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Something so right
Chapter 72
Alice parked her car as close to the front of the Desert Palm hospital to allow Bette to jump from the passenger seat and hurry inside. Alice and James had taken their life in their hands and refused to allow Bette to drive when she had been drinking whiskey. Alice actually didn’t think that Bette was drunk but she was as agitated as she had ever seen her- she was in no state to be trusted to drive because of how impatient she was. Alice had seen the colour drain from Bette’s face when Helena had told her that Tina had been somehow involved in the fire at the apartment. Bette was no longer angry with Tina for refusing her marriage proposal – she was terrified that something had happened to her beloved. Alice parked her car and hurried inside. She was aware that Bette was likely to tear apart any ill informed receptionist who didn’t know where Tina was being treated. Alice found that Bette was standing waiting to be served
“Oh for fucking fucks sake “
“Bette – take several deep breaths “
“Come on “ Bette acted as if she hadn’t heard Alice. Alice touched Bette’s arm
“She will be okay “
Bette looked at her “I hope to God that she is. God Alice – what the hell happened ?”
“We will find out soon enough “
Finally the receptionist was free and Bette stepped forward
“I am Bette Porter – I got a message that my partner Tina Kennard has been admitted”
Alice prayed that there would be no delay in refusing to tell Bette what she needed to know – same sex relationships were not always accepted.
“Yes Ms Porter – if you take the stairs to the first floor – Ms Peabody is there “
“How is she ? “ Bette began
“The doctor will be able to tell you more accurately what the problems are “
Bette nodded and hurried towards the stairs – she took them two at a time – Alice did her best to keep up with her. Helena was standing outside a small waiting room – she was getting herself a small beaker of water
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Boy that was an amazing update! I’m so glad Tina is going to be fine… she is, isn’t she? Ally? *raises eyebrow* LOL And well, even if it was because of a tragedy, at least Bette came to her senses. Let’s hope they can start working out some issues! Thanks Ally! xoxo
Thank goodness, sorry about u being late but I’m all for fitting in life along the way. It figures that Angela Robinson directed 603. She should do them all. She is by far the best at bringing out the characters! Thanks for saving Tina, could you have imagined your inbox otherwise!!! Now you just have to work on the Lwing stupidass Bette. THKS. PPS
Have I told you lately how amazing you are…..well..there said it. thanks and pps
Poor Bette – guilt is a bitch! I’m glad Tina is on the mend because Bette has some major sucking up to do, and she may have to deal with Tina’s mother too!
Thank you, Tina is going to be okay.to be here to fight another. She can sure dig her heels in,Porter has met her match. Tina will never be lost in Bette’s shadow.but bette might be lost in hers. thanks
Thanks for bringing a ray of sunshine into my otherwise gloomy day.
Great Chapter Ally!!! Glad Tina is OK. Now maybe her and Bette will talk things out. Thank you
Nothing like a tragedy to knowck some sense into ya! Glad Tina is going to be ok, and I hope that her and Bette work out this marriage thing and come to an understanding with one another. PPS
Glad Tina will be okay. Now Bette and Tina can get on with erasing their disagreement about their marriage ideas when she is better. The key is communication every step of the way in any decision making they have to do. Thanks for posting AllyE. Post when you can.
glad tina is okay! phew! now that bette has her haed out of ass, they can work things out! :)PPS
Tina is a very loving person and I know she will forgive Bette. I hope this opens both of their eyes that they could of lost one another and maybe they will now meet in the middle!!! Great Post!! :)
Great chapter – thanks
Great chapter Ally. I don’t think either of them should do any sucking up to each other. Both of them had a point of view that they should have calmly discussed…but they didn’t and it turned a little ugly. They both need to take this situation for what it is…a time to reflect on what it would be like to be without each other, so they can see the value of compromise. Can’t wait for the next one Ally!
No need for Bette to feel guilty. It was all coincidental. Just discuss the issues calmly w/o rancor or sarcasm. You see what your life would be w/o Tina. If Bette and Tina were married, would that make the situation any better? PPVS.
Loving Finn right about now….wise youth! As for TLW S6E3…loved the laughter! I was just cracking up at poor Helena on the t/mill! It’s also rather telling of Bette’s growth from S1 that she could still kick back with friends and laugh after losing her job with all the demands currently on her (adoption/renovation). I really hope that she and Tina can make a run at this…
Great update, I hope Tina’s mom doesn’t come and try to push Bette aside. PS
It’s sad that something like this has to happen to get Bette and Tina to see what is important. I’m glad that T is going to be ok. Hopefully, now Bette can get her fears resolved and Tina would accept her proposal.
Bravo Ally! That was such a sweet and tender chapter. I love the interaction b/w Bette and Finn. ou can tell that those two have really bonded and really look at each other as family. It’s sad it tokk an almost tragedy to bring Bette and Tina back together but hopefully they’ll be able to work through their marriage issues when Tina gets back home. PPS!
Great story !!!!!!!!! THANKS !!
This is wonderful, I am glad Tina is OK, and this incident brought Bette her awareness. I can’t wait for them to get back together as they were before, Thank you so much Ally, you always have a way to fix things when they go wrong, and I love that about you. Post soon. Love
Well I just caught up on the last few chapters and what an emotional roller coaster. I hope that Tina really is ok and that when things calm down they can explore the whole marriage thing some more. I agree with Helena that it is early and they need to just be together some more. Thanks for posting!
Whew! Hope the incident brings them both clarity
I’ve been a silent reader of all your stories and love them all but just had to let you know what an amazing writer you are. Thank you for saving Tina and although I know you are the drama queen let them sort things out. Thanks Ally. PPS
Thanks god Tina is ok, hope she will wake up and get better soon. Please post more, thanks!
Thanks for the update Ally. I love the interaction between Bette and Finn, but some how I don’t think that Bette will be sleeping in the chair that much. PPS :o).