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Something so right – chapter 22
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Two hours later they were lying with their limbs entwined gently holding each other
“Just when I think that I cannot do it again you look at me or you touch me in a certain way and I’m on fire “
Tina said stroking Bette’s damp hair. Bette opened her eyes and smiled at the blonde
“There are times when I look at you and think – how can she be this good so soon ?”
“Beginners luck “ Tina replied
“I don’t think I am going to make a habit of this – but where you this good with men ?”
Tina smiled “You would have to ask Eric or Henry “
“Yeah -like that’s going to happen “
“I could ask you if you took your harem to the heights you take me “
“I can answer that – no -no I didn’t . With them it was lust and alcohol and two bodies coming together out of fear of loneliness. it’s a very different scenario with you – with you its love and a feeling that we belong -that we connect “
“That we are soul mates ?” Tina teased
“That we are soul mates “ Bette agreed
Tina touched the black cord around her neck – the cord that held Bette’s ring. She hadn’t been able to give Bette anything in return while they had been away but she did have the very thing in her jewellery box. And as soon as she had arrived in her apartment she had retrieved the item that she wanted Bette to have. Tina rolled over away from Bette and opened the drawer in her bedside cabinet. She took out a black cord necklace – it was a Native American symbol meaning “pride” and her mother had given it to her when she had been 16. Her mother had told her to only give it to the person that she knew would treat her with honour and respect. Tina knew that the person destined to own that necklace was Bette Porter. She handed it to Bette
“Babe “ Bette looked searchingly at her
“My mother gave it to me and said that I would know who to give it to. All the men I have date and not once has it even crossed my mind to give it to one of them. But I know that it feels right. I know that you and I are right just like all the others were wrong “
Bette swallowed trying to fight back the desire to sob in Tina’s arms. She smiled
“I will treasure it like I will treasure you “
Tina carefully placed the necklace over Bette’s head and put it into place – she touched the amulet
“It suits you – you have the right colouring for it “
Bette touched her grandmothers ring that was resting against Tina’s pale skin
“One day I will buy you a “
Tina put her finger on Bette’s lips
“I know what you want to say and you said it in Hawaii – I agree but we need to just relax and build something here in LA that is worth our love. I don’t want to jinx anything by talking too soon about our future “
“We have a future together “ Bette said
“I know that babe “
“Does it always feel so wonderful – being in love ?”
“Love is intense and painful and glorious and just the most wonderful feeling. But nothing I have ever experienced has prepared me for being in love with you “
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Love this Bette,so sweet, shy,and very much in love. thanks
Hiya Ally, I was so excited to see another post for this amazing tale. I love and adore it. Great to see how smitten Bette is. I think that Tina handled it all perfectly especially her choice of outfits to welcome Bette into her home. I do get the sense that their will be a U-Hal=ul in their future soon. Mind Tina is playing safe so may manage to restrain Bette’s ardor. I’ll be here ready to read the next chapter. Many thanks for sharing this delightful beginning of the great romance that is Bette and Tina. Your Loyal Fan.
everytime i think i have read every kind of coupling you have ever written you seem to pull another something special out of the hidden reservoir of talent you seem to have an abundence of, really, really great job with this chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Well said and done Ally, I loved how Vulnerable Bette is and how in control and sure Tina is, can’t wait for the next one dear, have a great day.
There are so full of love, adoration and respect and desire its contagious. This is timely with Valentines day where you’re from, isn’t it?
Ally, great one and you continue to show them as everyday people that just happened to fall in love with each other. You continue to show them in love and dealing with the strife and struggles of being in a unique love. Absolutely beautiful and so fitting tha this chapters comes out today, the universal day for lovers. PPS
Sweetest love story of the day.
Perfect Valentine’s treat… delectable as chocolate without the calories! So happy to have you back, Ally.
So beautiful Ally. Happy Valentine’s day to you!
the exchange of trinkets. how lesbian??!!! thx
wonderful…
May you never run out of stories to write. May your enthusiasm to share your talent never wane. May the love and joy in your heart never run dry. Thanks for this chapter and Happy Hearts’ Day, Ally! :)
Hey Ally great story. I love the feeling of completeness that you are giving us. The list of firsts for each of them is extensive. The fact that they both realize it is amazing. They are definately vibrating on the same wavelength. Thanks for sharing.
Simply beautiful and perfect! I especially love how Bette was pining for Tina merely a few hours after seeing her. Thank you Ally. I’ve just read all your three posts. I’m so happy that L&P is back. Please post the updates soon. Thanks again for taking the time to share.
So cute that tina got bette to say she wanted to stay with her… bette is like a love sick puppy.. :)
This was the perfect Valentine’s present. I love that Bette went to Tina when she was missing her and even more that Tina coaxed her into saying she wanted to stay with her. They are just too damn cute!
Aaawwwww…what a sweet love chapter for Valentine’s Day. Thanks Ally. Happy Valentine’s Day to you!
Aww, this story is like having Valentines Day every time you post it. That is probably why its so awesome. I hope they navigate being back in LA well. Bette with her friends and.. admirers. Tina with coming out at work. PPS.
That was beautiful!