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Something so right chapter 20
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“Its okay – I am not going to betray you or whatever dark thoughts you have. I love you – I love only you. I have never been unfaithful to anyone in my life and I sure as hell don’t intend to start now. We get on great Bette – sex is — well – sex is simply mind-blowing and more than anything – we are friends “
Bette sighed “How do you know that I have dark thoughts ?”
“Because I read you better than you really want to know “
“What am I afraid of ?”
“That this is all too good to be true – that you have let me into see the real Bette and that scares you “
Bette nodded
“That Bette Porter doesn’t get the girl. That she can pull any woman she wants but ultimately she cannot keep the girl “
Bette was silent – Tina touched her face and kissed her with great care
“B – actions speak louder than any words I could tell you here and now. I will tell you that I am very serious about us. I am going to come out at work because I do not want to have to live a lie with you.”
Bette felt her heart in her mouth – this was a very serious conversation for them. Since the morning after they had been lovers they hadn’t talked about their feelings. They had just got on and enjoyed sex and enjoyed the fact that they were lovers and they were both just sinking into the wonder of how that felt.
“Do – do you think about the future ?” Bette asked quietly
“Only that its going to be with you “
“I remember saying that I wanted to settle down and everything and I thought that you were saying back that you thought you were too young and that you wanted to enjoy yourself “
Tina sighed “Misunderstanding Bette – settling down and enjoying myself are not mutually exclusive. We can do both – all I know is that I am with you and I love you and I mean it – this is an exclusive thing for me. Its just you Bette – I couldn’t and even if I could – I wouldn’t be unfaithful to you. No one can predict the future but I do know that I see my immediate future with you “
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HEy Ally, Good to have you back. I just adore the wonder that is a BnT beginning in your safe and comfortable hands. These gals really connect it all your delicious dramas. Here Bette and Tina are equals in everything they are doing. Loved that Tina is ready to leap out of the closet and let everyone know that Bette is her lover and partner. Sweet to read how Tina picks up on Bette’s darkest and deepest thought. Wonderful and wicked plotting and writing. Just perfection in a posting. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Another awesome chapter Ally. I am so glad you are posting…cause if you weren’t I would have to come looking for you!! lol. I would miss your stories way to much if you stopped writing. Thanks for this chapter. On to read The L Wing.
Thank you thank you for coming back. I am looking forward to the return of The L Wing, Love and Pride and AYNIL.
Hey Ally. It’s good to have you and this story back. I was missing it. Sweet chapter.
Ally, you have been sorely missed, thanks for the great update! When’s Bette going too get the courage to talk about moving in with T?
Welcome back… i have missed ur stories, love them. is so nice to see how bette opens up with tina and how assertive and gentle tina is bette.. can’t wait to see eric reaction about tina coming out…. oh boy! :)
fucking in the shower. ill take 2 tickets please. thx
well I got my fix for the nite:) my two favourite stories,welcome back and I think u know my opinion about your writing. PPS
I’ve missed you!! You’re one of my favorites. Great chapter. Albeez comment made me chuckle!
What a pleasure – B&T at their very best:-)PPS
wow Ally no body can do it better than you do, I really like the way you write and think, you are a great writer and person dear keep up the good work waiting for the next chapter. Thank you for this and for so much more.
You have been doing it best for a long time. So glad to see you posting I love the L-Wing,okay I love all your stories. Please send me one ticket to the shower, thanks
A big bow to you Ally!
So so glad you are back writing. Amazing chapter with Bette so vulnerable. Thanks for returning – I hope you know that you are just a super super writer.
Missed your stories. So glad you are back. Looking forward to many more.
It’s wonderful to see you back! I adore all your stories. I hope you continue to find enjoyment in writing!
Glad your back! I totally loved this chapter! Tina being so thrilled after an amazing coup at getting a backer. Bette and Tina communicating and sharing their fears, hopes and dreams. It is all amazing!
Welcome back Ally, I missed you! (oh…where have I heard that line before)? Great update, I love this story.
Ally great to see you posting again loved the chapter. I have missed all your stories and hope you get back into the swing of things and let us share your gift.
I love this story..in a word, it makes me happy!
It’s nice to have you back Ally. Your stories always warm my heart and it’s good to know that you’ll continue to write. I’m excited about you posting Love&Pride tomorrow. It’s one of my fav B&T stories, just to let you know :)..Anyways, I’m hoping all is well in your life. Thank you for this chapter!
loving the story…
Beautiful story as always and what a beautiful day today turns out to be coz you’ve decided to bless us with your story. Cant wait for L&P. Happy to have you back Ally. Please dont ever doubt how much we love your writing and please dont leave us…
Wow, that was fast! I hit the submit button on the PM and came back to the Main Page and there you were! So glad you’re back. Don’t ever doubt your ability to write an entertaining story!
I’m really glad you are back. I was getting a little worried where you were or what has happend. I’m more a silent reader but I have to say, that your stories mean so much to me and all day I look forward to see whether a new chapter is post. Your writing is execellent, do not doubt it. The L Wing Story is my absolut favourite story but I also love your others stories. I hope you feel better and I really wish you that you can defeat your self-doubts. A loyal fan.
Happy to see you back. I’m pretty much obsessed with this story. Its so beautiful. I love the confident in her work Tina.. and how she is learning to open up about her sexuality. I love how strong yet insecure Bette is..and how she is already planning on making changes that will be positive for her relationship. I’ve checked like every day for this story… so I’m very glad its back.
Hi ally nice to have you back, i was jumping with joy when i saw your stories yeah 2 together,best be reading the next one its my favorite see ya hope all in your life turns out ok
Ally, this story just keeps getting better. Please do not ever think your stories are not entertaining. They are so Great and wonderful. Thank you so much.
That was good and love it!