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Something so right – chapter 27
Tina looked at Bette and grinned at her
“You okay ?” she asked softly
Bette nodded
“So – Bette – what’s Tina like as a learner ?” Alice asked
Bette was still looking at Tina – the others all grinned
“Oye Porter “
Bette looked at Alice “ Yes Alice – what’s the matter ?”
Shane and Dana both laughed – Helena shook her head – hopeless
“God – now there is something that I didn’t know “
“There is a lot of things that you don’t know “ Bette said smiling
“And there is something that I can learn from you two “
“Did you know that all polar bears are left handed ?” Tina ask3d determined to have some fun at Alice’s
expense
“What ?”
“Polar bears – all of them are left handed – I am great at trivia quizzes “
“You will get on great with the Queen of all things trivial “ Shane commented about Alice
“And did you also know that prairie dogs are actually rodents “ Tina said
Alice looked at Tina
“What planet are you on Tina ?“
“Nothing – I was just sharing with you some of the things that you didn’t know “
The others all laughed – Alice looked at the others
“Don’t damn well encourage her – I was trying to make a point “
“Sorry – carry on Alice “ Tina looked at Helena
“You are really good at trivia Helena “
Tina winked
“Yes – well I know that bees are more likely to sting you on a windy day – did you know that Shane ?””
“No “ Shane laughed “ I did once read that the longest word you can get out of the top letters of a
typewriter keyboard is the word typewriter – do you think that’s true ?”
“Mm” Helena and Tina made a great play of pretending to consider what Shane had just said
“I must test that one out at work “ Tina said
“Potty -the whole lot of you are potty – do you want to join in this game Dana ?”
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Sorry you’re not feeling well just when my internet and I are back among the living. Still very tired but almost caught up-with school that is. I may not get around to catching up on all the stories. Really, I don’t understand why this is so traumatic for Bette. She’s a big girl, so is Tina. As Nancy Reagan used to say “just say no”. No need to be rude (unless someone refuses to take no for an answer) and just carry on.
Sorry to hear you’re under the wx…but I head massive amounts of writing can help clear your head…..just kidding. Hot tea and warm comforter!!!
sorry you aren’t feeling well, i hope you feel better soon ! But thank you for the update i love this story like all your others ofcourse
*waves at funnyone* glad to see you up and running. ill call this weekend. im working. will be bored to fucking tears. ally, sorry your sick. thx for the update.
Allye-hope you feel better soon. Thanks for the update. Hopefully, Bette will figure out she can still put on a happy face to the girls in the bar and tell them at the same time she’s spoken for!!!
Get well soon Ally. THanks for the chapter though you are not feeling well. Feel better and I’ll be looking forward to the next one.
Get well soon! Love this story
I was searching for a word to describe Bette’s behavior and Helena uttered it perfectly. Wimp. She gotta shake it off. Get well Ally
Well, I always said that Tina is Bette’s Achilles Heel and you just proved it….again! Feel better fast Ally, we can’t do without you.
Hope you feel better soon. OK let Bette step up she has always taken or not any woman she wanted so she needs to be as smooth and cool as ever and turn them down with you are not what I am looking for tonight or any time soon, so step off B. Post as soon as you can.
Ally – Hope you feel better soon great chapter, can’t believe you can write when you are under the weather. I’m sure Bette can learn to say no graciously – she’s so cute in her besotted state.
I hope you feel better soon, thanks for this chapter, Bette really doesn’t know how to handle these women well, she should just chill. Thanks honey. Post as soon.
I agree with Helena, Bette needs to step up. She needs to be all Alpha and drag Tina onto the dance floor and have her way with her in the middle of the place…make her mark. And it would be helpful if she didn’t let go of Tina’s hand and did lots of smiling…like she was having a good time…
Sorry you aren’t feeling well. Thanks for the chapter. I’ve been waiting on it because I’m such a fan of the story. I hope Bette grows some balls.. so that she stands up to her harem. All she really has to do is be firm a few times and people will get the drift. Love how in love our couple is.. feel better and I’ll be looking forward to the next one.
Hopefully Bette will get herself figured out before a brawl breaks out! Feel better soon Ally!
Awww u poor thg. Hope u’ll get better soon. Thank you thank you thank you for getting out of bed to grace us with this wonderful story. Dont really like Bette being a wimp. Tina loves Bette for who she is and not for being all awkward coz she’s surrounded by woman. Hope she’ll step up soon and get it up and show Tina that she can handle being in love. Thanks again for the update. Hope that the next time u post, which is soon (fingers crossed), u’ve recovered. Take care.
I hope Helena’s comment knocked Bette back into shape. I am glad that Tina is handling everything so well. Great chapter and I look forward to more!
Ally feel better and thanks for the update!!:) why is bette so wishy washy? she needs to speak up and lay down the law. gosh tina is assertive and most certainly the one in charge… bette really needs to be her equal… i wonder if there will more drama before the night is over??? love alice she is so freakin funny,lol…
Here’s a nature video for Tina; Polar bears use either paw… ;-) – – http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JE-Nyt4Bmi8 (very cute!)
Thanks for writing even though you aren’t feeling well. Get well soon, Ally and toughen up a wimpy Bette! LOL!.
Hey AllyE, Hope you feel better soon. This story is absolutely adorable. Seeing Bette suddenly so in love so precious. She really is overwhelmed by her feelings for Tina. Loved seeing the strong and dominant Tin defend her relationship and protect her woman. I really can’t imagine Bette sitting on the sidelines as her past meets her head. Now I wanna see the real Alpha Bette appear. She needs to remember that she is protecting Tina and their relationship by warding off the competion. Please continue this enchanting story soon. Many, many thanks for writing about the reality of life; Good times and bad; Funny and sad. You just rock my world. Your Loyal Fan.
oooooooohhhhhhhh Bette a wimp? NEVER..take control woman!! wtg Ally..sorry to hear that you’re sick
Feel better my dear,Bette needs to show a few that she is taken. Tina and Bette needs to dance and show all the ladies that she has found her missing half. thanks
Great chapter Ally. I’m sorry you’re not feeling well. Sending some soup your way!!! Hope you feel better soon. Thanks for posting.
keep well; keep happy; thx 4 this, i’m such a fan of the story…all your stories, i think.
Come on Bette be an Alpha and tell all that women to back of cause you off the market. The gang are funny!