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    Something so right – chapter 29

    Story written on March 5, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=68843
    Author Notes:

    Tina isn’t well – Nurse Porter to the rescue

     

     

    “But when a girl bee loves another girl bee its so much better “ Tina said when the kiss ended

     

    “You hungry ? “

     

    “I know that I should eat but at the moment I couldn’t face it – can we just stay here like this ?”

     

    “Of course “ Bette stroked Tina’s hair and smiled. If there was anything that she wanted at the moment it was to take care of her lover and for once Tina was poorly enough to allow her to do it.

     

     

    “I think that one of the things that has happened to me since we got together is that I want to be with you all the time – it doesn’t have to be all about sex “

     

    “Though it often is “

     

    “True – for me that’s what its always been – physical intimacy only – not emotional. Not like this. Holding you and feeling so close to you is the best “

     

     

    Tina smiled and snuggled closer against Bette. She was tired but being held by Bette had certainly given her an energy that had been missing when she had been alone.

     

     

    “Any gossip from the gallery ?” Tina asked

     

     

    “No but I do have hot tennis news “

     

     

    Tina opened her eyes and looked at Bette for a few seconds

     

     

     

    “Hot tennis news ?”

     

     

    “Important news from the forth coming San Francisco challenge event “

    “Dana ? “

     

    “That would be the one “

     

    “What’s up with Dana and how have you heard it ?”

     

    Bette kissed Tina’s brow “ Her personal sexual fitness coach “

    “Oh Alice – what the hell has happened ?”

     

    Bette grinned “ You might appreciate this better when you are feeling more like yourself “

    “Porter “

     

    Bette laughed “This is so insane that it could only happen to someone crazy enough to date Alice “

     

    “Tell me “

     

    “Are you sitting comfortably ?”

     

    “Bette -spill the beans “

     

    “Dana Fairbanks – currently ranked 89th in America is out of next weeks San Francisco challenge event as sponsored by a famous drinks company due to a mystery illness “

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    2. Aww, this was wonderful. I can’t wait for Tina to meet Kit. It sounds like Bette is going to want to live together soon.. with the way she was talking about being so happy at Tina’s. Just adore this story. Love the side of Bette that only Tina gets to see.

    4. gee tell me how you really feel……i think u r a wonderful writer and if i may be so bold……being a fan fiction addict it really should be a compliment to you when the writers of the l word ‘borrow’ yours and others thoughts so to speak.in the end though, television is such a convoluted medium and sometimes we just don’t get the translation……i think showtime is the most progressive of cable channels out there but don’t forget it still is all about cash….what you really want to see probably won’t be possible on cable for another 5-8 years……it’s not perfect but it’s a start….and like laurel holloman said she hopes that at the very least the show has paved the way for many and more provacative and ‘real’ shows to convey the stories needed to be told…..side note….really appreciated you commenting and writing on women’s pain with menstrual issues…..cause let’s face it no matter how horny you are there’s always the chance that one or both of you are flowing…..on a personal note i have endometriosis,have had it for at least 15 years now and it is something i wouldn’t want to wish on anyone…..take the usual period cramps and then pretend you got run over by a freight train……it’s kind of what it’s like…..you are immobile…..and there is no permanant solution….so needless to say that my ex was not the most compassionate in his ignorance.i’ve had countless drugs and surgeries but at least i feel somewhat blessed to have been receiving ‘ on-going treatment’. anyways allym, thanks for keeping it always really real……

    5. damn right we support you Ally!! i must say, i enjoyed last chapter a lot, but it was NOT cool that they cut b&t’s scene with Tom&Max, NOT cool at ALL… loved this chapter, i take it we can mark Bette’s final words??? please post soon!

    9. You should be a writer for the show. We would get the good and not so much bad. Love how Bette is taking care of Tina. She is so sweet.but she hides it so well.

    10. It would be brilliant if you write for the show and I know that it would be so much better. This chapter was beautiful, to see this part of Bette is heart warming, that’s love “sigh”. Thanks dear, post soon.

    14. You’ve got my support Ally! I totally agree with the fact that IC owes us big time. I think her problem is she’s afraid that she cannot write creatively enough, (and maybe she really can’t), to keep ratings up, so she does it the cheap way…negative responses create high ratings just like positive ones do – I think that’s been her plan all along. Now she’s got B&T having some kind of an affair, (not sure if Bette and Jodi are in a “committed” relationship), when I seriously doubt that B or T either one would actually be doing that. And Kit trying to give Bette advice – wasn’t Kit fucking around with a married man not too long ago? Yes I’m so thankful to read your stories – it’s amazing what a truly gifted writer like you can create. I love the way you write all the characters, but especially B&T. You have the ability to capture their love and emotions, and write them down so brilliantly. And I thank you so much for that. I think that a gay couple in a loving relationship is something that the public really needs to see; and IC has completely blown that opportunity. Thanks for telling us how you feel about it, and thanks for writing such fabulous stories about all our favorite characters.

    16. So perfect, I love that Bette is taking care of Tina. They are so sweet when they just cuddle and talk. You are awesome and any time you want to right for the show you have my vote.

    20. Ally Emmerson – Executive writer and producer! Has a nice ring to it and I have no doubt we´d be getting one hell of a show. I´d really like a season 6, but with the creativity (or lack of) of IC I highly doubt that Showtime will be convinced. JB always says that what she really wants is to be part of a good story. Well a good story has to be believable, the reader has to be able to identify with the characters or the plot. Take TLW – most of us can identify with being a lesbian, hanging out with our friends, being in love, wanting a child, having numerous affairs and maybe even cheating – death is no stranger either. But then IC went mad, Tina got mad, Alice lost her mind, Shane really lost it. Bette went from alpha to omega taking everything Tina dished out. Humble and repetitive Bette was introduced along with a bunch of peculiar characters that really served no purpose. Papi, the dominating character of last – never heard of again, and yet she was Tashas best friend. Catherine !!!? Why was she even in the show. Max! Ally I have nothing against Max, but when IC claims that it´s important to tell these stories, what story is she telling and why. Max´ character doesn´t carry weight enough to actually be a story. We get turkish oil restling, a “mafia” sit down, Kit learning how to handle a gun. The show went from promising to desperate. IC seems to be affraid of slowing down and of going back to actually telling good stories – – Luckily for all of us we have your stories and those of many talented writers that aren´t affraid of portraying the lesbian lifestyle a little closer to the truth.

    21. I LOVE this story! I love how Bette just wants to take care of Tina. So sweet. I’ve recently developed constant pelvic pain that is awful. It would be so nice to have someone take care of me sometimes. Thanks for the update!

    22. Ally, the part about the bees was soooo cute. I loved it. Thanks for including the monthly occurance. No one in Fanfic ever seems to have a period.

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