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    Something so right – chapter 72

    “God “ Bette tried to dry her eyes “ I am such a utter ass “

    “No one will argue with you – but your priority has to be Tina. All the crap about marriage and proposals and rings – forget it until she is on her feet “

    “I was so angry with her and she was just as mad with me “

    “Helena is right – just let it go Bette”

    “Are you going to ring her folks ?”

    “God – do you think I should ?”

    “Wait until Finn arrives “

    “Ms Peabody – ah- is one of you Bette Porter ?”

    “I am “ Bette stood up

    “Dr Hope “

    Bette shook her hand

    “Would you like to come with me ?”

    Bette followed her – she could feel how shaky her legs felt. The doctor lead her to a small room. Tina was lying in the bed. She had an oxygen mask on her face and her left hand was bandaged

    “Oh babe “ Bette wasn’t sure how she was still standing up

    “Tina is a hero “

    Bette couldn’t stop crying

    “She’s amazing – how is she doing ?”

    “She inhaled a lot of smoke- as did Mr Proctor and his grand-daughter Kate. They owe their lives to the remarkable efforts of your partner”

    “Is she going to be okay ?”

    “We have sedated her – she was trying so hard to breathe that it was making her worse. So we sedated her – she is sleeping and much more comfortable “

    “When can I take her home ?”

    “We would like to keep her in for at least two nights – maybe longer. She is a healthy young woman- she doesn’t smoke so she is better equipped than many people to recover. She will need rest. We need to keep testing her lungs – she will be spitting out a lot of bad stuff for a while. We are just anxious that none of her damage is permanent “

    “Is it going to be ?”

    “I wouldn’t like to say yes or no but I would think that she just needs some good pure oxygen and rest and she will be fine “

    “How long will she be sleeping ?”

    Comments

    1. Boy that was an amazing update! I’m so glad Tina is going to be fine… she is, isn’t she? Ally? *raises eyebrow* LOL And well, even if it was because of a tragedy, at least Bette came to her senses. Let’s hope they can start working out some issues! Thanks Ally! xoxo

    2. Thank goodness, sorry about u being late but I’m all for fitting in life along the way. It figures that Angela Robinson directed 603. She should do them all. She is by far the best at bringing out the characters! Thanks for saving Tina, could you have imagined your inbox otherwise!!! Now you just have to work on the Lwing stupidass Bette. THKS. PPS

    3. Poor Bette – guilt is a bitch! I’m glad Tina is on the mend because Bette has some major sucking up to do, and she may have to deal with Tina’s mother too!

    4. Thank you, Tina is going to be okay.to be here to fight another. She can sure dig her heels in,Porter has met her match. Tina will never be lost in Bette’s shadow.but bette might be lost in hers. thanks

    5. Nothing like a tragedy to knowck some sense into ya! Glad Tina is going to be ok, and I hope that her and Bette work out this marriage thing and come to an understanding with one another. PPS

    6. Glad Tina will be okay. Now Bette and Tina can get on with erasing their disagreement about their marriage ideas when she is better. The key is communication every step of the way in any decision making they have to do. Thanks for posting AllyE. Post when you can.

    7. Tina is a very loving person and I know she will forgive Bette. I hope this opens both of their eyes that they could of lost one another and maybe they will now meet in the middle!!! Great Post!! :)

    8. Great chapter Ally. I don’t think either of them should do any sucking up to each other. Both of them had a point of view that they should have calmly discussed…but they didn’t and it turned a little ugly. They both need to take this situation for what it is…a time to reflect on what it would be like to be without each other, so they can see the value of compromise. Can’t wait for the next one Ally!

    9. No need for Bette to feel guilty. It was all coincidental. Just discuss the issues calmly w/o rancor or sarcasm. You see what your life would be w/o Tina. If Bette and Tina were married, would that make the situation any better? PPVS.

    10. Loving Finn right about now….wise youth! As for TLW S6E3…loved the laughter! I was just cracking up at poor Helena on the t/mill! It’s also rather telling of Bette’s growth from S1 that she could still kick back with friends and laugh after losing her job with all the demands currently on her (adoption/renovation). I really hope that she and Tina can make a run at this…

    11. It’s sad that something like this has to happen to get Bette and Tina to see what is important. I’m glad that T is going to be ok. Hopefully, now Bette can get her fears resolved and Tina would accept her proposal.

    12. Bravo Ally! That was such a sweet and tender chapter. I love the interaction b/w Bette and Finn. ou can tell that those two have really bonded and really look at each other as family. It’s sad it tokk an almost tragedy to bring Bette and Tina back together but hopefully they’ll be able to work through their marriage issues when Tina gets back home. PPS!

    13. This is wonderful, I am glad Tina is OK, and this incident brought Bette her awareness. I can’t wait for them to get back together as they were before, Thank you so much Ally, you always have a way to fix things when they go wrong, and I love that about you. Post soon. Love

    14. Well I just caught up on the last few chapters and what an emotional roller coaster. I hope that Tina really is ok and that when things calm down they can explore the whole marriage thing some more. I agree with Helena that it is early and they need to just be together some more. Thanks for posting!

    15. I’ve been a silent reader of all your stories and love them all but just had to let you know what an amazing writer you are. Thank you for saving Tina and although I know you are the drama queen let them sort things out. Thanks Ally. PPS

    16. Thanks for the update Ally. I love the interaction between Bette and Finn, but some how I don’t think that Bette will be sleeping in the chair that much. PPS :o).

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