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Something so right – chapter 35
Walking in holding your hand – it was something I will never forget. You are stunning”“You are the star tonight Tina- I am just happy to be with you and have witnessed how many people just envy me for being the one that you have picked “
“We kind of picked each other “ Tina replied
Trust in me when I say
Oh pretty baby, don’t bring me down I pray
Oh pretty baby, now that I’ve found you stay
And let me love you baby
Let me love you
You’re just too good to be true
Can’ t take my eyes off you
“
You know we have all these plans for tomorrow ?” Tina said running her one hand down Bette’s back and
stroking her ass. They looked at one another
“Yeah “ Bette said her voice had dropped. It wasn’t that noticeable but it was to Tina
“How about we just stay in bed and fuck each other senseless ? “
Bette swallowed – her clit twitching at the suggestion and the way that Tina had made the offer.
“Thought we were going to buy our bikes and go swimming “
“Yeah but what would you rather do ?”
“You know the answer to that “
Tina moved her hand round and stroked Bette’s thigh – fully aware of what that would do to Bette
“Oh God “ Bette managed to say
“You okay ?”
“Don’t sound so freaking innocent “
Tina chuckled
“Later Kennard – later “
You’d be like heaven to touch
I wanna hold you so much
I love you baby, and if it’s quite alright
I need you baby to warm the lonely night
I love you baby
Trust in me when I say
Oh pretty baby, don’t bring me down I pray
Oh pretty baby, now that I’ve found you stay
And let me love you baby
Let me love you
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Tina barely managed to slam shut her front door and drop the lock before she pushed Bette against it and began to ravish her neck with her mouth. They had shamelessly flirted at the party and finally the build up of desire had got so intense that Tina had dragged Bette away from the hotel and into the car.
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(11 votes, average: 4.09 out of 5)
i just heard that song on the radio and thought of b and t! good choice!
Hi Ally. You are an inspired writer and I just love your stories. Keep your chin up.
Eric deserved everything Tina dished at him.I too liked the comment of being able to go all night with another woman. The love scene was hot.On a personal note I hope you are feeling better, it will come in time.
Love the story. Thanks for the update!
I smile everytime I see an update from you.
Thank you for this beautiful up date, Tina was a little harsh on him, I know he deserved it but he’s truly harmless, he’s just full of nonsense can’t really do anything. Looking forward for the next post.Love& stay safe.
Great chapter! I so love this story. Glad you are feeling supported! Take care!
They are so good together. Supportive in careers, in coming out, passionate, tender and loving, stunning as a couple, and both so alpha in their careers that its intoxicating. Can’t wait for more. Plus, I loved the mention of Tina coming out to her parents.
ohh.. god.. I need some of your snow here.. this was HOT! thanks for an other lovely chap… big hug for you!
that was how do i say it oh yeah FUCKING AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SHIT NOW I NEED ANOTHER COOL SHOWER BUT I DONT MINED keep them coming
I love tina telling him off.Bette and Tina are so in love.Their lovemaking was so hot
Fuck Ally That was HOT!!!!! THanks
im gonna go work out til it hurts also. thx
Wow. that was way HOT!!! And my favorite line of Tina’s is: “You have created this lesbian “…Bette is welcome to mold me into any type of lesbian she’d like (LOL). Poor, dumb, stupid Eric. he really should not have let his silly ego get the best of him. I think Tina had every reason to be as cruel to Eric as she was. Thanks for another great update. PPS!
let the night continue! ;) i love this b&t – young, confident, sexy & in love….thx for the update!!!
Beautiful! Hot!
Damn that was hot, B&T are sexy. Just love everytime Tina shut eric up and kick his ass. Please post more, thanks!
I don’t think T was unfair to Eric. He’s an ignorant, arrogant dork!!!! Love the story. Take care. PPS.
Sweet and loving update AllyE. The girls do belong together. Loved what Tina did to Eric, he is such an arrogant a–, he needed to be brought down a few pegs and I certainly hope Tina follows through because we know he will try something to get at her again. Continue to feel better. Post when you can.
Hot chapter!!! So glad you are feeling better and up to writing again.
Ally, I’m so enjoying these every day updates! This is such a good story…I am enjoying how they were when they first met…nothing rushed, just a nice steady progression in their relationship.
Great chapter Ally. I loved what Tina said to Eric!! Can’t wait for more.
loved tina’s comment to eric!! by all means let the night and weekend continue… :)
Did you get enough snow to make it worthwhile to shovel?
I’m still trying to figure out what part of what Tina said to Eric was unfair.
Eric really is too stupid for words, some people just don’t learn. GO TINA GO! Bette and Tina are just sizzlin’ hot! Marvelous chapter!