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Something so right – chapter 68
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“She turned up at home though “
“No – she went off somewhere down the coast. I drove most of the night looking for her. I finally found her on the beach. The first place we kissed was the beach. We went for a picnic on Zuma beach – we went for a walk in the sea and that was where we kissed for the first time. And that was where she was – midnight – sitting alone on the beach. She was drunk out of her head – I was so scared that she would crash “
“She hasn’t been drinking tonight has she ?”
“No – she never drinks at the launch of a show – I have only had a couple of glasses of wine.”
“So she might not be at home ?”
“Finn went home “
“And she isn’t going to want to have any company “
“No – when things are tough for her – she needs space. She needs to be alone – I have learnt that about her. “
“Are you going to have to go looking for her ?”
Tina looked at Helena
“Yes “
“Have you tried calling her ?”
“My mobile is at home – I have hardly got any pockets in this “
“Its is a beautiful dress “
“It is – I so wanted Bette to undress me tonight. So much for that wish “
“I don’t mean to upset you but when she walked out she looked devastated “
“You might have warned me Hel “
“I am sorry – she threw the ring in the bin “
“Shit – I have pretty much ruined the most important night of her year “
“She thought it would be the icing on the cake – you agreeing to marry her “
“Fuck, fuck, fuck and treble fuck “
“Find her and make her see that you still only want her “
“There are times when she simply won’t listen “
“Something that has been said about you “
“I know “
Helena pulled up outside Tina and Bette’s building – it was obvious that Bette’s car was not parked in its usual residence bay. Tina looked at Helena
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Great Chapter! Life is full of drama – there is nothing you can do about it. I hope Tina can make her see her side of things. PPS !
I hope they’ll have a chance to talk.. a lot of problems can be solved thanks to talking.
I took my eye off the ball for a second and forgot that this is Ally! She’s a TiBetter and a Drama Queen! I know you will take care of things. I hope Tina finds Bette at the beach and Bette will listen to what Tina has to say! Don’t keep us waiting too long, Ally! I’m really loving this story. PPS
Well they both have things to sort out, but hopefully Bette can see that Tina wasn’t rejecting her, just the idea. I’m sure they can talk this through if Tina ever finds her. Thanks for posting.
Always the best, ally. But Bette was pigheaded for not listening to Tina’s reasons. Is Bette really that dramatic?
Ally. I don’t think Tina would do that.
If Bette will allow Tina to talk tto her she will understand that Tina’s ideas of marriage are clouded by her parents open marriage. But they are STILL MARRIED, f’ed up or not. Tina needs to make Bette understand that it is the institution of marriage that has her turned off, NOT Bette. I just hope she has the chance to talk with her. I know you love them too AllyE and know that you will eventually fix this. RIGHT? Great as always. PPS
If Bette will allow Tina to talk tto her she will understand that Tina’s ideas of marriage are clouded by her parents open marriage. But they are STILL MARRIED, f’ed up or not. Tina needs to make Bette understand that it is the institution of marriage that has her turned off, NOT Bette. I just hope she has the chance to talk with her. I know you love them too AllyE and know that you will eventually fix this. RIGHT? Great as always. PPS
I just know Tina will fix it.
So ol’ meanie Ally is back. I didn’t see this coming. The nonchalant way Tina explained to Helena her rejection of Bette’s proposal is quite disturbing. At that moment, Alice’s description of her as heartless seemed apt. How could she be so casual about it as if they simply had a minor lovers’ quarrel? And why did she not bother to affirm her love for Bette before she rejected her proposal? Ah, drama-rama. I trust that you’ll fix this at your own time and pace, Ally. Thanks a lot for continuously writing and sharing just the same. “>
Life and partnerships are all about give and take. If something doesn’t mean that much to you, but does to your partner then why say no. Bette has made compromises for Tina (with Finn) and she has been there and cared for Tina when evreything fell apart with her Mother. Time for Tina to understand that this meant something to Bette…it’s time Tina bent for her now. Great update Ally!
Tina has to find her! I just hope she hasn’t landed in the arms of that tart Sasha!!!
Great update. I don’t agree with marriage per se either and doing it as I once did for the other person’s sake doesn’t actually mean it’s going to stick. B is going to have to hear T’s point of view and not get so bitter and twisted. Surely she can ‘feel’ T’s love for her? It doesn’t take a $6000 ring to prove or to cement love altho the gesture is nice and of course u can always pawn it when times get desperate.Love what u r doing with this. Thx.
This misunderstanding might just be the end of Bette and Tina…sigh! Tina should know Bette well enough by now to know that her reaction to a NO to her proposal wouold not go down well. I just hope Bette doesn’t do anything rash like drive drunk or take solace in another woman’s bed….what was that reporters name again? I understand Tina’s feelings about marriage but knowing how important it is to Bette I think Tina could be more accomadating and give it a try for Bette’s sake. I’m on the edge her Ally so please post soon :)
Rip my heart out, why don’t you. I LOVE Bette and Tina together. I also see both points of view. They really need to come together and decide on what’s more important being together married or not.
i love your stories and life is a little better with some drama. if everything was always perfect it would be so boring.
Gosh I can see both sides of this, hurry hurry and post again. Hopefully bette will be at the beach!!!!
After being a silent reader for years, I know that you are the drama queen – who eventually leads us out of the drama… so I’ll keep that in mind. I understand why Tina doesn’t ‘need’ the ceremony, but id having it wont hurt her, she should consider doing to for someone who marriage means something too.
Aghh such drama! Hope Tina finds Bette and fast.
Wow, what a great chapter. I couldn’t agree more with Tina’s sentiment, marriage is only as good as the committment behind it, sadly lacking in most instances. I hope Tina finds Bette soon!
liked this chapter. drama yes… but this is ally and ally always takes care of B&T so i’m looking forward to their conversation. happy weekend!
Aw man… her parents’ marriage is just that… theirs. Just cos they have their own definition of what works doesn’t mean that it has to define any potential union Tina, Finn or Willow might have. Hopefully, Tina can see that at some point. But first, she’s got to find Bette and do some heart-felt talking. Nice chapter, thanks.
Alice went over the line on tina! i think that bette should have an idea of what tina thought about marriage they talk about it enough and witness the fall out of her parents. but tina needs to realise that her and bette won’t be like her parents. i get both sides, but yet again bette took off running when something got hard, she needs to stop running for once! :)PPS
Note to Tina: Guess what? Your parents ARE still married and still together. You really need to stop being a child. If you don’t grow up, it’s probably better that you don’t marry Bette. You’re not old enough.Note to Alice: Shut up, it’s none of your business. You have no right to be angry. Bette asked Tina a question and Tina gave her Tina’s answer. You can feel bad for your friend, you have no right to shit on Tina.
Love it!!!! Ally. Tina needs to find Bette and real fast. I know Bette ran, but when your heart is bleeding you want to get away from what has caused it. Tina needs to grow up and see that what her and Bette have is not like her parents. Thank you PPS
I can’t even begin to tell you how much I want to read the next chapter of this story !!! PPS !!!!! :)
yeah hopefully she will be at the beach and are fine. PPS allyand btw. Tina get over yourself this means so fucking much to Bette.
Wow I was happy to see that you had an update just the next day… although I’m still sitting on the edge of my seat Ally… come on pal, do you have the next chapter ready yet? :o)
Hope Tina will find Bette at the beach!