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    Something so right – chapter 28

    Story written on March 1, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette pulls herself together with a little help from her friends and a cheesy love song

     

    They walked back into the club laughing and teasing one another. Alice spotted the scene first because she was in front of Bette. A tall brunette had managed to get Tina against one of the pillars and was too close for comfort. Shane was just returning from the toilets and she was heading across. Alice and Shane spotted one another – Alice indicated that Shane should stay back for a few minutes. Alice turned and looked at her friend

     

    “Just remember that no one in this club is a threat to you and Tina – go claim your woman “

     

    Bette felt invigorated by the talk to Alice and also by how wonderful it had felt to dance with her lover – nothing was going to come between them. Bette touched Alice’s back in gratitude and walked across to Tina and the unwanted attention. Bette knew the woman- one of her ex’s. Bette slipped up behind Tina and put her arms through the blonde’s and kissed her shoulder

     

    “You okay sweetie ?”

     

    “I was just talking to one of your friends “ Tina said

     

    Tina took hold of Bette’s hands and held them against her stomach

     

    “Hello Jane – sorry to interrupt but Tina owes me a dance and I haven’t kissed her fantastic lips in far too many minutes- you don’t mind do you ?”

     

    “Not at all “ came the rather forced reply. Bette waited until the brunette walked away before she pulled Tina close – the blonde turned

     

    “That was one of your ex’s wasn’t it ?”

     

    Bette nodded “Not my finest moments – was she coming onto you ?”

     

    “I think she was more trying to find out about you “

     

    “What did you tell her ?”

     

    “That you are off the market – that you and I are an exclusive couple and we are very much in love and very happy “

     

     

    Bette stroked a couple of stray hairs from Tina’s hair

     

    “I am, we are and very happy doesn’t come close to how I feel about you – I love you Tina “

     

    Tina kissed Bette “ I love you and I think that we should dance for a bit longer and then go get something to eat and then you should take me to your bed and have your wicked way with me “

     

    “You’ve decided ?”

     

    “I have”

     

    “Okay – lets dance babe “

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    Comments

    1. Great chapter, Bette should know by know that what she has with Tina can be once in a life time opportunity, the love that will change her life forever. Thanks Ally you are brilliant I can’t wait for your next story.

    2. So not surprised you’d spend your idle elevator time with dirty images going through your mind. I’d expect nothing less of you and would probably do the same in that situation.

    6. Bette should pay attention, this is the love of her life and vice versa. they are so right for each other and so lovely together. Great one AllyE and hope you feel better quickly. PPS

    7. Terrific update Ally! So…stuck in an elevator…well now you’ll be able to empathise with poor Bette and Tina on Sunday (snicker, snicker)

    8. I love Alice’s speech to Bette – I love all the support you are writing from their friends. Awesome awesome awesome as usual. Were you really stuck in an elevator??

    9. Oh my… now I want to be stuck in an elevator… how screwed up is that?? Great update Ally. As usual, can’t wait for your next post. Maybe you can fit in L&P somewhere in between too *wink*

    11. Aww, I loved this one. The Alice/Bette friendship was really cute. Glad she is being so supportive of B/T because that always endears me to a character. Glad that Bette is getting her bearings more. Hmm, a new B/T story? I’m there. Although, I seriously check for this one religiously so I can’t wait for more of it.

    12. Great chapter AllyE as per usual!! I love this story oh well actually I love all your stories, but this one I dont know has Bette in a slightly different light and makes it very interesting.Anyways please post soon

    13. Hey Ally. Great chapter. Stuck in an elevator huh? I wouldn’t mind being stuck in one if Tina was there with me. *wink. At least you had the girls in your head. Can’t wait for the next chapter and for your new story.

    16. Good old Foreigner! I LOVE that song – I think that was one of the final clues that I REALLY liked women a lot ;o) I really am enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing!

    17. oh yeah, GO ALICE GO! I am glad that Alice is there for Bette and talks sense to her. I am still chuckling my head off over Helena’s cheesy love song dedication.

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