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Something so right – chapter 68
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“I will get changed and go looking for her “
“If you need help “
Tina looked at her friend -she knew that Helena was feeling bad
“I fucked this up Helena – I have to fix it “
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Tina got out of the car and took her shoes off – the heels were killing her. She made her way into the building and ran up the stairs. She had no key so she hammered on the door. After a few minutes Finn opened the door. He was wearing nothing apart from the pyjamas that Tina had bought him after she had grown tired of both of them catching him naked time and time again
“Hey there – you are early – where’s B ?”
Tina walked into the apartment
“Has she been here ?”
“No – of course not. What’s wrong ?”
Tina walked into the bedroom with Finn behind her. She opened her wardrobe and took out a change of clothes – she was now getting worried – Alice had scared her – what would Bette do if she really thought that Tina had rejected her
“Tina ?”
“Bette asked me to marry her “ she explained
“And you said no of course “
Tina looked in surprise at her brother
“Why do you say that ?”
“Our folks are not the greatest advert for marriage. I feel the same – I am never going to get married – neither is Willow “
Tina sat on the bed and rubbed her face
“I love her so much Finn – she is my whole world “
“But you don’t have to marry her just to prove that “
“I don’t know – she wants happy ever after “
“And you don’t ?”
“Of course – I love her, I need her and I ache for her and I have just humiliated her and hurt her beyond words. “
Finn put his arm around her and hugged her
“You will just have to make her see that you are not going anywhere “
“She “ Tina started to crumble “ She looked so devastated. I never meant to hurt her “
Tina started to cry – somewhere Bette was alone and hurting – Tina could almost feel the pain that her lover was experiencing. Tina felt ashamed for how she had handled the proposal – but the truth was she didn’t want to marry Bette. She wanted to spend her life with Bette but she really didn’t see the need for some quasi religious ceremony to prove her love for Bette Porter. It was the way in which she most differed from Bette – a difference she knew would only be resolved if one of them changed their position. Could she marry Bette just because of what it meant to her ?
Finn held her and rocked her back and forward
“We will find her “ he said
Tina eased away “I have to find her Finn – she is somewhere alone – I can’t bear the thought of what she is going through “
“I could look for her as well “
“No – I need to do this myself. This is my mess “
“And I am your brother “
Tina was so glad that he was here – she hugged him again and stood up
“I better go and get changed “
“Tina “
Tina looked at Finn
“Nothing is going to stop the two of you loving one another “
“I hope you are right – she thinks I have rejected her “
Tina picked up her change of clothes and headed into the bathroom. As she undressed and dressed again she cried – she was afraid that she had destroyed the best thing that had ever happened to her.
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Great Chapter! Life is full of drama – there is nothing you can do about it. I hope Tina can make her see her side of things. PPS !
I hope they’ll have a chance to talk.. a lot of problems can be solved thanks to talking.
I took my eye off the ball for a second and forgot that this is Ally! She’s a TiBetter and a Drama Queen! I know you will take care of things. I hope Tina finds Bette at the beach and Bette will listen to what Tina has to say! Don’t keep us waiting too long, Ally! I’m really loving this story. PPS
Well they both have things to sort out, but hopefully Bette can see that Tina wasn’t rejecting her, just the idea. I’m sure they can talk this through if Tina ever finds her. Thanks for posting.
Always the best, ally. But Bette was pigheaded for not listening to Tina’s reasons. Is Bette really that dramatic?
Ally. I don’t think Tina would do that.
If Bette will allow Tina to talk tto her she will understand that Tina’s ideas of marriage are clouded by her parents open marriage. But they are STILL MARRIED, f’ed up or not. Tina needs to make Bette understand that it is the institution of marriage that has her turned off, NOT Bette. I just hope she has the chance to talk with her. I know you love them too AllyE and know that you will eventually fix this. RIGHT? Great as always. PPS
If Bette will allow Tina to talk tto her she will understand that Tina’s ideas of marriage are clouded by her parents open marriage. But they are STILL MARRIED, f’ed up or not. Tina needs to make Bette understand that it is the institution of marriage that has her turned off, NOT Bette. I just hope she has the chance to talk with her. I know you love them too AllyE and know that you will eventually fix this. RIGHT? Great as always. PPS
I just know Tina will fix it.
So ol’ meanie Ally is back. I didn’t see this coming. The nonchalant way Tina explained to Helena her rejection of Bette’s proposal is quite disturbing. At that moment, Alice’s description of her as heartless seemed apt. How could she be so casual about it as if they simply had a minor lovers’ quarrel? And why did she not bother to affirm her love for Bette before she rejected her proposal? Ah, drama-rama. I trust that you’ll fix this at your own time and pace, Ally. Thanks a lot for continuously writing and sharing just the same. “>
Life and partnerships are all about give and take. If something doesn’t mean that much to you, but does to your partner then why say no. Bette has made compromises for Tina (with Finn) and she has been there and cared for Tina when evreything fell apart with her Mother. Time for Tina to understand that this meant something to Bette…it’s time Tina bent for her now. Great update Ally!
Tina has to find her! I just hope she hasn’t landed in the arms of that tart Sasha!!!
Great update. I don’t agree with marriage per se either and doing it as I once did for the other person’s sake doesn’t actually mean it’s going to stick. B is going to have to hear T’s point of view and not get so bitter and twisted. Surely she can ‘feel’ T’s love for her? It doesn’t take a $6000 ring to prove or to cement love altho the gesture is nice and of course u can always pawn it when times get desperate.Love what u r doing with this. Thx.
This misunderstanding might just be the end of Bette and Tina…sigh! Tina should know Bette well enough by now to know that her reaction to a NO to her proposal wouold not go down well. I just hope Bette doesn’t do anything rash like drive drunk or take solace in another woman’s bed….what was that reporters name again? I understand Tina’s feelings about marriage but knowing how important it is to Bette I think Tina could be more accomadating and give it a try for Bette’s sake. I’m on the edge her Ally so please post soon :)
Rip my heart out, why don’t you. I LOVE Bette and Tina together. I also see both points of view. They really need to come together and decide on what’s more important being together married or not.
i love your stories and life is a little better with some drama. if everything was always perfect it would be so boring.
Gosh I can see both sides of this, hurry hurry and post again. Hopefully bette will be at the beach!!!!
After being a silent reader for years, I know that you are the drama queen – who eventually leads us out of the drama… so I’ll keep that in mind. I understand why Tina doesn’t ‘need’ the ceremony, but id having it wont hurt her, she should consider doing to for someone who marriage means something too.
Aghh such drama! Hope Tina finds Bette and fast.
Wow, what a great chapter. I couldn’t agree more with Tina’s sentiment, marriage is only as good as the committment behind it, sadly lacking in most instances. I hope Tina finds Bette soon!
liked this chapter. drama yes… but this is ally and ally always takes care of B&T so i’m looking forward to their conversation. happy weekend!
Aw man… her parents’ marriage is just that… theirs. Just cos they have their own definition of what works doesn’t mean that it has to define any potential union Tina, Finn or Willow might have. Hopefully, Tina can see that at some point. But first, she’s got to find Bette and do some heart-felt talking. Nice chapter, thanks.
Alice went over the line on tina! i think that bette should have an idea of what tina thought about marriage they talk about it enough and witness the fall out of her parents. but tina needs to realise that her and bette won’t be like her parents. i get both sides, but yet again bette took off running when something got hard, she needs to stop running for once! :)PPS
Note to Tina: Guess what? Your parents ARE still married and still together. You really need to stop being a child. If you don’t grow up, it’s probably better that you don’t marry Bette. You’re not old enough.Note to Alice: Shut up, it’s none of your business. You have no right to be angry. Bette asked Tina a question and Tina gave her Tina’s answer. You can feel bad for your friend, you have no right to shit on Tina.
Love it!!!! Ally. Tina needs to find Bette and real fast. I know Bette ran, but when your heart is bleeding you want to get away from what has caused it. Tina needs to grow up and see that what her and Bette have is not like her parents. Thank you PPS
I can’t even begin to tell you how much I want to read the next chapter of this story !!! PPS !!!!! :)
yeah hopefully she will be at the beach and are fine. PPS allyand btw. Tina get over yourself this means so fucking much to Bette.
Wow I was happy to see that you had an update just the next day… although I’m still sitting on the edge of my seat Ally… come on pal, do you have the next chapter ready yet? :o)
Hope Tina will find Bette at the beach!