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Something so right – chapter 84
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“If you want me to confront him I will “ Elizabeth said
“I would like some answers from your father “
“I have to think this through “ Bette looked at the woman who had so suddenly walked into her life and looked like she would be a permanent fixture if Bette wanted her to be “ What do I call you for a start ?”
“Elizabeth is fine Bette – I don’t expect you to call me the m word until you wanted to – if ever “
Bette looked around the garden for a few minutes
“If you have been dry for 10 years – why has it taken you ten years to come and find me ?”
“I don’t want any of this to sound like a series of excuses. When you were at Yale I thought that me showing up would hurt your studies. After Yale I didn’t know what happened to you until two years ago. I was telling Tina – Hannah started to get interested in art – just collecting small pieces. We were at a party two years ago and someone said – oh you should check out this little new gallery that has opened – the Porter Gallery. I prayed that it was you but I had been disappointed so many times in looking for you – for about two years I thought you were a lecturer in New York. We went to the gallery and you were standing there looking just devastating beautiful – I nearly fainted – I was actually in the same room as my daughter. I went to pieces and it took me six months before I dared step into the gallery again. After all the build up you were on holiday “
“Hawaii babe “ Tina said
Bette grinned “ Hawaii is very special to Tina and I “
“So I hear – anyway – I hung back because I just didn’t know what to do. But I was obsessed with you – with trying to find out the slightest thing about you. I know it must sound like I have been stalking you Bette but – you are my daughter Bette – I am not sorry. You have no idea how much sitting her with both of you means to me – to see you and watch how you interact and how you move and – God I do sound like a stalker”
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I don´t think I can say it better than Honda90. You truly are an amazing writer. I wish I could articulate it better – whether you write about Dalmations, A wonderful life, Birthday presents, College years, presidential tantrums, break ups, Beatles quotes or Santa Claus – you captivate and leave us spellbound. However you do, what you do, please don´t ever stop.
I’m hoping Elizabeth will be with Bette when she confronts Melvin. Bette is so vulnerable right now. This brings back memories for me to when I saw my father for the first time when I was 30 years old.
glad these two are working on things, next is melvin turn!!! :)PPS
AllyE, you really are just freaking amazing. This was a beautiful chapter. Finally, they talk and are beginning that all important mother daughter relationship that they have both missed and needed very much. I thought when they both started to cry, they would embrace, maybe it’s too soon for them. Our Tina is way too cool in all this and of course, she is Bette’s rock, as always. Thanks AllyE for such a lovely chapter for Mother’s Day. This chapter proves the reason for the day. Thanks so much and Happy Mother’s Day to your mother and hope she is feeling well and the both of you are doing ok. Thanks for posting.
This is a great chapter! All the emotions making their way to the surface. I can’t wait to see who attacks Melvin first. It’s such a great story! Thanks for posting!
Great chappie, the emotions you described were incredible. I think Bette was a lot more forgiving than I would be under the circumstances. I can’t wait for Bette’s discussion with Melvin.
that was an amazing chapter! the way you right makes us feel like we are right there in the garden with them. loved the interaction between the 3 of them.
POWERFUL chapter. The emotions are depicted so well, I feel over-whelmed like Bette. thank you for another great chapter.
I think Melvin will find himself in some mighty deep shit.
What a lovely twist so close to Mother’s Day.
Absolutely great!!!!! Plz post more as soon as u can.
Wow, you could really feel Bette and Elizabeth’s emotions in this chapter. The anguish over the years missed between them and both feeling unsure how the other would feel about them if they were to ever be found. Hahahaha…Melvin isn’t going to know what hit him. Can’t wait for your next update Ally!
Todays lesson is DO Not TRUST A HAIRY LEG MAN. Today is get Melvin day. Glad that Elizabeth took the time to seek Bette out, about time. Tina likes her,that is a plus for her. Hope Bette learns to love her.
I love love love love love this story! You’re sooooo amazing Ally!
Wow! What an awesome update! Thank you :)
This is just so right. PPS
You have the talent to just pull your readers into the story and bring us to the emotional level you set in your story. As one of your commentors said’Freaking amazing!!’ PPVVS
AWESOME. I cannot wait to find out what Melvin has to say, and I hope Elizabeth confronts him with Bette. Thnx.. PPS
It’s nice to see this new relationship build and I also like that there are so many layers of grey and not only black and white. Melvin clearly had done some mistakes, but it couldn’t be all bad because Bette turned out really amazing. I’m interested what he thinks and how he will react.
You have an amazing ability to keep the reader engaged, the way you continue with stories is really a credit to your writing talent. Just when something could be winding down you pull out a show stopper. As readers I’d say none of us want you to ever stop!!!! I can’t say which is better, I love all the stories!!! Thanks PPS!!!
SO AMAZING!!!! Ally Thank you PPS