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Something so right – chapter 29
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“That’s nice”
Bette rested one hand on Tina’s stomach and snuggled up against her back
“That is even nicer “
“How you feeling ?”
“Like I was kicked “
“You got a back ache ? “ Bette always suffered from back ache when her period started
“Its more of an all-over ache “
“I’m sorry sweetheart – is that pad too hot ?”
“No -its lovely and so are you holding me like this -thank you “
“Its okay – how long have you been lying alone like this ?”
“I left work at 4 – I just feel terrible “
“You have been alone for four hours !”
“Bette -I’m a grown up “
“I wish you had called me “
“I hoped it would pass “
“And does it usually ?”
“Not until the next day “
Bette stopped herself – she wasn’t going to bully Tina – she was a grown up. Except Bette so wanted to take care of Tina -to make sure she was safe and happy. Bette pulled herself closer to the blonde and they lay silent for several minutes.
“I got you some painkillers “
“Thanks – this is better than drugs though -thank you Bette “
Bette resisted the urge to tell Tina that holding her was THE best feeling in the world well maybe the SECOND greatest feeling in the world behind making love together.
Bette kissed Tina’s shoulder
“You just rest “
“Thank you “
Bette closed her eyes again and concentrated on the feelings that being with Tina brought out in her every single time they were together. Bette loved Tina more than she could articulate – words weren’t enough – not for loving this fantastic blonde.
Tina moved her body slightly so they heat was now on a different part of her stomach. Physically she felt terrible with acute stomach cramps but having Bette next to her was the best tonic she could wish for. What meant the most was that Bette did understand how rubbish she felt. Tina took hold of Bette’s hand
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Aww, this was wonderful. I can’t wait for Tina to meet Kit. It sounds like Bette is going to want to live together soon.. with the way she was talking about being so happy at Tina’s. Just adore this story. Love the side of Bette that only Tina gets to see.
Great chapter, wat is KY?
gee tell me how you really feel……i think u r a wonderful writer and if i may be so bold……being a fan fiction addict it really should be a compliment to you when the writers of the l word ‘borrow’ yours and others thoughts so to speak.in the end though, television is such a convoluted medium and sometimes we just don’t get the translation……i think showtime is the most progressive of cable channels out there but don’t forget it still is all about cash….what you really want to see probably won’t be possible on cable for another 5-8 years……it’s not perfect but it’s a start….and like laurel holloman said she hopes that at the very least the show has paved the way for many and more provacative and ‘real’ shows to convey the stories needed to be told…..side note….really appreciated you commenting and writing on women’s pain with menstrual issues…..cause let’s face it no matter how horny you are there’s always the chance that one or both of you are flowing…..on a personal note i have endometriosis,have had it for at least 15 years now and it is something i wouldn’t want to wish on anyone…..take the usual period cramps and then pretend you got run over by a freight train……it’s kind of what it’s like…..you are immobile…..and there is no permanant solution….so needless to say that my ex was not the most compassionate in his ignorance.i’ve had countless drugs and surgeries but at least i feel somewhat blessed to have been receiving ‘ on-going treatment’. anyways allym, thanks for keeping it always really real……
damn right we support you Ally!! i must say, i enjoyed last chapter a lot, but it was NOT cool that they cut b&t’s scene with Tom&Max, NOT cool at ALL… loved this chapter, i take it we can mark Bette’s final words??? please post soon!
tibette forevah!!! thx for the update.
What fantastic update!! was it eric at the door… i sense drama ahead,lol… :)
Loved it! Can’t wait for more! Thanks!
You should be a writer for the show. We would get the good and not so much bad. Love how Bette is taking care of Tina. She is so sweet.but she hides it so well.
It would be brilliant if you write for the show and I know that it would be so much better. This chapter was beautiful, to see this part of Bette is heart warming, that’s love “sigh”. Thanks dear, post soon.
I’ve enjoyed following this story. Once again, great chapter.
I wish IC would have you and a few other fanfic writers write for the show. It would make a good show a whole lot better.
That was really sweet. Love the way you write TiBette
You’ve got my support Ally! I totally agree with the fact that IC owes us big time. I think her problem is she’s afraid that she cannot write creatively enough, (and maybe she really can’t), to keep ratings up, so she does it the cheap way…negative responses create high ratings just like positive ones do – I think that’s been her plan all along. Now she’s got B&T having some kind of an affair, (not sure if Bette and Jodi are in a “committed” relationship), when I seriously doubt that B or T either one would actually be doing that. And Kit trying to give Bette advice – wasn’t Kit fucking around with a married man not too long ago? Yes I’m so thankful to read your stories – it’s amazing what a truly gifted writer like you can create. I love the way you write all the characters, but especially B&T. You have the ability to capture their love and emotions, and write them down so brilliantly. And I thank you so much for that. I think that a gay couple in a loving relationship is something that the public really needs to see; and IC has completely blown that opportunity. Thanks for telling us how you feel about it, and thanks for writing such fabulous stories about all our favorite characters.
Ally for Head Writer of TLW….I’ll vote for that! But, you have to promise a Tibette wedding at the end of S6! Beautiful update Ally, I loved it.
So perfect, I love that Bette is taking care of Tina. They are so sweet when they just cuddle and talk. You are awesome and any time you want to right for the show you have my vote.
Definite brownie points for Bette Porter, the best girlfriend ever. Thanks for the update!
Bette’s thoughts, music to my ears. Wonderful@
married already….slow down Bette…I hated the Tom/Max thing etc. All I wanted on my screen was TiBette love….pps
Ally Emmerson – Executive writer and producer! Has a nice ring to it and I have no doubt we´d be getting one hell of a show. I´d really like a season 6, but with the creativity (or lack of) of IC I highly doubt that Showtime will be convinced. JB always says that what she really wants is to be part of a good story. Well a good story has to be believable, the reader has to be able to identify with the characters or the plot. Take TLW – most of us can identify with being a lesbian, hanging out with our friends, being in love, wanting a child, having numerous affairs and maybe even cheating – death is no stranger either. But then IC went mad, Tina got mad, Alice lost her mind, Shane really lost it. Bette went from alpha to omega taking everything Tina dished out. Humble and repetitive Bette was introduced along with a bunch of peculiar characters that really served no purpose. Papi, the dominating character of last – never heard of again, and yet she was Tashas best friend. Catherine !!!? Why was she even in the show. Max! Ally I have nothing against Max, but when IC claims that it´s important to tell these stories, what story is she telling and why. Max´ character doesn´t carry weight enough to actually be a story. We get turkish oil restling, a “mafia” sit down, Kit learning how to handle a gun. The show went from promising to desperate. IC seems to be affraid of slowing down and of going back to actually telling good stories – – Luckily for all of us we have your stories and those of many talented writers that aren´t affraid of portraying the lesbian lifestyle a little closer to the truth.
I LOVE this story! I love how Bette just wants to take care of Tina. So sweet. I’ve recently developed constant pelvic pain that is awful. It would be so nice to have someone take care of me sometimes. Thanks for the update!
Ally, the part about the bees was soooo cute. I loved it. Thanks for including the monthly occurance. No one in Fanfic ever seems to have a period.
That rash isn’t going to help Dana’s ranking. I guess this means KY will never be her sponsor.
I nominate you to write for the show too :).
That was sweet and wonderful, like the way Bette take care of Tina. Funny at Dana and Alice. Please post more, thanks!
ohhhhhhhhhhhh so nice……………