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    Something so right – Chapter 85

    Story written on July 4, 2009 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette struggles – conversation at the beach

    Something so right

    　

    Chapter 85

    　

    　

     

    Tina put the phone down and walked through to the garden – Bette was sitting on the edge of the decking looking across the garden – she was still wearing her running kit. Tina sat down

     

    “Why don’t you have a bath ?”

     

    “I should – its going to hurt tomorrow isn’t it ?”

     

    “Well you ran twice the distance you usually do – I would say that you might need a massage tomorrow even before you can get out of bed “

     

    Bette chuckled and taking Tina’s hand she kissed it

     

    “I like your massages “

     

    “I know that – is that why you did it ?”

     

    “No – I had a lot on my mind “

     

    “I know that babe”

     

    “She’s really nice isn’t she ?”

     

    “She is “

     

    “It doesn’t take away how long she stayed out of my life though “

     

    “No – sadly it doesn’t but its up to you and her how you tackle the next 27 years. She wants to be a part of your life and she also wants to explain things to you – she didn’t expect the red carpet treatment “

     

    Bette stayed silent – Tina rested her hand on Bette’s thigh and stroked the bare skin – pressing her thumb into Bette’s flesh. Bette watched Tina as she touched and caressed her

     

    “I shouldn’t have run as far – thanks for understanding “

     

    “I don’t know how you are as calm as you are – I would be a mess “

     

     

    “I am a mess “ Bette said “ That’s why I ran so far – running always calms my mind. Regardless of what else is happening in my life I can empty my mind as I run. The running wasn’t working today -so I ran further and further “

     

    “Did it work eventually ?”

     

    “A little bit “

     

     

    “Well regardless of what you think the running helped you in some way. Exercise helps you cope with pain – well it always has with me – I rang for our dinner by the way “

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    3. I love B’s beautiful story of her life w/T. B is understandably wary of Elizabeth, but at least she is open to the possibility of allowing her into her life. PPS!

    4. Gosh, I have been waiting for this update forever. I am glad to see it. I’m loving this story so much right now. I want to see how this relationship between those two unfolds. Keep it coming, please.

    5. What a delight to see this today! Ally this was beautifully written. Tina’s sensitivity to Bette is wonderful and I love the conversations Bette and her Mom are having. I’m glad your weekend was so good. I love it when you’re in the writing mood!

    8. Nice one!!!! Listen to Tina Bette. You need some loving about now. I’m eager to learn more about Elizabeth and Hannah so hoping there will be some family time. Thx for the entertainment.

    9. Thanks for updating this. I love this story. I love the way you have written Tina to be a strong person with convictions and the confidence to stand behind them. She really is a good match with Bette.

    10. I love this story and have so missed it! Thank you for posting and it’s excellent that Bette’s talking to her mother and telling her how she feels. Love how Tina is there for Bette as wel. Thank you again for posting :)

    11. Yehey! Its been sometime on this one. And great writing as ever. The reconciliation of Bette and her mother may take longer than they were apart, but its a start that they are both willing to get on. Tina is so good for Bette. PPS

    12. This is a great story AllyE and am so happy that Bette is talking to her mother. I think they will be great for each other and I can’t wait until they confront Melvin and get his feeble explanations as to his actions. Bette will have to be extra kind to Tina. Thanks for posting.

    13. I so love this story!!! I an glad Bette is talking to her mother about what she is feeling. Now I can not wait to see how Bette makes it up to Tina. Thank you Ally

    14. I didn’t realize how much I’ve missed all your postings til now….Where the heck have you been, pls don’t go away there again or at least take us with you!!! Can’t wait for more, TKS

    15. Your writing is so descriptive. I am actually feeling Bette’s pain and longing for her mother to be back in her life yet Bette being circumspect about this happening. She has that little girl fear of abandonment. That’s what your writing does.

    18. Your writing is so fantastic… I’m really glad you decided to come back. Bette’s confusion and fear and joy at having her mother back all come through so clearly. And Tina is being so great at supporting her through it.

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