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Something so right – Chapter 86
“How are your legs after all that running ?” Tina asked to hopefully convey to Bette that she was not in trouble. The problem was Bette could be dumb at times – in the nicest way.
“Mostly I am fine but sometimes they throb “
“I will have to see what I can do to take care of you “
“I am sorry for how long I was out Ti “
“Bette – really I don’t mind. Its perfectly natural that you should want to spend time with your mother. How is she ?”
“Fine – I could see the look of disappointment on her face when I said that I had to leave “
“You could have stayed “ Tina said
“No – a lot has happened as you say and I need to be able to process that “
“Have you thought about seeing your father ?”
“Yes – and I think that if I see him straight away it might be too much for me. This is huge for me Ti “
“I know that babe “
Bette looked at Tina and for the zillionth time it felt – she thanks the deity that brought them together. Tina would never know – no one would ever know how much Bette loved the soft spoken blonde with the crazy sense of humour and heart full of love. Bette reached out her hand and took Tina’s.
“Come on “
“Where are we going ?”
“Just come with me “
Tina put down her coffee and allowed Bette to lead her back into the house. Bette went to their bedroom. She looked at the brunette
“Yes – I will make the bed in a minute “
“That’s not what I mean “ Bette said and pulled Tina closer
“So what do you mean ?”
“This “
Bette pulled Tina close and put her arms around her. Bette kissed Tina softly on the lips – the kiss was unhurried and tender. It went on for several seconds before Bette tugged Tina closer and upped the level of the kiss – this one was much more passionate and left Tina gasping for air when Bette ended the kiss.
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i love your story, your so talented!!! bette is so sweet and in love with tina and tina is so caring and special
Oh, Ally, great chapter, but horribly cruel of you to taunt us with those 15 chapters. You know we’re all going to be obsessively refreshing the page to see if you posted, right? ;)
Great update! :)PPS
Great chapter, cute and then very hot, then back to cute. :)
I’m with Suejan on the one a day pstigs. Please don’t torment us too long.
Great chapter Ally…. Bette and Tina are so cute and hot at the same time in this chapter Anyways …Now come on treat us to those “ready for posting” 15 chapters you teased us with earlier . I have pressed the refresh button on this site about as many times and I cannot see them yet :-)
Thanks for this update. I just love this story. I’m so glad Bette and her mother are getting along so well. And if things get rough between them Bette has Tina to lean on.
Great update. I’m hoping there’s no drama for Bette with the return of her mother. PPS
Hey total pussy cat! Slight drama queen—hahahahahaha, the Ultimate Queen of drama queens more like it. Wonderful chapter again AllyE, as always. So glad Bette is getting to know her mother and she is so much like Bette that it is scary. Glad Bette thinks she is sweet and is enjoying getting to talk with her and know her a little better each time. Good for both of them. Love the way you are writing this story AllyE. Love it. Have a great weekend.
WOOhoo … awesome update :)
O.K. Ally…cough up some of those 16 chapters this weekend. Lovely update…so what drama are we getting treated to next in this story?
too sweet. and what azmana said!!!that many chapters deserves an audience now!!
What a nice way to spend Saturday morning!
Great update again. Thank you and I can’t wait to read those chapters you’ve got on your other story. Thank you again :)
Thanks!
Always great but unleash those NYM chapters, you evil woman!. ;-)
That was wonderful and B&T are hot, like Bette with her mom. Please post more, thanks!
I’m sure all that hot sex made Bette feel better for the moment, but will it cure her obviously tortured soul?
i don’t have an evil bone in my body – total pussy cat. though i might be a slight drama queen !!
Great als always – Thanks. Yeah a little drama, but by the end you fix it. Love all your stories. PPS
Great chapter! I’m glad Bette is getting to know her mom, and she was so sweet with the contrition and wanting to love Tina up to make up for her absence. Tina was spot on with her wounded puppy thought, haha! Is there anything we can bribe you with to convince you to let us read the new NYM chapters? :-)
So 15 chapters mean dat for the next 15 days we going have a chapter a day from u YAY can’t wait))Great s usual PPS