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Something so right – chapter 95
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“Were either of you shocked ?”
Finn held his hands out “ Didn’t bother me then and doesn’t bother me now. Whatever lights your candle man – and Bette obviously does. I have seen and heard it all and I’m broad minded “
“Thanks for not judging us “
“You and Bette are you and Bette – just a fact of life. Its not as if you are scary lesbians “
“And what might scary lesbians look like ?”
“Come on – Shane brings some really freaky types home – terrifying sights when all a boy wants to do is get to the milk for his coco pops “
Tina laughed – she rubbed her face
“Has it ever occurred to you that mom is less scary because you are less of a over tall boy and more of a man ?”
Finn looked at his sister – Tina looked at him – he beamed
“You think ?”
“You have grown up and changed so much in the last year – moving to LA has been the right thing for you “
Finn nodded
“It has – and that’s why I am not moving back home – I have a nice life in LA – great digs with such a cool landlord in Shane, good pals, great job and my big sister and her woman always willing to feed me and humour me “
“We might have run you out of town if you hadn’t found digs “
“I messed up your sex life didn’t I ?”
Tina shook her head “Lets just say that on occasions your timing sucked “
“You and Bette are great though – it meant a lot to me that you were there for me”
“You are my brother” Tina said shrugging “Its in the fine print – Bette had it checked by a top lawyer “
Finn laughed “You and Bette are a real laugh you know that ?”
“It helps to keep a positive attitude “ Tina replied “Especially when we are all crammed into a not that big apartment “
Finn sighed “Mom will want me to move back here “
“You just have to say that you have a life in LA “
“Will you back me ?”
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Great Chapter!!! I am glad Sarah is seeing how Bette and Tina belong together. Now I hope Tina’s grandparents will be kind to Bette. I hope the B&T find Tina’s dad. Thank you Ally
That was great and can’t wait to see Bette meet Tina’s grandparents. Please post more, thanks!
I’m going to agree with geekgal’s gay dad theory. Can’t wait for the intro to the grandparents.
I love how Bette and Tina support each other.
something is up with dad, might be gay? dunno but great updates!!! :)PPS
The Niall mystery deepens by the minute. I can’t wait to see what Tina’s grandparents think about Bette. They are young enough though to have a more open mind than some. Absolutely fabulous chapter Ally. PPS!
I think Tina’s dad is gay (and initially hid it) which is why they had an open marriage (so her mom could have sex with others)and was mad when she found out Tina was gay.
It’s almost sad to see this kinda defeated version of Sarah, who went from this formidable woman who her 6’5″ son was scared of to someone who will just let her kids make decisions about her business when she hadn’t been willing to make changes before. It seems like Niall’s devotion was returned in spades if not in quite such an obvious manner. It’s a nuanced thing but you do those so well, Ally. Thanks for posting!
Thanks for the update. I’m so glad Sarah is welcoming Bette this time around. It seems that this experience has softened her, maybe made her think about things more than she had to before. I agree with Jikes, I don’t like to see her feeling defeated but maybe this will eventually make her a stronger person…she’s a fighter.
Wow! The mystery thickens. Thank you for this story. Love it :)
Hello AllyE, Back at the farm and loving it. Good to get Finn’s thoughts on his time with Tina and Bette as well as on their relationship.Bette has been an absolute star in dealing with so much to get them there safe and sound.Tina is trying to sort through things in her head and I feel that she needs to discuss them with her father to get some resolution and closure.Bette and Tina’s baby talk was sweet.Now, where the heck can Tina’s dad be? I want her grand-parents to fall in love with Bette and tell Tina where her dad is.Only by facing problems and talking can things get truly sorted.More plaase of your magical writing and storytelling.Many thanks for it all, Your Loyal Fan.
Thanks for this posting! I was on the same wavelength as geekygal. Wouldn’t it be a strange twist if Niall is gay and the open relationship worked fine because it gave him a chance to dabble in the lifestyle freely. PPS
There are relationships where the strong, vocal partner is really not the strongest but the quiet one the rock. When the rock leaves, the “strong” one wanders about randomly looking for solace. Your 3 pages in like other writers 6 pages. Just detail and depth. So satisfying.
“”Mom isn’t going to be given an alternative ” Finn said” Ally, do you WANT me to hate an entire generation of Kennards? When’s Willow going to show up with her need for world domination? That would just round things out nicely.
Regardless of why Niall left, he is WRONG for abandoning the family business with no one there but Sarah. This is his children’s legacy and he is WRONG for just walking away and letting it possible just fail. I hope this helps Tina havew more respect for her mother. It is soooo easy to be a daddy’s girl and be judgemental. Been there, done that. PPS:o).
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