Ally great to see you posting again loved the chapter. I have missed all your stories and hope you get back into the swing of things and let us share your gift.
I love this story..in a word, it makes me happy!
It’s nice to have you back Ally. Your stories always warm my heart and it’s good to know that you’ll continue to write. I’m excited about you posting Love&Pride tomorrow. It’s one of my fav B&T stories, just to let you know :)..Anyways, I’m hoping all is well in your life. Thank you for this chapter!
loving the story…
Beautiful story as always and what a beautiful day today turns out to be coz you’ve decided to bless us with your story. Cant wait for L&P. Happy to have you back Ally. Please dont ever doubt how much we love your writing and please dont leave us…
Wow, that was fast! I hit the submit button on the PM and came back to the Main Page and there you were! So glad you’re back. Don’t ever doubt your ability to write an entertaining story!
I’m really glad you are back. I was getting a little worried where you were or what has happend. I’m more a silent reader but I have to say, that your stories mean so much to me and all day I look forward to see whether a new chapter is post. Your writing is execellent, do not doubt it. The L Wing Story is my absolut favourite story but I also love your others stories. I hope you feel better and I really wish you that you can defeat your self-doubts. A loyal fan.
Happy to see you back. I’m pretty much obsessed with this story. Its so beautiful. I love the confident in her work Tina.. and how she is learning to open up about her sexuality. I love how strong yet insecure Bette is..and how she is already planning on making changes that will be positive for her relationship. I’ve checked like every day for this story… so I’m very glad its back.
Hi ally nice to have you back, i was jumping with joy when i saw your stories yeah 2 together,best be reading the next one its my favorite see ya hope all in your life turns out ok
Ally, this story just keeps getting better. Please do not ever think your stories are not entertaining. They are so Great and wonderful. Thank you so much.
That was good and love it!