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    Something so right – chapter 35

    Story written on April 8, 2008 by allyemmerson.
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    Tina’s party and Bette and Tina’s own private celebration

     

    Tina walked away from Eric knowing that she had just been utterly unfair to him but feeling that she had finally said the things that had been on her mind for a long time.

     

     

    Bette was sitting chatting to Lara when Tina returned to the table

     

    “You okay ?” Bette asked

     

    Tina nodded “Lets dance “

     

    Tina took Bette’s hand and they walked to the dance floor. Tina put her arms round Bette and lent against her body as the music changed

     

    Bette laughed

     

    “What ?”

    “If Alice finds out that we are dancing to Andy Williams after our Foreigner thing at the club we are never going to hear the end of it “

    “My gran loves Andy Williams “

    “But with respect babe – we are both in our 20’s “

    “Shut up and dance “ Tina replied laughing.

     

    Bette obeyed resting one hand on Tina’s back and they began to slowly dance to the music

    You’re just too good to be true
    Can’ t take my eyes off you
    You’d be like heaven to touch
    I wanna hold you so much
    At long last love has arrived
    And I thank God I’m alive
    You’re just too good to be true
    Can’t take my eyes off you

     

     

    Bette moved her head so she could whisper in Tina’s ear

     

    “I want to be inside of you so much “

     

    “Same here “

     

    “I am so proud of you “

     

    “Tonight means more because I am sharing it with you “

     

    Pardon the way that I stare
    There’s nothing else to compare
    The sight of you leaves me weak
    There are no words left to speak
    And if you feel like I feel
    Please let me know that it’s real
    You’re just too good to be true
    Can’t take my eyes off you
    I love you baby, and if it’s quite alright
    I need you baby to warm the lonely night
    I love you baby

     

    “Walking in holding your hand – it was something I will never forget. You are stunning”
    “You are the star tonight Tina- I am just happy to be with you and have witnessed how many people just envy me for being the one that you have picked “

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    3. Eric deserved everything Tina dished at him.I too liked the comment of being able to go all night with another woman. The love scene was hot.On a personal note I hope you are feeling better, it will come in time.

    6. Thank you for this beautiful up date, Tina was a little harsh on him, I know he deserved it but he’s truly harmless, he’s just full of nonsense can’t really do anything. Looking forward for the next post.Love& stay safe.

    8. They are so good together. Supportive in careers, in coming out, passionate, tender and loving, stunning as a couple, and both so alpha in their careers that its intoxicating. Can’t wait for more. Plus, I loved the mention of Tina coming out to her parents.

    14. Wow. that was way HOT!!! And my favorite line of Tina’s is: “You have created this lesbian “…Bette is welcome to mold me into any type of lesbian she’d like (LOL). Poor, dumb, stupid Eric. he really should not have let his silly ego get the best of him. I think Tina had every reason to be as cruel to Eric as she was. Thanks for another great update. PPS!

    19. Sweet and loving update AllyE. The girls do belong together. Loved what Tina did to Eric, he is such an arrogant a–, he needed to be brought down a few pegs and I certainly hope Tina follows through because we know he will try something to get at her again. Continue to feel better. Post when you can.

    21. Ally, I’m so enjoying these every day updates! This is such a good story…I am enjoying how they were when they first met…nothing rushed, just a nice steady progression in their relationship.

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