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Something so right – chapter 48
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SOMETHING SO RIGHT
Chapter 48
Tina woke up early – her watch told her that it was 7am. Next to her Bette was fast asleep and was unlikely to stir for another couple of hours. Tina reached out a hand and touched her partner’s face. She was so beautiful – that was obvious to everyone but what Bette kept a much closer guarded secret was how gentle and loving she was. That had been the most wonderful surprise about dating Bette – the fact that she was so clearly always out to do the right thing – she had wanted to treat Tina in the way that she had. She had wanted to pamper her and buy her little gifts and when those gestures were returned with the same amount of love and attention – that had sealed their love.
Alice had told Tina that she could now see that all her life Bette had been looking for a woman who was her equal – who wouldn’t fall at her feet just because she was Bette Porter but would stand as her equivalent. And now that she had found someone who was beautiful and smart and witty and loving – now that all the pieces had fallen into place – Bette had opened her heart and Tina was going to be the luckiest lesbian alive – she was going to be loved the way Bette Porter craved to love someone. Maybe her upbringing – which had been barren had been the start of Bette’s need to love her partner with such perfect passion.
Tina softly kissed Bette on the lips before getting out of bed and putting on her pyjamas that hadn’t been worn the night before – they had been too needy to have sex – too desperate for the physicality of their love to be expressed.
Finn’s revelation about why Tina’s mom was hostile to Bette had annoyed Tina. Her mother wasn’t going to make things hard for Bette – not on the word of some silly bitch who had a personal grudge against her. Tina was going to stand up to her mother and hang the fact that it was freaking Thanksgiving.
Sarah was in the kitchen – Tina saw the giant turkey that she would soon be putting in the oven -that beauty was going to take several hours to be ready for their Thanksgiving dinner.
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what funnyone said. hey, will try and call later. still at work. thx ally
Wow Ally why have they been avoiding talking about this before, I guess a lot of things were happening at that time, I love when they talk about their future together, it gives them the chance to feel more secure into their relationship. You are awesome Ally, keep posting dear. Love
I love all your stories. This one is great. Keep them coming. I’m all eyes.
Ally, Just Amazing!!!! Thank you
Hey, Bette won over Niall and I’m betting that she wins over Sarah too. What a great story Ally…I’ve loved it since chapter one. Can’t wait for your next post!
I think Tina calling her Mom out may start the process, but Bette may be right in the fact that she needs to have a conversation with Sarah alone. I adore the scenes with Bette and Tina getting to explore their feelings to the deepest of levels.
Near tears on the deliberation between Tina and Sarah. Almost envious on the declaration of love and committment between TiBette. This story is just something fantastic and you have an amazing talent Ally. Thanks for sharing
Sarah needs to lighten up a bit and let her daughter do what she wants…she’s going to anyway so might as well accept it with grace! Love that they can talk about kids and not marriage yet. PPS
Well, Tina certainly gave her mother something to think about. They should give her time to digest what Tina told her before approaching her on the subject. Sarah could take a page out of her husband’s book and look at B&T with her heart as well as her eyes. PPS :o).
Loved Tina standing up to her Mom. Sarah needs to trust her daughter. Who is she going to trust regarding Bette’s character? Her daughter, who she knows is mature, smart, and has a good heart. Or some random girl she may have never even met personally. Plus, what we have been told about Bette’s past is that she took home a lot of women but never led them on that it would be something more. If some silly girl thought it would be its her own dumb fault. Basically, just loved the way Tina stood up for their relationship.
That was great and Im with funnyone, love B&T, they are so cute and sweet! Please more, thanks!
Thanks for the frequent posts. Always improves my mood.
Ditto what everyone has said! so is this heart broken girl from bette’s past i wonder if it was the one before tina? i’m glad that fin and will filled tina in on what their mom has been saying! :)PPS
Yeah, what funnyone said, plus Sarah should know better to listen to someone else’s opinion, after all, she is a pretty independent thinker on her own and I would think that she would prefer to form her own opinion. It’s good that they can have the baby conversation and even almost have the marriage talk because their love is so very strong for each other. It would be the next thing to talk about, their future, and what it entails. At least they have an idea that they are both on the same wave length as far as the future is concerned. I hope this is one story that Bette does not end up having an affair after 7 yrs. together because then Sarah would have been right, and we can not let that happen. Great chapter AllyE. Post when you can.
What funnyone said, plus I have just the three kids for Bette and Tina!
OMFG! They’ve decided to have kids before they can even say the ‘marriage’ word!?! Well, having kids out of wedlock is no way to win over Sarah! Wait. Didn’t you say that crusty old Sarah had given birth to Tina (or whatever her REAL hippy name is) at freakin’ Woodstock? Hard to reconcile. I bet there’s some tie-dye still hanging in the back of Sarah’s closet. Why don’t they get her some of Niall’s homegrown bud? That should help relax her.
So nice to find a new chapter. I’m addicted to this story. Hope that Tina’s mother will appreciate Bette soon.
I’ve learn new words today ” tittle tattle” and “egalitarian”. Thanks for sharing. Love all your stories Ally.
If it were any other couple I’d say slow down….your moving way too fast. But Bette and Tina are just talking about their future together and they realize that they want ton spend their lives togethr. This is so sweet and tender, the two of them out in nature really bonding and committing to each other. Let’s just hope that Tina’s mom listens to her daughtesr heart felt pleas and that Bette can win her over . I’m not to worried…the Porter charm hasn’t failed yet :-) PPS! So glad yu are posting regularly again ally. keep up the great work.
most people have the kids first these days; that’s what they used to have betrothals for back in the day; it gave the couple permission to have sex and then if she got pregnant within a reasonable time they married like Mary and Joseph…makes sense to me; saves on annulments because one of them can’t make babies. Bette shouldn’t be so sure that she’ll ‘win mum around’. My mom wasn’t won around by my partner who said those same words; who like Bette was a monogamist until she wasn’t; Lol, she was a serial monogamist like Bette!!! Ah but i loved her just like Tina loves Bette for all her foibles. I teach several kids [ all boys desperate for 2 loving parents & an alternate lifestyle] they could adopt & it sounds like to me that Tina needs the bud for Thanksgiving Dinner. Maybe Niall will pull it out for dessert and coffee