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Something so right – chapter 50
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“That’s Fred – Tina’s horse “
“She rides ?”
“She’s a great rider “
Bette tried not to smirk – she could testify how good Tina was at riding something else.
“She hasn’t told me “
“Her trophies are in the lounge “
“I will make sure she shows me – sorry boy – I don’t have anything for you “
“But I do “
Finn put his hands into his jacket and pulled out three apples and a pen knife
“Want to feed them ?”
“Will they like me ?”
“Yes – but then you will have to keep bringing them treats “
Bette took an apple and cut in it half and offered one half to Tina’s horse who was sheer black and beautiful.
“You have a fan there “
Pity about your mother Bette thought but decided that she would win Sarah round in her own way – she could sell herself to Tina’s mom. Under Finn’s patience guidance Bette spent a great half an hour feeding and watering the horses. She asked lots of questions and showed that she wasn’t afraid of getting dirty.
“Lets go back to the house – its should be lunchtime – it will only be a sandwich and the smell of the
turkey will be unbearable “
“I’ll see you at the house “
“Nah – get on the back of the quad bike “
“Sure ?”
“Its safe “
Tina was still sitting on the porch talking to Willow when Finn’s quad bike came roaring up the path and stopped in front of the house
“Looks like he picked up a hitchhiker “ Willow said
Tina stood up as Bette climbed off the back of the bike. Finn got off and turned to Bette. They were both laughing at something and Tina noticed that Bette was not as immaculate as she usually did
“Brother has been roping Bette into the farm chores “ Willow commented
“Obviously “ Tina was shocked but pleased. It was obvious that Bette had won her brother over by just being who she was – warm and loving. Tina told herself yet again that such effort deserved a very
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wow.. this Carol woman has made a big mess for not kipping her mouth closed! (readers note: not all Carols are like her!!). I think they just should skip helping Tina’s mom… she deserves it for being mean to Bette. thanks for posting Ally! (as your favourite stalker girl I already have the list of questions for you. hehe)
I just love the interaction; you write it so well. PPS
Thanks for the post! I’m glad to see Bette and Tina both together standing up to Sarah. Bette will eventually winthem all over. It’s just a matter of time. I wonder who this Brenda is and are we going to get the whole story?Post when you can, your loyal fans await.
Wow, I didn’t know that she is that bad, but she has the right to be concerned about her daughter nonetheless, she HAS to see Bette’s love for Tina, I love this story Ally, it took a really different direction, you write these chapters incredibly well that I imagine myself binging there with them on the farm, I miss their city life though and all the privacy and comfort of their home. Post soon darling. Love
I love this story! I think Sarah will come around. How can you not be won over by Bette? Glad to see the rest of the family loving Bette.
AllyE, you are doing a great job with this story and we love it. Sarah, with the life she lives cheating on her husband and the children know, she doesn’t have anything to say about anyone else. She’s way worse than Bette’s past. At least Bette was having one night stands or 2-3 dates and moving on. She wasn’t married and having them all at the same time. Sarah can’t make that claim. When Tina brought out the affairs, Sarah didn’t seem to flinch about that, just normal practice for her. Geezzzz. Great chapter. Post when you can.
Great chapter, Tina’s mom was so busted she didn’t expect tina to hear what she was saying to Bette. Maybe this Brenda will come home for the holiday meal and be woman enough to tell the truth about Bette she is probably just jealous because Tina is with Bette and she only got one night.
I love how sure they are of their love – awesome and wonderful.
Way 2 go Tina calling her mom on her ‘open’ marriage. Loving this and will try to remember June 8th altho the old memory is not that HOT!!! Great story.
When are we going to find out Tina’s REAL name? You know, I’m not too distressed about ol’ Sarah. She IS still Tina’ mother, and right to be cautious. I still think Tina gets a bit on her high horse in this story. Her parents have defined what marriage means to them (like all married couples). If Niall can deal with it (I presume he could get a little side action if he wanted it), then Tina should, too. Tina and Bette can define THEIR relationship according to their wants and needs and nobody (including Tina) should get too sanctimonious about what suits others. BTW, was Sarah gone after lunch to grill Carol about the facts or was she out getting a bit of ‘afternoon delight’? Or maybe a little of both? Did Finn really call the smell of his mother’s Thanksgiving turkey unbearable? God, I thought she was a better cook than that!
Woah how can Tina’s mom be so judgemental with her sorted past and all! Can’t wait to see what happens next! PPS:)
VERY WELL PUT funnyone, I totally agree with you in referance to Tina’s parents and their marriage and how they choose to define it. As her mother she still have a right to be concerned about who she she is involved with. And the way she found out after Tina had been away from home just feeds into that concern. B&T just need to be patient and take her father’s advice and just show Sahar their love. I to want to know Tina’s “given name” and love to see how she interacted with Finn. Next, Willow. PPS:o).
So Sarah is not the person that she pretends to be. Tina knows and her Mother is trying to call Bette out on hearsay. Her pot is blacker than Bettes Bette isn’t married and Sarah is, Love that the rest of the family loves Bette thanks
Sad to say but Tina’s Mom is a self-righteous biatch. I feel like her Dad could do better. I’m glad that Bette is winning over the rest of the family. I like seeing her interact with them. PPS.
Love how you keep reminding us of your past chapters, what with Sarah’s open relationship. You’re such a fantastic author. I love how Bette is just being herself to win the rest of the family over. I can’t wait to see the grandparents…They’re gonna love bette and call Sarah out right?? Thanks for the post!
Ahhhh…so this is a case of do what I say not do as I do. Little hypocritical, but then it always seems to be different for your children. Bette will still get Sarah to come around. Loved the update Ally!
Open marriage….didn’t see that one coming. Where does Tina’s mother get off judging Bette about anything when she can’t even committ and stay faithful to her husband. Thanks for another great update Ally. PPS.p.s. I do iron my pillow cases and sheets. I like things to be neat and wrinkles drive me insane…SORRY!
Bette will make Sarah change her opinion soon.:) PPS!!!
Love the interaction with bette and fin… can just picture bette working with the horses…wow about tina’s mom be a bit self righteous,… if tina’s mom wants to bed other men than why bother getting married, she seems to not losing control… glad that tina and bette stood up to her. still wonder what the bug up tina’s mom is about??? :)PPS
Sara is a bitch, glad Tina stand up to her mom. Love B&T, they are so wonderful. Please post more, thanks!
whats chinese whispers??? thx
How can Sara question whats goin on between Bette and Tina. Particularly with here background. Wonderfully written as usual
Sounds like Sarah is a bit high and mighty for the skeletons in her closet. I am glad that this time Bette and Tina were able to stand together against Sarah’s temper fit. I somehow think Niall may have a few words for Sarah if she keeps this up. Thanks for a great chapter!