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Something so right – chapter 24
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“Back from Hawaii on your little vacation I see“
Typical Tina thought -typical Eric remark – dumb and ill considered
“Yes I am back from my working holiday where I pulled off a major deal that keeps us all in work for a few more months “
“Any one of us could have done it – you got lucky “
So this was going to be his approach -The Arsehole
“Well we will never know if you could have pulled off the deal or not because I did the deal and I get the kudos and you don’t “
“You done that storyboard for the music video ?“
Tina knew that Eric had engineered for her to get that task thinking it was the poison chalice to her as she hated doing music videos. Tina glanced at him -taking in the flowers from her wonderful lover as an extra confidence booster.
“Yes – Henry loves it -he’s taking it to Aaron and the band tomorrow “
“You weren’t supposed to hand it to Henry yourself ” he said hurriedly
“Why ?” Tina deliberately slowed down her reactions giving herself time to consider her words
“I wanted to check it out “
Tina smiled “ What you mean is that you wanted to claim any credit in case I came up with a good idea but preferring to shift all the blame onto me if my idea was a turkey ?”
Tina saw by the way his face flushed that she had been spot on. She had caught Eric out being a devious bastard
“No – I – I wanted to make sure that our ideas weren’t too similar “
“Meaning that you got it handed to me expecting my idea to be shit so that when your shining eighth wonder of the world was put up against it you looked the blue eyed boy while I was the class dunce – how am I doing ?”
“Crap “
“Yes Eric – yes Eric you are indeed crap. Now I am busy so why don’t you run along ?”
He caught sight of the flowers
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So they so need to go to liquid for tina to get over this little problem, she can’t hide forever. :)
my vote. she needs to go to the bar. thx
They need to go to Liquid officially as a couple.
Hello Ally, I absolutely love this story… there is just something about how these two relate within your beautiful words that just seems so very real… like I have met them before. I love how Tina reacts to Bette’s past… the green she sees is just so perfect and I would love to see her in a throw down with someone showing the world just who owns Bette’s heart… I can just see how turned on Bette would be after that… “ummm T… yeah we gotta go… there’s a fire that needs your attention… like NOW!!!” hehe… love it. Keep em coming… any chance that you might consider doing a sequel to “Let It Be” I loved that story completely and would love to see you continue with it… and of course I love “Love and Pride” and well ummm “The L Wing” and ummmm… well you get the picture… pleeasssee… :P… Sincerely, JC
Hey AllyE, Agree that this story just gets better adn better. Love how Bette and Tina are just getting to know enough each as their love develops and gets stronger at each turn. Yes, they still have issues; Bette’s jealousy and Tina’s insecureness, but they are trying to work through them. Communication is key here and boy these gals can connect on so many levels, Brilliant and a real joy to read. I ADORE IT! Many, many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Why is Tina being so afraid? I mean how bad can it be, she will get people hitting on both of them everywhere and if that place was Bette’s territory as she says it is then she can handle whatever might happen there, it will happen no matter how long she push it, so get real Tee. I love this story Ally, you are brilliant. post soon dear. Thankx
No one will know they are a couple unless they show them. Love this story!
Loved this chapter. :)
Tina needs to go to Liquid and sho all the others that she is the soul owner of the QUEEN of the Jungle…..thanks
AllyE, sorry for being a silent reader. All I can say you sure know how to make it it difficult for me to choose which one I like the best. So I am just going to say all of them -).I love this story so full of tender moments between two soul mates. So keep the story coming … well actually keep them all coming.Thanks for sharing
you’re always good, Ally
Well, I am glad that Tina is holding out on tell Eric the Ass…I think it’s more fun this way. Also, Tina MUST grow up and know that Bette loves her and that she is going to take care of her at Liquid. She needs more self-confidence.
Ally, Loved the last line – You just Rock!
Fabulous update Ally. Yep, Tina needs to go to the bar and get over this obsession she has. She needs to see that Bette only has eyes for her. This is such a good story!
I love this story more with every post.
Top of the top as usual. Thanks Ally.
Love this story. Love that Bette gave James more responsibilities. I love that Tina is shining at work. I think they need to go to Liquid just to shake it off. Its the past. However, Tina will never be comfortable with it until they officially show everyone that Bette has moved on..and up. PPS.
Who would hold a boundry when it comes to Bette, thats just insane!:D Bring on Milk.
ok T needs to tuffen up over Eric and Liquid…love thus story.
I swear that I love this story more every time I read it. I am getting a kick out of Bette giving James more responsibility and Tina being the big star at work. And after it all they come home to one another (though they haven’t officially decided the home thing yet). :)
This is great. eric is an ass and Bette should kich his ass!