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Something so right – chapter 89+90
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“Come on Bette – -come on Helena “
There was barely a second or two between Bette crossing the line before Helena. Tina hurried up to them
“Are you two both okay – Helena- what did you do to your knee ?”
Helena looked at Bette
“I slipped – nothing serious darling – not as serious as the blow to my pride of being beaten by the two of you sex addicts. I do train regularly unlike the two of you who just run when you are actually not in bed – so make my suffering worse – what was your time Tina ?”
“Seven minutes better than you two “
Tina grinned
“Oh God “ Bette said
“I do not want to know what sexual forfeit’s the two are planning – I just assume that Bette is going to be playing to Tina’s tune “
“Something like that “ Bette replied
“Got something to say to me Bette ?”
Bette straightened herself up and smiled
“You rock – you are the superior athlete – TODAY “
“That suits me “ Tina replied “Lets go and get a drink and collect our medals “
It was a short walk to a tented area where they could collect their bags – all around them were tired and happy runners who were celebrating with their friends and family. Tina went to get three glasses of coke leaving Bette and Helena alone
“Seven minutes – what does that entail for you ?”
Bette looked at Helena
“Seven days of being her sex slave “
Helena smiled “ Are you going to tell her ?”
“No – and neither are you “
“You didn’t have to stop to see if I was okay “
“I did – this is just a race – you are our friend “
“So you are not as competitive as you make out “
“Oh God yes I am – totally but being her sex slave is hardly a punishment is it ? The next time we do a 10km – I will train and win. There has been so much going on with my mother and everything and its been nuts. She’s
been amazing – I owe her 106 days of being her slave”
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I’m another fan who is very glad you’re posting again.I love this story for the many connections and strong characters.
gosh your craving me crazy with all there teasing. HAVE A HEART WOMAN I DONT HAVE A GF!!! this story rocks!!! i love it and i wonder what will happen with bettes mam
I am allways thrilled to see your name when I open the site.
I’m still failing to comprehend how Elizabeth is supposed to perform according to Tina’s mutually exclusive requests that she back off and yet at the same time throw every detail of the last 27 years at Bette immediately. And I’m further baffled by Tina wanting to have a three way with some random guy from the Pyrenees while she and Bette war sexy underthings. Hope this will all be cleared up for me in the next chapter.
Ally, you have been busy, 104 chapters of this story just sitting there waiting for us. GREAT!!!! I loved the interaction with Bette, Tina and Kit. I hope that Kit becomes an allay for Tina when she needs to calm Bette down. When Tina had told Elizabeth to give Bette everything, wouldn’t that freak Bette out??????? As for the 10k run, I thought you were going to sneak Bette past Tina, but you thru us a curve. I would have felt like shit when Elizabeth gave me a check for the BCR after blowing for off. AWESOME update, Ally. I am ecstatic that you have come back to us.
10k run? I will be dead tired because of the thought. But to read good about it mainly in your story. :o)
Ally… I love this story!!! The race was definitely interesting to see play out, i actually thought Tina might let Bette win to get her confidence back up after her mother… but Bette being her sex slave as 2nd place, is better that winning! And i agree with Tina telling Elizabeth to give it to her at once…holding back something like “you have a brother” is a pretty big thing. Loved it all! PPS
The drought for SRR is over! Until Chapter 104 to come. Thank you. Elizabeth is not giving Bette her space, she ought to since she already overwhelmed not in a good way.
Thanks for the update. I guess Elizabeth didn’t take Tina’s advice to back off a bit and give Bette some space to come to terms with everything. If they keep setting boundaries she’ll eventually catch on I suppose.
THank you for posting. I so love this story and it’s just getting better and better. I can’t believe you have already written up to Chapter 104. Please post as many as you can. Thank you again :)
That was great and hahaha Bette gonna do anything Tina said cause she is Tina’s sex slave now lol and can’t wait to see it happen lol. Please post more, thanks!
Great chapter, I know its hard and nothing can excuse what Elizabeth did 27 years ago but Bette should lether in a little bit. PPS
Wow…Bette’s Mom is really pushing things despite her talk with Tina. There is either something odd about her or she is truly overwhelmed at having Bette back in her life again. Hahahaha…that bet was one Bette or Tina couldn’t lose! PPS Ally!
amazing update!!!!! :)PPS
oh yea mothers can make us feel so guilty without even trying especially when they get in the way of ‘our life’. wats up with elizabeth-this is overkill!!!
I’m so glad your back to writing. Just finished all your updates in one sitting! Please don’t leave us hanging for too long.
Yippee!!! I don’t know how I did it, but I actually opened this story when it had zero views. I don’t think I’d ever done that in a story that wasn’t my own. But anyway, this was great. Kit’s always amazing to have and I can’t wait for at least some of Tina’s ideas for Bette to come about. Is it mean that I want her to have something planned for Tuesday’s dinner? I mean, yes, it would be cruel to make your girlfriend show up for dinner with her absent mother with crotchless panties or something, but it would also be so funny. PPS, Ally!
im with funnyone. tina is contradictory. thx for the update.