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    Something so right – Chapter 97

     

    “If we find him we can ask him – its realty something that he sorts out with your mother “

    “I just want things to be fair between them “

    “And which one do you think will get the upper hand ?“

    “At the moment I really do not know “ Tina admitted

    “Where are we going now ?”

    “I want to get some supplies – I’ve got a list” Tina started the car and drove off. Bette was looking out of the window –

    it was a nice town – small and compact. Like all towns though there were new structures being built.

    “Stop the car Ti “

    “What ?”

    “Quick – stop the car “

    Tina eased the car to the side of the road and looked at Bette

    “What the heck ?”

    “Reverse a little bit “

    “Why ?”

    “Please Ti “

    Tina obeyed

    “Okay – stop “

    Tina looked at Bette

    “Do I get an explanation ?”

    Bette pointed to a sign – Tina read it aloud

    “Apartments for sale – new properties – Ashtree Villas, Beachtree Villas and Pineview View “

    “God – you are right – that’s brilliant – I hadn’t heard of it because its obviously new. Bette you are just brilliant”

     

    Tina kissed Bette before turning the car around and heading in the direction of the sign. They drove for five minutes before coming upon a new complex of apartments. Tina parked her car and looked at Bette

    “What now ?”

    “Lets see which one is which “

    They climbed out of the car and walked across the road. It soon became clear that two of the blocks were fully built and lived in – the third was almost finished with workmen still visible in fluorescent jackets.

     

    “I don’t have this down as a retirement complex “ Bette remarked “ and your gran isn’t the retirement complex sort”

    “No – how do I find which one of these he is living in ?”

    “What car is missing ?” Bette asked “Your farm is hardly walking distance from town – did he take the car he always uses to come and pick us up from the airport in ?”

    Comments

    1. Niall is a “baby daddy?” Mette I didn’t see this coming either. I must put in a word for Carolinians. We are not this screwed up. Well, not in NORTH Carolina. SOUTH Carolina, maybe.

    2. DAMN!!!!!!!!!!! Did not see that one coming. The drama queen is back. A new baby, Niall has been a very busy and naughty boy. Tina’s right he is a bastard of the worst kind at that. Can hardly wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.

    3. This is good for Tina to know because she has been soooooooo hard on her mother. I understand having been a “Daddy’s Girl”, but sometimes as adults we need to step back to see a situation clearer. Niall is VERY wrong for letting Tina condone here mother for dating young guys when he sleeping with someone younger than her. That is SOOOOOOOO low. Now they have to worry about ntheir inheritance, because while Tina and her siblings have put in hard work on the farm to make it a success, this new child can stake a claim to the profits from the farm. Now maybe Emma can get some support from the children she gave birth to. PPS :o). And oh yeah GREAT update Drama Queen. Oh yeah, the Queen is STILL on her throne.

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