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Something so right – chapter 50
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mother wasn’t at lunch – her father had said that she had gone over to see a neighbour. Tina wondered if it was an excuse to avoid facing them. After lunch the others had gone out to do various chores before everyone finished to celebrate Thanksgiving together. Bette was washing up when Tina came back from talking to Finn. She walked across and held onto Bette’s back
“Does that get you out of drying the dishes ?”
“No – I just want to hold you “
“I am not complaining “
“Good “
Bette turned round after a few minutes and took hold of Tina. Gently their lips came together and for several minutes they kissed. Tina ended the kiss and snuggled close to Bette
“You won Finn over “
“He’s a nice person – very laid back “
“Yes he is – I still think he’s too tall “
“I was wondering if he’d teach me how to drive that quad bike- it was great fun “
“If he doesn’t I will “
“You can drive that thing ?”
“Yes – of course I can “
“You are full of surprises Ms Kennard “
“I am – so are you – helping feeding the horses – how did that happen ?”
Bette kissed Tina again
“I was just wandering around when her showed up. Its been a day of new experiences for me – stroking horses and handling a chicken “
Tina raised her eyebrow
“Want to explain that last one ?”
“I was looking at the chickens where you mom was – one made a bolt for freedom but I stopped it “
“You saw my mom -was everything okay ?”
“Lets go to your room “
Tina looked concerned
“I just want to talk to you in private that’s all – between us “
“Fine — come on “
Tina hurried up to her room and sat on the edge of the bed as she removed her boots. Bette came in and did the same
“I didn’t realise how dirty I got – I better take these off “
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wow.. this Carol woman has made a big mess for not kipping her mouth closed! (readers note: not all Carols are like her!!). I think they just should skip helping Tina’s mom… she deserves it for being mean to Bette. thanks for posting Ally! (as your favourite stalker girl I already have the list of questions for you. hehe)
I just love the interaction; you write it so well. PPS
Thanks for the post! I’m glad to see Bette and Tina both together standing up to Sarah. Bette will eventually winthem all over. It’s just a matter of time. I wonder who this Brenda is and are we going to get the whole story?Post when you can, your loyal fans await.
Wow, I didn’t know that she is that bad, but she has the right to be concerned about her daughter nonetheless, she HAS to see Bette’s love for Tina, I love this story Ally, it took a really different direction, you write these chapters incredibly well that I imagine myself binging there with them on the farm, I miss their city life though and all the privacy and comfort of their home. Post soon darling. Love
I love this story! I think Sarah will come around. How can you not be won over by Bette? Glad to see the rest of the family loving Bette.
AllyE, you are doing a great job with this story and we love it. Sarah, with the life she lives cheating on her husband and the children know, she doesn’t have anything to say about anyone else. She’s way worse than Bette’s past. At least Bette was having one night stands or 2-3 dates and moving on. She wasn’t married and having them all at the same time. Sarah can’t make that claim. When Tina brought out the affairs, Sarah didn’t seem to flinch about that, just normal practice for her. Geezzzz. Great chapter. Post when you can.
Great chapter, Tina’s mom was so busted she didn’t expect tina to hear what she was saying to Bette. Maybe this Brenda will come home for the holiday meal and be woman enough to tell the truth about Bette she is probably just jealous because Tina is with Bette and she only got one night.
I love how sure they are of their love – awesome and wonderful.
Way 2 go Tina calling her mom on her ‘open’ marriage. Loving this and will try to remember June 8th altho the old memory is not that HOT!!! Great story.
When are we going to find out Tina’s REAL name? You know, I’m not too distressed about ol’ Sarah. She IS still Tina’ mother, and right to be cautious. I still think Tina gets a bit on her high horse in this story. Her parents have defined what marriage means to them (like all married couples). If Niall can deal with it (I presume he could get a little side action if he wanted it), then Tina should, too. Tina and Bette can define THEIR relationship according to their wants and needs and nobody (including Tina) should get too sanctimonious about what suits others. BTW, was Sarah gone after lunch to grill Carol about the facts or was she out getting a bit of ‘afternoon delight’? Or maybe a little of both? Did Finn really call the smell of his mother’s Thanksgiving turkey unbearable? God, I thought she was a better cook than that!
Woah how can Tina’s mom be so judgemental with her sorted past and all! Can’t wait to see what happens next! PPS:)
VERY WELL PUT funnyone, I totally agree with you in referance to Tina’s parents and their marriage and how they choose to define it. As her mother she still have a right to be concerned about who she she is involved with. And the way she found out after Tina had been away from home just feeds into that concern. B&T just need to be patient and take her father’s advice and just show Sahar their love. I to want to know Tina’s “given name” and love to see how she interacted with Finn. Next, Willow. PPS:o).
So Sarah is not the person that she pretends to be. Tina knows and her Mother is trying to call Bette out on hearsay. Her pot is blacker than Bettes Bette isn’t married and Sarah is, Love that the rest of the family loves Bette thanks
Sad to say but Tina’s Mom is a self-righteous biatch. I feel like her Dad could do better. I’m glad that Bette is winning over the rest of the family. I like seeing her interact with them. PPS.
Love how you keep reminding us of your past chapters, what with Sarah’s open relationship. You’re such a fantastic author. I love how Bette is just being herself to win the rest of the family over. I can’t wait to see the grandparents…They’re gonna love bette and call Sarah out right?? Thanks for the post!
Ahhhh…so this is a case of do what I say not do as I do. Little hypocritical, but then it always seems to be different for your children. Bette will still get Sarah to come around. Loved the update Ally!
Open marriage….didn’t see that one coming. Where does Tina’s mother get off judging Bette about anything when she can’t even committ and stay faithful to her husband. Thanks for another great update Ally. PPS.p.s. I do iron my pillow cases and sheets. I like things to be neat and wrinkles drive me insane…SORRY!
Bette will make Sarah change her opinion soon.:) PPS!!!
Love the interaction with bette and fin… can just picture bette working with the horses…wow about tina’s mom be a bit self righteous,… if tina’s mom wants to bed other men than why bother getting married, she seems to not losing control… glad that tina and bette stood up to her. still wonder what the bug up tina’s mom is about??? :)PPS
Sara is a bitch, glad Tina stand up to her mom. Love B&T, they are so wonderful. Please post more, thanks!
whats chinese whispers??? thx
How can Sara question whats goin on between Bette and Tina. Particularly with here background. Wonderfully written as usual
Sounds like Sarah is a bit high and mighty for the skeletons in her closet. I am glad that this time Bette and Tina were able to stand together against Sarah’s temper fit. I somehow think Niall may have a few words for Sarah if she keeps this up. Thanks for a great chapter!