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Something so right – Chapter 97
Tina went silent and squeezed Bette’s hand
“God I love you Porter “
Bette beamed “That’s good because I love you “
Tina let out a sigh and stared ahead out of the car window
“How long are we going to stay here ?”
“Up to you – now we have a lead we can come back – maybe this evening – do you want to get back to the farm ?”
“I am okay staying here for a while “
“Want something to eat or drink ?”
“No and you don’t either – how many slices of cake did you have ?”
Bette laughed “I was merely being polite “
“You were merely being a gannet “
“Your whole family are great cooks “
“But I don’t make you enough cakes ?”
“You are right – we would be huge if you started cooking “
“I don’t have the time and I have to say that I don’t have the desire – I’m probably not patient enough to be a great old fashioned cook like they are “
“Tina “
“Yeah”
“That car that’s waiting to turn into that road – see it ?”
Tina looked to where Bette was pointing
“I think its his but we are not close enough “
“Well get moving – its not as if he will recognise this car”
Tina turned on the ignition and followed the car down the road to the housing complex. The car they were following parked and they waited until the driver got out. There was no doubt that it was Tina’s father
“Nice little hidey hole “ Tina muttered as she parked their car.
“Ti “
“Yeah “
“Lets just be calm okay – hear what he has to say “
“I know – you might have to remind me again “
“I will – come on “
Niall got two bags of shopping from the car and headed inside. Tina and Bette followed him at a distance – he went into the lobby and pressed the button for the elevator. They waited for a few minutes before Bette ran into the lobby – dragging Tina with her
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(6 votes, average: 4.83 out of 5)
Wow, didn´t see that one coming. Can´t wait for your next update and for Mrs. K to find out.
Niall is a “baby daddy?” Mette I didn’t see this coming either. I must put in a word for Carolinians. We are not this screwed up. Well, not in NORTH Carolina. SOUTH Carolina, maybe.
Maybe it’s Gemma’s baby w/another Daddy? Not Tina’s Daddy. Always the drama queen and we love it!
DAMN!!!!!!!!!!! Did not see that one coming. The drama queen is back. A new baby, Niall has been a very busy and naughty boy. Tina’s right he is a bastard of the worst kind at that. Can hardly wait to see what happens next. Thanks for posting.
Wow!!! I wasn’t expecting that!
This is good for Tina to know because she has been soooooooo hard on her mother. I understand having been a “Daddy’s Girl”, but sometimes as adults we need to step back to see a situation clearer. Niall is VERY wrong for letting Tina condone here mother for dating young guys when he sleeping with someone younger than her. That is SOOOOOOOO low. Now they have to worry about ntheir inheritance, because while Tina and her siblings have put in hard work on the farm to make it a success, this new child can stake a claim to the profits from the farm. Now maybe Emma can get some support from the children she gave birth to. PPS :o). And oh yeah GREAT update Drama Queen. Oh yeah, the Queen is STILL on her throne.
Wow! That’s a shocker. Talk about being blind sighted.
OK… Too much drama in one sitting. It’s nice to see this story back and kicking again. Thanks for the post!
ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so intrigued… please post soon!!! Great chapter!
wow wowwwwwwwww and if this is niels baby he is a peaice of shit!!!!!!!!
Geting complicated! Love it!
OMFG!..Niall have a baby!..Can’t blame Tina for cursing her dad?…this is great Ally!…post soon?…
GREAT update Ally, Can’t wait until Mrs K, Finn And Willow find out.
ok Ally, this story has always been good but now it’s getting rreeaalllllyyyy good! Go Tina – kick his ass!!
Oh Man! Talk about complicated. This is just getting too good! Thank you.
Tinas parents are a nightmare.
Oh shit drama coming!