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Something so right – chapter eleven
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“Thank you “
Bette stood up and moved round so she could wrap her arms around Tina. She had missed her girlfriend very much – weekends were becoming magical and so precious because they spent every moment together. Tina kissed Bette on the lips
“You taste good and that’s even before the coffee “
Bette returned the kiss “ So do you “
For several minutes they stood kissing and cuddling – Tina eased away
“You – wow “
Bette laughed “ Speechless eh ?”
“Something like that “
Bette kissed Tina “You up for a hot date tomorrow night ?”
Tina nodded “ I have something to ask you “
“Yes I think you are gay “ Bette replied laughing
“I know – listen to me okay – I want to move on to the next level with you”
“Tina “
“Hear me out please “
Bette nodded
“I want it to be something special for both of us . Today the studio gave me the chance to have a experience with you like no other. I have to go away on business – its only for three days but the studio will pick up the tab because I’m working on a big deal that we are trying to pull off and I have persuaded my boss that I am the woman to seal the deal. Because we are a lot about show – well – I get a great suite in one of the best hotels . Once the deal is done I also get four days R&R – all expenses paid. “
“You are going away ?” Bette’s face fell
“You are not listening babe – how do you fancy a weeks holiday with me in Hawaii ?”
Bette stared at Tina
“Please say yes honey – James can run the gallery and I was thinking – maybe you will find some great artists to do a show – please Bette -a week away in the sun – just us “
No one had ever swept Bette Porter off her feet before but here was this blonde with infectious smile and soft voice and she had just done that.
Bette pulled Tina into her arms and kissed her lips.
“Is this so you can see me in a bikini ?” she teased
“No – its so I can see you out of a bikini “
“The answer is yes Tina – of course I can come on holiday with you “
Tina beamed “You mean it ? You can leave this behind for a week and come away with me ?”
Bette’s mind skipped to the 97 emails she had received today alone, she thought of the meetings she had and the catalogues she needed to look at in detail — no she didn’t have the time to take a week off.
But then she looked at the blonde who was standing looking at her – she thought of midnight walks on white sandy beaches with her, she thought of lying by the pool sipping something alcoholic in an unnatural shade of orange or pink with an umbrella in – above all she thought about the moment when she would finally taste Tina and she could finally find the courage to tell Tina that she loved her.
“Yes – of course I can come to Hawaii with you “
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another great chapter allie! Thanks! You just validated my vote for me once again. Oh, and there are tons more exervise women to oogle if you go to the gym! Good luck with getting fit.
Too cute:-) can’t get enough of this sweet story PPS
i wanna go on ‘holiday’. all this coming and going, makes a girls head spin. thx
It’s about fucking time! Interpret that any way you wish.
HEy Ally, Thank you for showing the sweetness and romance that Bette and can share. Their partnership here lights up my heart and soul to the wondrs of true love. Both gals are playing this tune perfectly. As ever it is your writing that sparkles and shines. Thank you so much for this and all your other tales. Happy New Year and will try to so better in the feedback stakes. My gratitude and appreciation. Your Loyal Fan.
awesome as usual :D
WOW, this story is amazing ! Thanks! Hope to read the trip to Hawai soon ;-)
Great update, frankly spell anyway you want,lol. i think we get the idea,lol… now i can’t wait for them to go away for a week! :)
Great as usual – love Tina running Bette down to size – surprize who is the athlete in this relationship??
I truly can’t get enough of this…and “you are dating someone who has the biggest reputation of any lesbian in a very lesbian city” makes me grin. Hope the trip will not spell gallery trouble for Bette though
Hi Ally – I’m with you on the spelling; can’t text for the life of me. I love this story, this Bette, this Tina. All I can say is, God you’re good!
OMG, OMG, OMG!!!! I can’t wait to go to Hawaii!!!!!! This story just keeps getting better and better. PLEEEEEEEEASE post soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Once again, one of your loyal fans checking in. I loved this chapter. Can’t wait for the Hawaii trip…looks like Tina is up for the task! PPS
Glad Helena didn’t blow a gasket when Tina told her who she was dating she needs the support of her friends. Can’t wait for the girls to get to Hawaii and lose a lot of clothes. PPS
oh yay! PPS
As usuall Allyemmerson , great job and I cannot wait to read the Hawaii trip… bet its going to be a sizzler
This is so good, B&T are so cute and sweet and can’t wait to see they at Hawaii. Glad to see Helena didn’t freak out when Tina tell her she dating Bette. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
I love the sweet and oh so love the dirty! :) Tina and Bette are so fun in this story. I can’t wait to read about Hawaii.
geezzz Ally, they better rent some scuba gear in Hawaii, I think they’ll need the oxagen tanks. Md
of course, where tina leads bette will follow…that ass…is hot!!!! pps
Great update Alley! Finally Bette and Tina on a holiday together. They hardly ever leave WEHO even in the fan fics. Bring on Hawaii!
Hi Ally, I had such a horrid day at work today. I’m so glad to find that you have posted this chapter when I got back. Reading it makes me feel a whole world better. Thanks a million! Hope you’ll post the next one real soon. Can’t wait to read about them in Hawaii…
Lamentamini – when i write it its “come” because i am such a pedant that i cannot use predictive texts – so all my text messages are 2-3 pages long because i have to use the proper word – mind you i am an old so and so. i know that doesn’t clear anything up but i thought i would offer my opinion.
I really, really love this story. I like that Tina has all this cool stuff in her background like being a great athlete. Bette would admire something like that.. as long as it came with brains as well. Can’t wait for Hawaii. How exciting.
“The answer is yes Tina – of course I can come on holiday with you ” And come you shall, Ms. Porter. or is it cum? Anyone care to settle this once and for all?
LOL@ogling the exercise lady. XD