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    Something so right – chapter 24

     

    “Would that be to spend more time in the gym because I keep beating you in things and you are such a bad loser ?”

     

    Bette laughed “ One of the benefits is being able to go to the gym. The plan was to go in the morning but that seems to be a non-starter as my early mornings are all about satisfying you “

     

    “Am I wearing you out ? “Tina teased

     

    “Not at all – I am more than up for the challenge “

     

    “Good – because I want an early night tonight “

    “Is that to make up for you abusing me at 5am ?”

    “I didn’t notice much abusing going on “

     

    “Funny how two people’s interpretation of events is always different – its called a non linear structure in movie making “

     

    Bette sipped her wine and looked at the blonde

     

    “When are you thinking of telling Eric ?”

     

    Tina brushed her hair back “ I don’t know. He is being such an ass at the moment that I am tempted not to tell him but then I think about it and that isn’t fair “

    “Neither is trying to stiff you on a work project “

     

    “Well I don’t think he is going to try that for a while – he has been left to look silly and I am sure that it will get back to Aaron who isn’t going to be impressed with him acting like he is. Even though Henry is laughing it off he’s not going to be telling Aaron any positive stories about Eric.”

    “So are you thinking of not telling him ?”

    “I am going to see how it plays day by day. If I get the chance I am going to tell him but not when he is acting the way he is at the moment “”

     

    “I’ll try not to phone you when he is around “

    “You can call me whenever you want “

    “Good “ Bette kissed Tina again

     

    “You free for lunch this week. If you are I can juggle my schedule “

     

    Bette smiled “ Tomorrow is no can do, Wednesday I am being taken to lunch by my bank manager who is very happy with me – Thursday or Friday ?”

    Comments

    1. Hello Ally, I absolutely love this story… there is just something about how these two relate within your beautiful words that just seems so very real… like I have met them before. I love how Tina reacts to Bette’s past… the green she sees is just so perfect and I would love to see her in a throw down with someone showing the world just who owns Bette’s heart… I can just see how turned on Bette would be after that… “ummm T… yeah we gotta go… there’s a fire that needs your attention… like NOW!!!” hehe… love it. Keep em coming… any chance that you might consider doing a sequel to “Let It Be” I loved that story completely and would love to see you continue with it… and of course I love “Love and Pride” and well ummm “The L Wing” and ummmm… well you get the picture… pleeasssee… :P… Sincerely, JC

    2. Hey AllyE, Agree that this story just gets better adn better. Love how Bette and Tina are just getting to know enough each as their love develops and gets stronger at each turn. Yes, they still have issues; Bette’s jealousy and Tina’s insecureness, but they are trying to work through them. Communication is key here and boy these gals can connect on so many levels, Brilliant and a real joy to read. I ADORE IT! Many, many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    3. Why is Tina being so afraid? I mean how bad can it be, she will get people hitting on both of them everywhere and if that place was Bette’s territory as she says it is then she can handle whatever might happen there, it will happen no matter how long she push it, so get real Tee. I love this story Ally, you are brilliant. post soon dear. Thankx

    4. AllyE, sorry for being a silent reader. All I can say you sure know how to make it it difficult for me to choose which one I like the best. So I am just going to say all of them -).I love this story so full of tender moments between two soul mates. So keep the story coming … well actually keep them all coming.Thanks for sharing

    5. Well, I am glad that Tina is holding out on tell Eric the Ass…I think it’s more fun this way. Also, Tina MUST grow up and know that Bette loves her and that she is going to take care of her at Liquid. She needs more self-confidence.

    6. Fabulous update Ally. Yep, Tina needs to go to the bar and get over this obsession she has. She needs to see that Bette only has eyes for her. This is such a good story!

    7. Love this story. Love that Bette gave James more responsibilities. I love that Tina is shining at work. I think they need to go to Liquid just to shake it off. Its the past. However, Tina will never be comfortable with it until they officially show everyone that Bette has moved on..and up. PPS.

    8. I swear that I love this story more every time I read it. I am getting a kick out of Bette giving James more responsibility and Tina being the big star at work. And after it all they come home to one another (though they haven’t officially decided the home thing yet). :)

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