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    Something so right – chapter 28

    Story written on March 1, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette pulls herself together with a little help from her friends and a cheesy love song

     

     

    Bette nodded “I love her to an extent that does take my breathe away “

     

    “She looks at you like I have never seen a woman look at you. Its not just lust – its something more – its “ Alice searched for the words “Its like she cannot believe that you exist and you are so right for her. And I see how you look at her – puppy dog devotion Porter – and I have never thought I would see that with you “

     

    “I’ve never felt it “

     

     

    “Bette – don’t fuck this up or I will make you suffer every day for the rest of your life. In fact I die first I will come back an haunt you every fucking day of your life. You kissed one hell of a lot of frogs and finally you found your princess “

     

     

    “How do I make the women back off ?”

     

     

    “By being polite but firm – learn a few lines – sorry I am taken is all you need to say. And has it occurred to you that you’re not the only one in that relationship that is going to have to fend women off – she is a hottie Bette “

     

    “She is “

     

    “Fresh meat “

     

    “Don’t say that about her “

    “You should be in there protecting your property “

     

    “Shane’s dancing with her “

     

    “Shane cannot believe what she is seeing “

     

    “How ?”

     

    “Are you sure that graduation picture isn’t a fake – I must check – because Porter – Shane adores you – she would never hear a single bad word about you. You have done so much for her and she looks up to you in a way that I didn’t think you saw. And suddenly you go from hunting in packs with her to being this half of a pair and you are so besotted by Tina – I think maybe its just dawned on Ms McCutcheon that somewhere out there – when she least expects it – she is going to meet her match like you have met yours “

     

    “I think it’s a long way off for Shane “

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    1. Great chapter, Bette should know by know that what she has with Tina can be once in a life time opportunity, the love that will change her life forever. Thanks Ally you are brilliant I can’t wait for your next story.

    2. So not surprised you’d spend your idle elevator time with dirty images going through your mind. I’d expect nothing less of you and would probably do the same in that situation.

    6. Bette should pay attention, this is the love of her life and vice versa. they are so right for each other and so lovely together. Great one AllyE and hope you feel better quickly. PPS

    7. Terrific update Ally! So…stuck in an elevator…well now you’ll be able to empathise with poor Bette and Tina on Sunday (snicker, snicker)

    8. I love Alice’s speech to Bette – I love all the support you are writing from their friends. Awesome awesome awesome as usual. Were you really stuck in an elevator??

    9. Oh my… now I want to be stuck in an elevator… how screwed up is that?? Great update Ally. As usual, can’t wait for your next post. Maybe you can fit in L&P somewhere in between too *wink*

    11. Aww, I loved this one. The Alice/Bette friendship was really cute. Glad she is being so supportive of B/T because that always endears me to a character. Glad that Bette is getting her bearings more. Hmm, a new B/T story? I’m there. Although, I seriously check for this one religiously so I can’t wait for more of it.

    12. Great chapter AllyE as per usual!! I love this story oh well actually I love all your stories, but this one I dont know has Bette in a slightly different light and makes it very interesting.Anyways please post soon

    13. Hey Ally. Great chapter. Stuck in an elevator huh? I wouldn’t mind being stuck in one if Tina was there with me. *wink. At least you had the girls in your head. Can’t wait for the next chapter and for your new story.

    16. Good old Foreigner! I LOVE that song – I think that was one of the final clues that I REALLY liked women a lot ;o) I really am enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing!

    17. oh yeah, GO ALICE GO! I am glad that Alice is there for Bette and talks sense to her. I am still chuckling my head off over Helena’s cheesy love song dedication.

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