Fan Fiction

    This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.

    Age Verification

    I am years of age as of today, November 14, 2026

    Enter your current age into the field provide above. Stories with a rating of R or NC-17 may contain material not suitable for children. LesFan requires that all individuals wishing to read these stories confirm they are of at least 17 years of age. LesFan uses the MPAA rating labeling system for all stories.

    LesFan will also make a best attempt to filter profane words in stories that are not rated R or NC-17 unless the individual confirms they are of at least 17 years of age.

    LesFan uses the following rating scale for stories.






    Submit

    Something so right – chapter 42

    Tina burst into tears and held onto Bette’s back “ Bette “
    “I am sorry – I am so sorry that I hurt you – I am sorry that I scared you – I am sorry “

    Tina rubbed her hand down Bette’s face “ You have no idea how beautiful you are. You have no idea how much I need you in my life. I love you Bette. You make me happier than I have ever known in my whole life. I love you “

    “I love you Tina – I am sorry. Nothing would let me cheat on you “

    Tina placed the softest kiss on Bette’s lips and for several seconds they kissed. Tina began to kiss away the tears that were still falling down Bette’s face.

    “Its okay “ Bette said

    Tina eased away and touched her face “Are you okay ?”
    “I am sobering up “

    “Good “

    “As long as we are okay “
    “We are more than okay “

    Tina rested her head against Bette’s shoulder and looked out to the sea

    “Its so peaceful and beautiful out here “
    “It is – I just had to be somewhere we had been so happy “

    “We could try and find the rock that I stumble on – allowing you to catch me and for us to kiss “

    “Might not be easy “
    “I know “

    Tina kissed Bette again – stroking her hair and gently holding her lover as close as possible. Bette held onto Tina and kissed her

    “I would never cheat on you – I don’t want to lose you – lose what we share “

    Tina pulled away from Bette

    “You cannot help being so hot and desirable “

    “I am not “
    “You are – but I don’t think we should argue about how beautiful you are. How about we talk about something else ?”

    “Like what ?”

    Tina pulled the soft velvet bag out of her pocket

    “Happy Birthday Bette “

    “What time is it ?”
    “30 year old Bette time “

    “For me ?”
    “Well its not for Jaws “

    “Can I ?”

    “This is not the way I wanted this to happen but we may as well do it here and now “

    “Sure ? “

    Comments

    1. Yeah, Bette acted like a complete idiot. I hope she gets the confidence to stand up for their relationship better.. but maybe it will come with settling in together more. Love this couple.

    2. That’s not the alpha Bette we know. Come on Bette, you would have normally told that waitress yourself to take a walk. And no drinking and driving. Thankfully she has Tina, cos she’s the only one who’s ever been able to calm and balance Porter.

    3. YESSS!!! Minor crisis averted. Thank God Bette didn’t get into an accident. This is a very sweet chapter just the same. Happy birthday indeed, Bette! And I wish them many more lovely adventures/milestones together as live-in lovers. Thanks for the daily posts, ally! :)

    4. don’t these women have cellphones? Bette’s is usually attached to her arm. Never mind. Very dramatic and scary; Bette has to be watched obviously because her fears take her over. Plz continue the birthday with a nice hangover and some loving.

    5. What’s the spotlight and where? I’m so glad Tina could see what was happening – and Bette so self-destructive – driving when shitfaced. Thank the goddess your drama queen self didn’t take us down a more negative road. You know how to keep us edge and not push off over it.

    6. I hope Tina did them both a favor and opened Bette’s window-just in case. The fresh air won’t hurt her anyway, but if she should wake up feeling a bit queasy, let’s hope she has the presence of mind (tough when you’re reeling drunk) to puke out the window and not DOWN it. Hard to clean, smells bad. For a long time. But I really don’t like Bette being so cravenly insecure.

    7. I doubt Bette will even remember most of this in the morning, but when she sobers up T needs to kick her ass for driving drunk. Ally I loved the birthday present idea – that was great! I’m addicted to you Ally…it feels so wonderful to be able to read your stories again after going for three weeks + without them. You are amazing! Thanks so much!

    8. Thank goodness nothing happened to Bette while she was driving. That was a nailbiter. Poor Tina – probably worried the woman sick. Maybe Bette could show Tina her appreciation once she sobers up.

    9. Wow, this is one insecure Bette Porter. She needs to be comfortable enough with Tina that every little thing that happens doesn’t make her feel like she’s going to lose her. At some point Tina will get sick of this “woussy” behaviour. Gret chapter Ally!

    10. You got me holding breath until I turned to the 3rd page on the proposal. And I think “what am I going to do with you” will be my spoken expression for sometime. So touching!

    11. Wow that was intense! Love it though and can’t wait for more! PPS oh and Bette is going to have one major hang over, poor Tina is going to have to take care of her:)

    12. I am relieved that Tina saw the whole event. Bette needs a spanking but good for driving drunk, I am glad that Tina made it clear it was unacceptable behavior. I hope Tina can help Bette work on her insecurities.

    13. I’ve always read and loved your stories, but I’ve been too lazy to post. Great chapter as usual, tough I’d like to see alpha Bette back, she’s been a bit of a wuss for a while now :D PPS!!

    14. Beautiful chapter, I’m glad they are going to move in together. Thank goodness Tina was the rational one tonight. Still can’t get over Bette drinking and driving…hopefully her 30s will bring her more common sense. Great post–thanks ally

    15. Gosh, Bette needs to stop running when she thinks things have gone badly. All she needs to do is stop and talk to Tina and for goodness sakes listen. Very emotional with a good lesson. PPS

    Leave a Reply