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Something so right – chapter 22
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“Thank you “
Tina let go of Bette’s hand and lead her to her bedroom. Bette took her first real look at the room that she knew she was destined to spend a lot of time in. The room was a light yellow in shade – there were vertical blinds over a huge window. A TV sat on wooden cabinet opposite the bed, an expensive stereo was close to Tina’s bed. The duvet was thrown back and it was obvious that Bette had got Tina out of bed
“Did I wake up ?”
“Another ten minutes and you would have “
“Oh — sorry “
“Bette – don’t apologise – its fine “
Tina walked over to her bed still holding Bette’s hand. She stroked Bette’s face
“I love falling asleep holding you -nothing has ever felt so good for me. You feel so soft and so tender. I love you Bette – there is no way I would tell you that you couldn’t come over and sleep with me. Maybe I should have invited you “
“We didn’t talk about it “
“Well that’s something that we do have to do – I don’t want you feeling that you cannot just hold out your hand when you need me. That has to be what love – what our love is about “
“Our love is also about something else “
“Oh yes ?”
Bette pushed Tina onto the bed
“Its about how much I freaking well desire you – you know I love your body and you are so casual about being naked. That just turns me on – I have never craved another woman’s body the way I crave yours. I am utterly addicted to you – its your kind heart and smile and how smart you are but right at this second of time – its how much I want to be inside of you “
“You want it – you take it “ Tina teased
“I have every intention of “ Bette got onto the bed and began the journey that she wanted to take every day for the rest of her life- taking Tina to heaven
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Love this Bette,so sweet, shy,and very much in love. thanks
Hiya Ally, I was so excited to see another post for this amazing tale. I love and adore it. Great to see how smitten Bette is. I think that Tina handled it all perfectly especially her choice of outfits to welcome Bette into her home. I do get the sense that their will be a U-Hal=ul in their future soon. Mind Tina is playing safe so may manage to restrain Bette’s ardor. I’ll be here ready to read the next chapter. Many thanks for sharing this delightful beginning of the great romance that is Bette and Tina. Your Loyal Fan.
everytime i think i have read every kind of coupling you have ever written you seem to pull another something special out of the hidden reservoir of talent you seem to have an abundence of, really, really great job with this chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Well said and done Ally, I loved how Vulnerable Bette is and how in control and sure Tina is, can’t wait for the next one dear, have a great day.
There are so full of love, adoration and respect and desire its contagious. This is timely with Valentines day where you’re from, isn’t it?
Ally, great one and you continue to show them as everyday people that just happened to fall in love with each other. You continue to show them in love and dealing with the strife and struggles of being in a unique love. Absolutely beautiful and so fitting tha this chapters comes out today, the universal day for lovers. PPS
Sweetest love story of the day.
Perfect Valentine’s treat… delectable as chocolate without the calories! So happy to have you back, Ally.
So beautiful Ally. Happy Valentine’s day to you!
the exchange of trinkets. how lesbian??!!! thx
wonderful…
May you never run out of stories to write. May your enthusiasm to share your talent never wane. May the love and joy in your heart never run dry. Thanks for this chapter and Happy Hearts’ Day, Ally! :)
Hey Ally great story. I love the feeling of completeness that you are giving us. The list of firsts for each of them is extensive. The fact that they both realize it is amazing. They are definately vibrating on the same wavelength. Thanks for sharing.
Simply beautiful and perfect! I especially love how Bette was pining for Tina merely a few hours after seeing her. Thank you Ally. I’ve just read all your three posts. I’m so happy that L&P is back. Please post the updates soon. Thanks again for taking the time to share.
So cute that tina got bette to say she wanted to stay with her… bette is like a love sick puppy.. :)
This was the perfect Valentine’s present. I love that Bette went to Tina when she was missing her and even more that Tina coaxed her into saying she wanted to stay with her. They are just too damn cute!
Aaawwwww…what a sweet love chapter for Valentine’s Day. Thanks Ally. Happy Valentine’s Day to you!
Aww, this story is like having Valentines Day every time you post it. That is probably why its so awesome. I hope they navigate being back in LA well. Bette with her friends and.. admirers. Tina with coming out at work. PPS.
That was beautiful!