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Something so right – chapter 84
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Bette picked up her coffee and took a long drink – there was none left.
“I am going to put the coffee maker on “ she decided
“Are you a coffee snob like your daughter ? “ Tina asked
“Yes “ Elizabeth replied
“Okay “ Tina said “ Both went to Yale, both coffee snobs and both gay – I am going to have my hands filled with the two of you “
Bette laughed “It looks like that “
“And I also now know what you are going to look like in 25 years – stunning “
“Thank you Tina – its very sweet of you to say “
“Lets see what else the two of you have in common – are you always and I mean always on time ?”
“Yes – when we are invited for dinner and someone says 8 for 8:30 I am the one who is outside at 7:50 arguing with Hannah “
Bette laughed at the look on Tina’s face
“Oh God help me “
“I am sure that’s just a coincidence “ Elizabeth said. Tina could see that she was thrilled at the ways in which she was like her daughter. Bette stroked Tina’s thigh and stood up
“I am going to make that coffee – this might turn into a long breakfast – is that a problem Elizabeth ?”
“You really think that I want to leave you ?”
“We might not get on our run until later Ti “
“Not a problem sweetie – it gives you an excuse for when I run you into the ground “ Tina looked at Elizabeth “How strong is your competitive streak ?”
“Infuriatingly strong “
“Oh boy – double trouble “
Bette went inside the house and filled up the coffee maker and sat down to watch it brew – this was just unbelievable. She needed to get her head around this unexpected turn up of events.
She looked up as Tina came through carrying the three empty coffee containers. She dropped them in the bin and walked across to Bette. She stepped into Bette’s embrace and they held one another for several minutes without speaking. Finally Tina eased and pulled across a chair
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I don´t think I can say it better than Honda90. You truly are an amazing writer. I wish I could articulate it better – whether you write about Dalmations, A wonderful life, Birthday presents, College years, presidential tantrums, break ups, Beatles quotes or Santa Claus – you captivate and leave us spellbound. However you do, what you do, please don´t ever stop.
I’m hoping Elizabeth will be with Bette when she confronts Melvin. Bette is so vulnerable right now. This brings back memories for me to when I saw my father for the first time when I was 30 years old.
glad these two are working on things, next is melvin turn!!! :)PPS
AllyE, you really are just freaking amazing. This was a beautiful chapter. Finally, they talk and are beginning that all important mother daughter relationship that they have both missed and needed very much. I thought when they both started to cry, they would embrace, maybe it’s too soon for them. Our Tina is way too cool in all this and of course, she is Bette’s rock, as always. Thanks AllyE for such a lovely chapter for Mother’s Day. This chapter proves the reason for the day. Thanks so much and Happy Mother’s Day to your mother and hope she is feeling well and the both of you are doing ok. Thanks for posting.
This is a great chapter! All the emotions making their way to the surface. I can’t wait to see who attacks Melvin first. It’s such a great story! Thanks for posting!
Great chappie, the emotions you described were incredible. I think Bette was a lot more forgiving than I would be under the circumstances. I can’t wait for Bette’s discussion with Melvin.
that was an amazing chapter! the way you right makes us feel like we are right there in the garden with them. loved the interaction between the 3 of them.
POWERFUL chapter. The emotions are depicted so well, I feel over-whelmed like Bette. thank you for another great chapter.
I think Melvin will find himself in some mighty deep shit.
What a lovely twist so close to Mother’s Day.
Absolutely great!!!!! Plz post more as soon as u can.
Wow, you could really feel Bette and Elizabeth’s emotions in this chapter. The anguish over the years missed between them and both feeling unsure how the other would feel about them if they were to ever be found. Hahahaha…Melvin isn’t going to know what hit him. Can’t wait for your next update Ally!
Todays lesson is DO Not TRUST A HAIRY LEG MAN. Today is get Melvin day. Glad that Elizabeth took the time to seek Bette out, about time. Tina likes her,that is a plus for her. Hope Bette learns to love her.
I love love love love love this story! You’re sooooo amazing Ally!
Wow! What an awesome update! Thank you :)
This is just so right. PPS
You have the talent to just pull your readers into the story and bring us to the emotional level you set in your story. As one of your commentors said’Freaking amazing!!’ PPVVS
AWESOME. I cannot wait to find out what Melvin has to say, and I hope Elizabeth confronts him with Bette. Thnx.. PPS
It’s nice to see this new relationship build and I also like that there are so many layers of grey and not only black and white. Melvin clearly had done some mistakes, but it couldn’t be all bad because Bette turned out really amazing. I’m interested what he thinks and how he will react.
You have an amazing ability to keep the reader engaged, the way you continue with stories is really a credit to your writing talent. Just when something could be winding down you pull out a show stopper. As readers I’d say none of us want you to ever stop!!!! I can’t say which is better, I love all the stories!!! Thanks PPS!!!
SO AMAZING!!!! Ally Thank you PPS